1.70 star(s) 3 Votes

IceKream

Newbie
May 27, 2018
54
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I'd like to see the dev play this game and realize its ridiculous to expect everyone to play just as accurately without any inside information. Add on the fact that there's no foreseeable rewards and that just turns everyone away from trying.

Hard game =/= fun. Multiple choices and rewards = fun.
 
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cniht

Newbie
Jun 6, 2017
72
90
Suggest this one goes back to the drawing board regarding implementation of gameplay and how information is presented to the player. The typing scroll of the print (Time waster), the lack of hints or direction (hard/vague goals), lot of improvement needed on just presentation before one even questions content.
 

Kaos_Theory

Member
Apr 18, 2019
356
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My friend first of all thank you for your time writing this review.
What you are saying is absoulutly correct, But there is this thing called making expirience(I don't have any).
Meaning I am currently making game at my mental copacity to play as player(So i did not know what is optimal), that is why am getting some expirience by making game, thank you for your time writing this review(it is helping me alot).
Please give review next time i will try to solve everything you mentioned.
Also my friend am not a quitter even if i don't make money i will still make the game (because they will be helpful for future project and i didn't mean the realporn games).
This was just a collection of points in a rather unstructured ramble from me.

Essentially what I'm suggesting is this

  1. Make the game difficult by adding in challenges by all means, but the challenges need to make sense to the plot and story of the game.

  2. Make sure that there are hefty rewards for completing challenges, nobody wants to work extra hard on a really tough challenge if the reward doesn't match the level of energy/time expended to complete said challenge.

  3. Give the player some details about what things do, even the most impossible games give the player a small guide/tutorial upon start, just enough to give them the bare minimum knowledge so they're not entering blindly into things.

  4. I don't expect any new dev to be perfect and perhaps my earlier ramble was a little unfair in the way it was structured, but when players play your game they will sometimes offer opinions in ways that do not immediately appear helpful.

  5. Give pointers on why the players need to work, what submission does and who it's applied to, just basic things that at least in the first 4-5 days will give the player a heads up, once that initial trial period has ended then remove or stop the help/guides since by that point if the player is paying attention should be aware of what to watch out for and how best to advance things.

I hope the above is helpful in your further creation of this title.
 

Tyrranus

Well-Known Member
May 4, 2017
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give dad alcohol, lock door, strip stepmom..... dad busts in room and kicks me out of my own home despite me having about 1.5x more strength


what
the
hell
 

TrainerMan

Newbie
Feb 19, 2018
35
15
give dad alcohol, lock door, strip stepmom..... dad busts in room and kicks me out of my own home despite me having about 1.5x more strength


what
the
hell
You need to give him two [bottles of] alcohol. Also I think you might need multiple viagra because I couldn't continue the scene with just one. Not sure if a bug to be honest.
 

Tyrranus

Well-Known Member
May 4, 2017
1,332
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You need to give him two [bottles of] alcohol. Also I think you might need multiple viagra because I couldn't continue the scene with just one. Not sure if a bug to be honest.
Aye I ended up making it work not sure if it took 2 or 3 bottles and then the 'submission level' didnt increase so I had to use the console to manually level that up

the idea is sound but this game is a shit show of bugs and terrible writing sadly
 

yozara

Member
Feb 2, 2018
251
58
it's very odd, I was twice as strong as the dad (he was at 11 I was at 22) I bought a lock and locked my room, but shen I undressed the stepmom, the dad barged in and kicked me out.

I don't understand the rules of the game
 

Tyrranus

Well-Known Member
May 4, 2017
1,332
1,449
it's very odd, I was twice as strong as the dad (he was at 11 I was at 22) I bought a lock and locked my room, but shen I undressed the stepmom, the dad barged in and kicked me out.

I don't understand the rules of the game
you need to get him blackout drunk ON TOP of the door lock
 

coopshire

Newbie
Sep 20, 2018
47
63
Getting a lot better. I still think the punishment for not working out in 2-3 days is too much, but editing the html code easily fixes that problem.

Lockpicks are busted. Doesnt work.
 
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firefall132

Member
Jan 28, 2018
160
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I quite disagree. The synopsis plus the title tells you everything you need to know about the game.
Yeah, 30 seconds of trying out the online version and having it randomly skip time because I walked into the kitchen and seeing the MC's strength degrade because he's too busy desperately grinding cash for food to workout really makes a point that the game's gonna be pretty unfun.
 
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Constix

Member
Game Developer
Sep 3, 2017
217
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Yeah, 30 seconds of trying out the online version and having it randomly skip time because I walked into the kitchen and seeing the MC's strength degrade because he's too busy desperately grinding cash for food to workout really makes a point that the game's gonna be pretty unfun.
hello am the dev i got that alot for previous version but try playing v.5 meaning it different,I worked on lot of things
online was till v.4, it is pretty hard also give your opinion after you v.5 sorry you have to download it, itch.io does not allow game over 300mb. current game size is 1.5gb, thanks you.
 
1.70 star(s) 3 Votes