Josh M Spicer
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Jean is this way even in comics, would be pretty authentic representation honestly.Hope we get Jean in a netori route
Agree with everything...And I'll add something... Some arts are looking a little strange with all the big necks, but I guess they intend to update some arts in future.Hey Gunsmoke! I finished the demo, and would like to present my criticism.
First of all I do really enjoy it, this will be a great game finished.
Some thing could be improved:
-It is hard to see all the variations of the room scenes (mainly the day clothet versions, as the girls are rarely in their rooms in the morning), coming from someone who likes to experience everything a game has to offer preferably ingame. A changeable clothing system would be appreciated (and hopefully variants of the x-men clothes, training clothes, swimsuit and so on)
-Maybe show unavailable scene buttons that require powers with an indicator of the needed power
-If this demo only ads bonus scene for invisibility, then maybe the game should tell you that when choosing, not to miss anything. Obiously not needed in the final release.
-Rogue and Kurt accent is sometimes unreadable, maybe dial it back a bit (speaking as someone who learned english as a second language)
-It's a shame the shower peep scenes are not repeatable
-Skip time button to a more reachable permanent HUD button, with a Next day button maybe
-The mansion floor buttons are a mess with the changing locations. I have to constatnly read what I'm clicking instead of subconciously knowing. Showing all four buttons and greying out the one you are on would help this.
-The art is over all great, the only one I'm a bit iffy about is Kitty dancing, her face looks a bit AI (not accusing, just the vibe of it)
-Maybe in one of the menus, you could show the girl's schedule, which day what part of the map should we search for them. (assuming it is a set weekly rotation)
Some suggestions for future content:
-Something I really liked in SU that improved those scenes were subtle animations like the Wonder Woman sex scene after, when her breasts slowly rise as she breaths, or Nubia's blowjob after when the shine in her eyes move sightly. Some of those simple touches could elevate the scenes.
-As this game is more on the romantic side, compared to SU, fingering and cunnilingus scenes, or something you do to the girl to get her off would be welcome.
-Maybe beside the changeable outfit, a changeable name option for the girls, to call them on their hero names of birth names, could add to the game.
And for scenes involving powers:
-For nullification, skinship with Rogue obviously
-Stuck-in-wall scene with Kitty, as you nullify her while she runs through a wall
-For invisiblein their rooms, we could peep on some masturbation action, finger or dildo
-And for invisibility, Jean should know we are there, and maybe she indulges us, showing a bit more, like bend down for soap intentionally at our direction or other teases.
-For the third power I've got nothing.
Thanks for the game! Best wishes!
I hope so too. Rogue chin looks a tad too masculine....but I guess they intend to update some arts in future.
That's partially Evolution's art style fault, I guess.I hope so too. Rogue chin looks a tad too masculine.
That would involve a lot more work. I think we just need to think creatively around the problem.tuff like... Post release or something, outside of patreon as a patch? I have seen quite a few games use that as a way to avoid the hammer from Patreon, which also allo
Thanks for the suggestions. This was not supposed to be leaked, it's designed for patron input in helping create and craft the game via feedback. With this being a small game with a very short dev timeline, we're hoping to support places like this with v1.0's that go free, and give supporters more value in the earlier stages..
Hey Gunsmoke! I finished the demo, and would like to present my criticism.
First of all I do really enjoy it, this will be a great game finished.
Some thing could be improved:
-It is hard to see all the variations of the room scenes (mainly the day clothet versions, as the girls are rarely in their rooms in the morning), coming from someone who likes to experience everything a game has to offer preferably ingame. A changeable clothing system would be appreciated (and hopefully variants of the x-men clothes, training clothes, swimsuit and so on)
-Maybe show unavailable scene buttons that require powers with an indicator of the needed power
-If this demo only ads bonus scene for invisibility, then maybe the game should tell you that when choosing, not to miss anything. Obiously not needed in the final release.
-Rogue and Kurt accent is sometimes unreadable, maybe dial it back a bit (speaking as someone who learned english as a second language)
-It's a shame the shower peep scenes are not repeatable
-Skip time button to a more reachable permanent HUD button, with a Next day button maybe
-The mansion floor buttons are a mess with the changing locations. I have to constatnly read what I'm clicking instead of subconciously knowing. Showing all four buttons and greying out the one you are on would help this.
-The art is over all great, the only one I'm a bit iffy about is Kitty dancing, her face looks a bit AI (not accusing, just the vibe of it)
-Maybe in one of the menus, you could show the girl's schedule, which day what part of the map should we search for them. (assuming it is a set weekly rotation)
Some suggestions for future content:
-Something I really liked in SU that improved those scenes were subtle animations like the Wonder Woman sex scene after, when her breasts slowly rise as she breaths, or Nubia's blowjob after when the shine in her eyes move sightly. Some of those simple touches could elevate the scenes.
-As this game is more on the romantic side, compared to SU, fingering and cunnilingus scenes, or something you do to the girl to get her off would be welcome.
-Maybe beside the changeable outfit, a changeable name option for the girls, to call them on their hero names of birth names, could add to the game.
And for scenes involving powers:
-For nullification, skinship with Rogue obviously
-Stuck-in-wall scene with Kitty, as you nullify her while she runs through a wall
-For invisiblein their rooms, we could peep on some masturbation action, finger or dildo
-And for invisibility, Jean should know we are there, and maybe she indulges us, showing a bit more, like bend down for soap intentionally at our direction or other teases.
-For the third power I've got nothing.
Thanks for the game! Best wishes!
So, If I got it right...The game is intended to be finished in 8-9 months?That would involve a lot more work. I think we just need to think creatively around the problem.
Thanks for the suggestions. This was not supposed to be leaked, it's designed for patron input in helping create and craft the game via feedback. With this being a small game with a very short dev timeline, we're hoping to support places like this with v1.0's that go free, and give supporters more value in the earlier stages.
But thanks for the great write up.
Total dev time yes, that is the goal. We have a good idea of the assets left to be created (not everything made it in this), and the time associated with those. With 3 more active months that would put us at 8.25 and we can trim off some of that next time with efficiencies we have learned.So, If I got it right...The game is intended to be finished in 8-9 months?
There will be three tracks for the MC. Good/Neutral/Bad. You're getting one of those tracks currently.I liked it can't wait to see more of this game also questions is mc always going to let other walk all over him ? And are there going to be other marvel girls or is it just x-men girls only
Well one powers is psychic like the professor and other one neutralizers them in future updates does that answer your question if not I got nothing,I have a Question, how much different between power we choose at begin of the game, right now Invisibility power will get us to peeping girl in shower, but what about the other 2 power?