VN - Ren'Py - Powers That Be [Ch. 25 - Training Part 1] [Burst Out Games]

These adult visual novels are always tricky, most are never completed, most fall short of their intended purpose, and most mean nothing to me.

However, there are those small few that end up capturing a special place in my heart. Like this one, for example, it's a slow-burn, yet a powerfully romantic story.

Burst Out Games, if you bother reading these reviews I just wanted to say thank you for this awesome first release, and hope you continue to deliver quality writing and quality content.

I agree with Pyrofox what's the point on giving us choices when the MC is still going to do what he is told by a jealous girl I mean don't get me wrong this game is good, but it would even be better if the MC sticks with the choices we make.

Quickly becoming one of my favorite games. I definitely recommend it.

Pros:

• Beautiful renders
• Lots of gorgeous girl and each with a distinct look
• I found the premise of the story to be very interesting, different from the usual stuff you get these days.
• The writing is quite good.
• I felt emotionally connected to both the MC and niece
• Some of my favorite lewd content of any game being made.

Cons:

• The animation was on the average side, it could use a bit of improvement

The mind control aspect (since it's not the MC with the power) may not be to everyone's taste, but I think the majority of people will really enjoy this game. I’m looking forward to future updates. Keep up the great work dev

There are a lot of things that I do not like about this game. For starters, the dialogue in this game is just absolutely terrible. I got tired of seeing the word "legit" by the third chapter. The models for the goddaughter and the ex-wife are both hideous. The only female render that stood out to me was Gloria's. I hope that relationship is developed further. Also, the MC lacks any agency over his choices. Most of the choices in this game either are of no consequence in this stage of the game or all of the choices lead to the same conclusion. Furthermore I do not like the fact that there is nothing you can do to get out of this. What is the point of giving me choices if none of them matter or change anything? Honestly, at this point in the game you're forced down a path so hard that it may as well just be a kinetic novel.