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dingo4life

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I do enjoy the the concept behind this, I don't actually mind there is no grand deep story, it's not why I play porn games or even games in general.
That said I do have some issues.
The police will basically just pop up constantly and seducing them seems to not lower criminality.
There is seemingly a lot of small things that make me think you are very new to making HTML games. A bit too many to list.
I suggest you go through Vegetarian Zombies youtube guide, it's old but if you are using Sugarcube 2 (as is standard) it should be no problem and you will probably be able to fix and spot a whole lot of issues within a couple of days depending on your work schedule.
 

manscout

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Is it impossible to make it to the town without losing the MC's virginity? I can make it to the forest and then be found by the police, but it seems the only way to progress after that is to play dead after the officers rape her.
 
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Joe Steel

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I'd like to say that I thought this game had promise, but it has the exact opposite. The developer isn't designing a game that is fun to play by analyzing what makes for fun decisions in games, they are just piling on whatever is easiest to program. That kind of developer mindset can't make a good game.

I don't hope that the developer keeps on developing this game. I hope the opposite: that the developer realize that the game is a turd, that you cannot polish a turd, and that it's better to start over (maybe with some of the same premises) and design a new game. with a new mindset, that is fun from the start.
 

-Evie-

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May 8, 2017
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Grammar and stuff can (and should) be corrected, I can look past that, played plenty of MTL games. This game happens fast. Took like, 3 minutes for my horny brother to try to fuck me, which is weird. I don't think the first thing siblings want to do when at some education camp is fuck each other.

Currently.. 2/5. Pictures are good, but they're still just real porn pics you grab online.
 

Joe_Moma

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Mar 1, 2022
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I do enjoy the the concept behind this, I don't actually mind there is no grand deep story, it's not why I play porn games or even games in general.
That said I do have some issues.
The police will basically just pop up constantly and seducing them seems to not lower criminality.
There is seemingly a lot of small things that make me think you are very new to making HTML games. A bit too many to list.
I suggest you go through Vegetarian Zombies youtube guide, it's old but if you are using Sugarcube 2 (as is standard) it should be no problem and you will probably be able to fix and spot a whole lot of issues within a couple of days depending on your work schedule.
Thanks, yeah I’m a bit new to Sugarcube. I was making unity games before that, so there is still a lot of things to learn.
I did fix some of the bugs, bad spelling and white spaces in 0.8.2a and I’ll probably slow down the pacing in 0.9a update, at least in the beginning. Don’t want it to be grindy tho.
 
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jferdi

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Virus on the AnonFile link? Or did I click the wrong button?

Edit: Nope, it was just an indiduous pop-up ad that looks like anonfile's page.
 
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pretorian man

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This game has improved greatly. I'm looking forward

Btw, could it be possible to change "Borther" to someone else? I'm not th biggest incest fan and it's abit off putting
 

Joe_Moma

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Mar 1, 2022
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When can we go into the city?
It will be released in DLC, after I’ll complete the main game (after v1.0)
This game has improved greatly. I'm looking forward

Btw, could it be possible to change "Borther" to someone else? I'm not th biggest incest fan and it's abit off putting
Thanks! I’ll probably add some sort of a character creation panel, so you could chose relationships between characters. It will take some time tho, decent amount of dialogues has bro/sis in them.
 
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Space_Cow99

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Player: Female remains
Second character: (I took great thinking) Father, boyfriend, Teacher, Neighbor, Uncle. Childhood Friend?
Was thinking I had.
Any characteristics we could change for female character and secondary character?

Room details add as well? I was just thinking about it bit more. Feels like blank canvas most the rooms when you explore the camp. Is there only one season or multiple seasons?

It left me wondering quite lot: time is not measured most in the time she was in camp. So is there way to calculate seasons passing or not?
 
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Space_Cow99

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Ran into a strange bug where game loop, at farm after escape, and another time after hospital. Seems pain doesn't disappear.
Makes me think only possible pain occur would anal hemorrhoid bleed -> medicine and doctors would sent her home on 90 day prescription, Pain 2 possible would be, prolapse uterus because constant coitus. Her uterus came out. Her uterus would require surgery re-stapled in. so constant sex would be impossible. Unless she had orgasm it would make sense she had pregnancy.

People don't watch SEX sent ER I taking it who made this.


Food at farm is inadequate surplus, if your trying make person pregnant you have feed often, flood uterus with device keep uterus open versus ramming extensively. Its kind foolish knowledge. If farmers were trying to knock up female player they have devices like turkey basters and
Speculum/ diopter or dioptra open up her uterus enough to shoot multiple donors in.
Other such knowledge would be making her pregnant would be making certain she have orgasm + filling her with sperm.

Other crazy thing bothers me is that kitchen staff don't make other meals or show how their making a meal. You can find gifs: ,
Clothing is very poor choices: shirt + pants. (is she a man?)
Clothing preferences: dress, stockings and shoes; blouse + skirt and shoes: undergarments depends on what goes.
there no camp store: I think used, fresh, spent panties would be something girl in question could sell for money at store if one existed.
If forest entry isn't barred gathering wood, herbs and other necessities would be a thing.
If she was lactating and pregnant she could sell her milk to store.
Doctor could check her how along she pregnant for, speed it up. give her pill make it twins?

Spelling/grammar is must in this game.
Uncle's bed is place where she is sleeping when she finally gets free.
I assume she is free she has guest bed.
Camp's surrounding has some guards, and fencing perimeter and authority feeling. Instead your saying camp has has a abident feeling. Not good word to use. Give more description next time please. Word should changed to Obedient yet there is bullying occurring and rape. Maybe choose male dominant aura, where women are being touched up and felt up brazenly in camp and being inspected upon.

I leave this for any authors and developers to help there crowd psyche feel more real.





Forest ever go to ocean? That would been hot sex just thinking...forest - farm - police -> hospital - town.
Forest -ocean means boat or surf board to town. hey no offense intended it might make txt adventure longer. You don't have npcs yet like sea creatures like mermen, old dude by light house or fishermen. Ocean means would been super hot. Surfers and divers?

I realize the pill mentor gives after morning pill. Doesn't alleviate pain.
 
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sasaihui

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Be patient. The author personally gave it to us for free before. He will give us a new version when he sees fit.
 
3.00 star(s) 36 Votes