VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Project SAGE [Act 1 v0.19d] [Paperwork]

  1. 4.00 star(s)

    benpk34

    Overall - 7/10
    Recommend for corruption fans, however MC doesn't reach full corruption - game not completed
    Game is slow, builds up the corruption. (Note: Low amount of Hscenes at the start -> more over time)
    Story - 6.5/10
    You mostly play as a very attractive female MC -> lose family, live with foster family -> start a new life with foster family
    Writing is mostly about just daily interactions with people, it is decent.
    MC - an overly nice/naive attractive female, that discovers her sexual side (corruption)
    But only see development in the MC (corruption being the main element), corruption in this game is a slow and steady burn (done pretty well).
    Other characters - everyone wants to fuck/take advantage of you - not much character depth other than MC
    Sound - 0/10
    NO SOUND
    Renders - 7/10
    HS 1 models - MC is done well
    Others hit and miss, but generally its good enough
    Animations- 7/10
    All (?) animations are in Hscenes
    Solid, low frame rate but good variety
    Playability - 8/10
    Amount of content - 4-5 hours
    Game explores a slow corruption -> not many Hscenes at start, get more progressively
    Plenty of choices -> be more modest or slutty
  2. 1.00 star(s)

    Ummmh

    This game...

    This game is one of the greatest heartbreaks of all time, in that it is definitely ONE OF THE BEST GAMES EVER, but, very unfortunately, it seemingly has been abandoned.

    When I first saw the page for Project Sage, I thought it was going to be some slapped-together, Japanese-theme-inspired cliche collection.

    It instead turned out to be one of the most humorous, tantalizing, and just all-around well-written games I have ever played.

    Seriously. The dialog is frequently ridiculously funny, very warmly human, and occasionally even thought-provoking, and the fun, ever-bubbly and positive, high energy main character is so interesting (and even believable, at times), that she is rather hard to not like.

    Amazingly for a cartoon p0rn bimbo who's only real purpose in life is to ultimately be corrupted, assaulted, and humiliated, she's extremely likable, and might even induce you to feel a certain amount of *respect* for her, given how she (ahem) somewhat "sagely" chooses to pursue life.

    Ofc... It doesn't hurt that some of the H-scenes she's in are.. (yeeeaeah). really, *REALLY* good.

    The author does a very good job of bringing you right up to the edge (and occasionally over it), with some actually reasonable context for what someone of that background might actually do.

    Tho oft not showing all that much out of the ordinary in sex scenes, the situations as set up are oft very titilating, and the internal monologue the MC has is oft what makes the scenes shine.

    I find it especially amusing when she thinks things like "No, no! I shouldn't be doing this even though it feels good! I need to leave! I need to get back in control...later..."

    Discipline only goes so far for her, apparently, when what is getting done to her feels good.

    Of course, there are the usual over the top situations and tropes, and a fair bit of grinding (of the non pleasurable variety), but they are generally handled pretty well, navigated with some interesting outcomes from the MC actually thinking about what she's doing (and actually having some somewhat realistic responses to situations, albeit with the occasional bout of uncontrolled lust and/or exhibitionist tendencies), and balanced out with some surprisingly realistic, oft practical, and very frequently funny perspectives from the MC.

    Despite some of the more questionable decisions and traits that you can cruelly force upon her by choosing her path, she's oft well aware of how some of the situations that she gets herself into would pan out in actuality, and some of her responses to negative situations, especially, are quite endearing, to the point where the character is actually quite likely to quickly get under your skin and make you smile.

    It's especially amusing to repeatedly hear her think (when put into a few particularly compromising positions) something along the lines of: "What am I? Some stupid girl star in a p0rn game filled with men trying to get me into perverted situations?" Such a sweet summer child..

    There are some hints in the game that the character is more than she appears to be, and more than even she is aware of, and that there was going to be quite a bit of development in that direction, although it now looks like we will never know.

    Unfortunately, it looks like this is yet another abandoned project. There are any number of potential reasons why. In fact, it sounds like the author, Paperwork, may have had some very valid reasons for leaving, although no one apprently knows for sure, last I checked. A lot of it does seem to have been right after COVID first hit, and some posts that PW made indicate that was a particularly rough time for him or her.

    All I can say is I wish Paperwork the best, and hope he or she succeeds in in whatever they do, and THANK YOU, Paperwork, for the game you've given us.

    Of course, I also hold out a small glimmer of hope that maybe PW'll come back and finish this *GREAT* game, someday, but it's still awesome, as is.

    . . .

    !!! (( One addendum )) !!!

    The above-listed impression of the game specifically comes from the 19d iteration, and was before I took extra time to go down the alternate paths of rejecting Hank (which does not turn out well), and choosing to believe the beach dudes over the beach kids.

    The earlier, 17a release (kept around as it is "raunchier" than those that followed) is far more sexual-assault themed, and has faster corruption: it has so many blatantly "grapey" scenes, it is unbelievable that the MC's cherry isn't non-consensually popped by day 3 (there are, it should be noted, similar problems with 19d's alternate paths, which I will go into later)

    In 19d, our girl seems more an actual *person*, not just a naive and pretty set of highly vulnerable holes (not that there's anything wrong with the latter in a H-game, but still..). I suspect post-17a versions were retooled specifically to get a *slower burn* to the thirsty spirit we see in 17a. This makes 19d's girl keeping her virginity for so long much more believable, as it was nearly constantly under threat in 17a unless you navigated carefully.

