HTML Project One [v6] [ConstiX]

[Nordyzera]

I'm really stuck, can someone give the save after the quest 'Open The Diary Follow The Plan'

 

[Darth Sidious]

Game Over. You got kicked from my follow list.

 

[r3in3r]

Yeah this has to be one of the worst html games I have ever played lol

 

[b99]

Day 1 I go to work and then the day automatically ends after clicking on a room that has no content. Day 2 I try to go to the kitchen to eat after work instead of exploring, only to be kicked out because of an event with the stepmother bending over. Then the day automatically ends and I starve to death. Now I go back to rewatching the obnoxious auto scrolling intro because I hadn't made a save 1 minute into the game and wonder if this is even worth my time.

 

[Julius]

My dude, "The changes I made are decent" is not a patch note. It's barely even information.

 

[Kaos_Theory]

There's a metric fuck ton of things missing from this that could be used to improve upon it, for starters you imply that we need strength to remain in the game and to defend ourselves from the father figure, yet the game almost exclusively refuses to allow us to work out and practically forces us to work almost daily which decreases the strength of the player thus making him weaker and almost guaranteed to be beaten/kicked out resulting in a game over screen, if you wanted to make this a 'difficult game' with hard challenges this is not the best way to go about it, it's just super frustrating for the majority of your player base

The only challenging thing about this game now is that it's insanely unfinished and has more holes in it than Swiss cheese. If you can fix all these inconsistencies then maybe it'll be something to come back to because the idea of fighting against the parental system to have the chance to win out eventually is an intriguing idea, but not when the player has a 99.9% of guaranteed failure which it feels like at this moment in time.

The whole needing to eat thing is cool but it needs to be better implemented, there is a very small box on the left pane that says life which is actually linked to whether you eat or not, but this is not explaiend in any way shape or form, new players might not be aware that life = a neccessity to eat to stay alive in order to play the game, it's a flawed concept but it's a neat idea. Make everything easier to understand for everyone maybe even have a small tutorial explaining the systems used.

I'm only saying this in the hopes that looking into and possibly changing these things would net you more people looking into and possibly trying your project/

 

[IDontGetWomen]

This is just ass.

Like you didn't even make a difficult game like you say, you made an impossible game that literally has no ounce of sense behind it. This isn't difficult, it's just a chore to play. There's no explanation as to what even gets rid of you or what happens. I'm literally following the guide and the father still randomly decides to kick me out. My "worked out" stat (whatever the fuck that is) keeps going into the negative, and I never have an option to work out. And if it's to do with the job, then going to work doesn't increase or decrease it either.

 

[Kaos_Theory]

This is just ass.

Like you didn't even make a difficult game like you say, you made an impossible game that literally has no ounce of sense behind it. This isn't difficult, it's just a chore to play. There's no explanation as to what even gets rid of you or what happens. I'm literally following the guide and the father still randomly decides to kick me out. My "worked out" stat (whatever the fuck that is) keeps going into the negative, and I never have an option to work out. And if it's to do with the job, then going to work doesn't increase or decrease it either.

An option appears, randomly it feels like, to 'work out' but in my 3 or so runs testing things, it only ever showed up once per run-through, even if you cheat the value to its max of 4 and your strength to 50, it still decreases because you can't increase your strength at home past 30, nor does the option to workout at home show up. Going to work does not do anything for your strength except serve to decrease it further, meanwhile, your (step)father gains strength from bedroom activities with the (step)mom, it's not even trying to hide that it's designed to literally fuck the player over.

 

[Aioto]

Working out happens at afternoon and you need to not have gone to work to be home at that time. Your strength does max at 30 and you can't work out anymore but the father's strength con keep going up so don't take you time. The best way to play this is to cheat money and forget about going to work unless it's to buy items.

 

[Killer94]

can someone help me understand what the dev meant by this

I can't use "brain" it farted when I tried to understand its meaning

 

[Constix]

Yeah this has to be one of the worst html games I have ever played lol

Thank you

 

[Constix]

There's a metric fuck ton of things missing from this that could be used to improve upon it, for starters you imply that we need strength to remain in the game and to defend ourselves from the father figure, yet the game almost exclusively refuses to allow us to work out and practically forces us to work almost daily which decreases the strength of the player thus making him weaker and almost guaranteed to be beaten/kicked out resulting in a game over screen, if you wanted to make this a 'difficult game' with hard challenges this is not the best way to go about it, it's just super frustrating for the majority of your player base

The only challenging thing about this game now is that it's insanely unfinished and has more holes in it than Swiss cheese. If you can fix all these inconsistencies then maybe it'll be something to come back to because the idea of fighting against the parental system to have the chance to win out eventually is an intriguing idea, but not when the player has a 99.9% of guaranteed failure which it feels like at this moment in time.

