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im a fan of incest with mom, but that wont happen unfortunately.. or maybe by some weird ass miracle where you find your mom somehow again, but she just lost her memory on that accident and slowly begins to remember again.. becauuuuse... having sex with the mc, slowly reminds her of having sex with her husband/your father.. or something?.. i dont know.. MILFS for the win!
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Looks promising so far, there aren't too many MILF themed games out there in the first place. Out of those that have, most seem to go for the perpetually horny slut look which I'm not a big fan of.
Don't know what are your future plans for, but so far these character models look appetizing. Only suggestion I have for you as a first time developer (I presume) with limited experience and hardware capabilities, it's best to stick to a linear kinetic novel format, stick with just HS2 and Renpy to reduce complexity.
If you are not particularly good at writing out a full story plus the need to write in your native Chinese then translate to English, you can also borrow from the large number of detective themed online novels in the Chinese sphere and make appropriate modifications accordingly to speed up development.
While there are a lot of first time developers who start out with a good game concept and nice renders, sadly the track record for failures and abandonment is pretty high.
Best of luck in your development!
Don't know what are your future plans for, but so far these character models look appetizing. Only suggestion I have for you as a first time developer (I presume) with limited experience and hardware capabilities, it's best to stick to a linear kinetic novel format, stick with just HS2 and Renpy to reduce complexity.
If you are not particularly good at writing out a full story plus the need to write in your native Chinese then translate to English, you can also borrow from the large number of detective themed online novels in the Chinese sphere and make appropriate modifications accordingly to speed up development.
While there are a lot of first time developers who start out with a good game concept and nice renders, sadly the track record for failures and abandonment is pretty high.
Best of luck in your development!
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Thanks for your feedback!
I've actually already planned out a complete linear storyline.
My biggest concern is still the drop in text quality due to translation.
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If you plan to include things like ntr/sharing, lesbian, female domination, or futa in future releases. You can put the tags in the genre spoiler.
Meanwhile, MILF means MOTHER I'd Like to Fuck. Meaning anyone with a kid can be a MILF if someone wants to fuck them. Matures is it's own category, and in no way means they are mothers, just older. A teenage mom who someone wants to fuck is a MILF.I mean... most of us are at THIS age, so mature women are usually the preference (at least for me and my guys)
Unfortunately I dont know the names of your characters yet, soooo... Hanna better be one hell of a MILF or...
It's almost as if mother and mature don't mean the same thing.
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First release got me hooked enough that I wrote a review for the first time. Keep up the good work dev
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Based on your interaction in this thread so far, I would say your English is ok colloquially although you might experience some challenges in narrating certain parts of the story.Thanks for your feedback!
I've actually already planned out a complete linear storyline.
My biggest concern is still the drop in text quality due to translation.
The best way to do this is probably to run the script through an online translator first and then make manual edits accordingly. It's not a foolproof plan, but it helps to keep up the developmental pace. Hopefully if your story is engaging enough, this handicap can be overlooked.
An earlier poster was not wrong in saying if you follow the pattern of working on Chinese followed by a line by line translation to English, the work will end up overwhelming as the versions pile up.
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The text effects are frequent, and they often override the choice for instant text in the Options menu. I'm sure it took additional programming to add these effects: delayed text, sliding text and screen shaking. It doesn't add anything. It's just m-
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Thanks for your feedback. Are there any parts of the translation that are problematic?
If possible, I'd like to note them down for future adjustments.
I did use some translators to help speed up the translation process. It took me about two weeks to translate version 0.1,
which I think is still within an acceptable range.
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I'm sorry to hear that your experience wasn't great.
My was trying to use these text effects to convey the characters' tone of voice or state of mind,and sometimes I just intentionally make the text hard to read.
In the next versions, I'll try to reduce these effects to avoid making the reading experience too 'flashy '.
Thx for ur reply!
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Well, this game does seem very crazy, that's for sure, and curious where this is going.
Thank you so very much for this game thus far, and looking forward for more!!!
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Thank you so very much for this game thus far, and looking forward for more!!!
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Thanks a lot for your review.
Did you finish all the content in just 15 minutes? That's really fast. I was expecting the 0.1 version to take around 45 minutes.
I'm wondering, you mentioned that the text effects in Ren'Py are a bit annoying. Could it be because I added some special effects to express the text that caused the issue?
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To be fair I'm a pretty fast reader, so you probably should not use me as a benchmark. I'd say for the average joe it's about 25-30 mins of content.
Yeah, its definitely the effects stuff. Renpy is old af and it's not optimized in the slightest so even the bare minimum in terms of effects causes friction. Not the glitchy text, the normal conversation ones. You know the typewriter/fade effect you made? It looks great, but any fast reader is going to click faster than the engine can keep up with, making that 0.1s delay I mentioned.
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Too much meme and text effect for me, I know you are trying to make the story theme not so dark by adding some funny plot, but to me it is just some plot with some not funny jokes, the effect is not well at all.
The Lis in the preview photos are ok, but the models are a bit different in the actual game, I think you should consider to upgrade your computer in order to get a better performance.
I played in the chinese version so I don't know about how the game is in eng version, but the describe of the story are quite simple, sometimes boring. 雖然你說你關心故事的質素多於翻譯質素但很遺憾的是個人覺得故事描寫只能算是一般.
Btw, 建議你可以向f95其他同樣是中文母語的作者交流一下建模和故事寫作的心得,就我所知是台灣人的製作人有concert girls, new horizon 和soulmate, 大陸的製作人則有mayfly.
The Lis in the preview photos are ok, but the models are a bit different in the actual game, I think you should consider to upgrade your computer in order to get a better performance.
I played in the chinese version so I don't know about how the game is in eng version, but the describe of the story are quite simple, sometimes boring. 雖然你說你關心故事的質素多於翻譯質素但很遺憾的是個人覺得故事描寫只能算是一般.
Btw, 建議你可以向f95其他同樣是中文母語的作者交流一下建模和故事寫作的心得,就我所知是台灣人的製作人有concert girls, new horizon 和soulmate, 大陸的製作人則有mayfly.