The whole needing to eat thing is cool but it needs to be better implemented, there is a very small box on the left pane that says life which is actually linked to whether you eat or not, but this is not explaiend in any way shape or form, new players might not be aware that life = a neccessity to eat to stay alive in order to play the game, it's a flawed concept but it's a neat idea. Make everything easier to understand for everyone maybe even have a small tutorial explaining the systems used.

I'm only saying this in the hopes that looking into and possibly changing these things would net you more people looking into and possibly trying your project/

My friend first of all thank you for your time writing this review.
What you are saying is absoulutly correct, But there is this thing called making expirience(I don't have any).
Meaning I am currently making game at my mental copacity to play as player(So i did not know what is optimal), that is why am getting some expirience by making game, thank you for your time writing this review(it is helping me alot).
Please give review next time i will try to solve everything you mentioned.
Also my friend am not a quitter even if i don't make money i will still make the game (because they will be helpful for future project and i didn't mean the realporn games).

 

[Constix]

where do i find shrine

Sorry man that day when i posted the update, it was night 3am exauted, i did not remove shrine quest,it is not implimented,
there are other quests and scenes you can get , meaning don't be depended on guide. there is are 3 story scenes submision level 2,
as submision level goes up scenes are updated .
well newly added scene are yet to added because majority of time of mine gone making adjustment coding.
if you follow guide only you will leave out scenes.

 

[Constix]

My dude, "The changes I made are decent" is not a patch note. It's barely even information.

heres what i did

storie aligning and quest coding of submission 1 to 2 - done

parent bedroom--submision 1 teasing scenes ---done

bathroom shower events.--random events- -done

livingroom event sub1 =done

kitchen events = done

weekly events = As submision level goes up new scenes will unlock

mc---Level 2
lock scenes-----
using lock on door while father in room
afternoon, while father is in bedroom, use lock to lock him in room and talk to mother- to get scene

Level 2
give strong alcohol to father at night- again use lockpick on door night take her to your room

 

[Constix]

Working out happens at afternoon and you need to not have gone to work to be home at that time. Your strength does max at 30 and you can't work out anymore but the father's strength con keep going up so don't take you time. The best way to play this is to cheat money and forget about going to work unless it's to buy items.

Don't need to cheat the money as your submision level goes up you make more money, unlock scenes, unlock strength limit.

 

[coopshire]

Offcourse it is hard, but if I wanted to make all game I could think of in one go it would take me me 5 years, what is your point, look brother I been playing this games seens 2016 and am at a point where i could not enjoy those pesky games where you just have to click without doing anything and you just get sex just by clicking, where is game .

To make this game it took me 1 and half month.
This game has stages meaning without doing certains thing you won't move to next stage.
A hint from me.
When you unlock night call, use 2 alcohol on stepdad before doing anything to her .
This game will give you feeling of bastard by the end.

This game is for veterans players like myself,
You think adult games with linear story good wait for few month you'll start to hate them.
Just because you didn't make it to the end.
Sorry if I seems like bullying you, hell i have decent family, am not sole provider, i wrote that for money , but after seeing some likes i felt good very good. Am really honestly speaking here.

Also for you my friend thank you for your review, we will talking eachother through many threads of my future games don't be stranger.

My friend why don't you give it your best shot and try to reach the end.

I enjoy challenges, but at what point does it become monotonous doing the same thing over and over. And with zero purpose. It's game over because I didn't eat food? But I can only go to the kitchen at certain times. And there is zero reason explaining why I must work out.

If youre trying to add challenges, create puzzles, events that set you back, or have very difficult choices that help one stat or reduce another. So far, this has very little reward factor.

 

[Constix]

I enjoy challenges, but at what point does it become monotonous doing the same thing over and over. And with zero purpose. It's game over because I didn't eat food? But I can only go to the kitchen at certain times. And there is zero reason explaining why I must work out.

If youre trying to add challenges, create puzzles, events that set you back, or have very difficult choices that help one stat or reduce another. So far, this has very little reward factor.

Hmm, okay. Fine, I'll do it. Even though I don't have enough experience, I'll use all of my brainpower. Twenty days of sleepless nights, here we go again.

 

[Snoopy_H]

still unplayable demo

 

[Wen I Say]

"It Seems You Have To Do Something, Use Brain, And Yes It Not Bug" <------ This is not a hint You can be a tad bit clearer guy

 

[coopshire]

Hmm, okay. Fine, I'll do it. Even though I don't have enough experience, I'll use all of my brainpower. Twenty days of sleepless nights, here we go again.

No one is forcing you to work that kind of schedule. Im just providing feedback. If you are looking to improve it, and possibly make money off it, these are things the average person will want. Your niche group wont provide as much funding as a general accepted audience.