    17a is likely preferable for those specifically looking for MCs to *quickly* get themselves into all the inevitable and humiliating grapey traps, but it's less believable and charmingly human than 19d taking its time getting there, and I can definitely appreciate that Paperwork eventually chose the latter route.

    One last note:

    All praise of 19d still holding, its alternate routes have frustratingly similar issues to 17a's: the main character ridiculously retains her vaginal virginity against all odds, up to including a pair of potential grapists going so far as to DRUG her with aphrodisiacs and hiring an actress to help them convince her to have sex, yet they then (when she's roofied out of her mind, they literally have her sandwiched between them, and everyone is naked) completely pass up the easy opportunity to vag/anal DP her, FOR NO APPARENT REASON other than the author not wanting them to.

    When a girl says "please don't take my vagina because I'm a virgin", it is not the logical equivalent of her wearing a locked steel chastity belt: guys can can still go there, and those who have ill intent, and opportunity, likely will.

    Paperwork seems to have an excessive fixation on anal sex, and a lack of understanding of how actual aroused men respond to women. My guess is PW is a male author with anal preference who doesn't have full perspective on how highly aroused males (after a huge buildup and after they've been **actively trying to trick/drug her into intercourse**), will respond to a woman telling them they can only go with anal sex, and especially if she suddenly tells them they can't have any sex **just because they can't fit in her ass**: the almost certain response to either is the man says "Oops! Sorry! Wrong hole!" and forcefully penetrates her pvssy (which will almost certainly be able to accommodate their cocks unless she has an incredibly small vagina, since the vag is a larger opening than the anus [even given she has been training her butt], that's what it does and is for, and it's the *GLARINGLY OBVIOUS* solution when you can't fit it in her ass) and fvcks her hard until he inseminates her.

    Never underestimate the probability that an aroused male (especially one who the player has clearly been shown **ALWAYS HAD ILL INTENT**) will go there when he has been forced to stop when already on the edge: it might not be a pleasant subject for some players, but it is reality.

    That major quibble, aside, if one sticks to the primary path that the 19d iteration clearly wants you to go with (to date Hank) he will not show any negative /psychopathic traits, and will instead be extremely considerate; on this path he takes her vaginal virginity (so long as the player wants to go there). That path retains 19d's excellent writing all the way through (excepting the Beach Dudes inexplicable inaction, and possibly Mr Wilson backing off while on the edge even though he clearly had intent , tho he has virility issues and might have been starting to feel sorry for her) and is clearly where PW was aiming, since nearly every choice points there unless you specifically go the route of DIRECTLY rejecting Hank (after multiple softer negative choices still point you to him), in which case he shows blatant psychopathic tendencies (viscously slandering/belittling/gaslighting our girl); and this sets us down alternate paths.
  3. 5.00 star(s)

    nShame

    The manual of good stories includes several variables: a well-resolved plot, interesting protagonists, attractive secondary characters, fluid dialogues, and if possible, a pinch of originality and the creator's own style. Project SAGE meets these requirements. That's why, despite the years since its cancellation, it's still so hard to forget Amy.

    Thank you, Paperwork, wherever you are.
  4. 5.00 star(s)

    bburner

    Amazing game! The pacing is great because the corruption actually takes time but the game is not boring at all, which is what you want from a porn game. The MC's body is also really unique and I really like it.
  5. 5.00 star(s)

    demonoidstorm

    Like the way this game plays out. Its a little bit of something you like for everyone. Definitely recommended to give at least a try, you will never know as it might just strike your fancy.

    Seems like a promising project for sure to follow.

    Quite an effort after having been abandoned.
  6. 5.00 star(s)

    Crepusculum

    This is, in my opinion, one of the best 'violated heroine'/girl gone bad-type games out there, and it is a real shame it has been abandoned.

    There is a very good balance between the lewd parts of the game and the story, keeping the need for suspension of disbelief at a minimum, for example, due to the good nature of the main character and they way she discovers herself, she isn't just a dumb bimbo being taken for a ride, she has internal monologue which helps you shape her character, and people react to that accordingly both in action and the way they speak, for example, she can learn to lean into being taken advantage of, and she can even flip the script and take control.

    Because she is so attracting, some people start off wanting to take advantage of her, but her good nature, which really does a good job of capturing the reader/player, also does that same thing for the in-game characters, and you also get to see their internal struggle as they go from "I'm going to exploit this hot bitch" to "I don't want to hurt her, i can't do anything sexual with her even if she asks, that would be wrong"

    This is a real shame the game has been abandoned, i feel like if it were to be created now with HS2 (even though i think Paperwork did an amazing job, this is VERY hot and well done) it would break the bank and have a huge following, me included.

    This is one of those games that you play, replay, and save for later to come back to it after you've forgotten about it - play it and you won't regret it.
  7. 5.00 star(s)

    Deleted member 3727657

    This game is wonderful, at first I said that this game is old, it must have poor renderings compared to the present time, but when I played it, I saw that the renderings are wonderful and really enjoyable, the story of the game is also wonderful, and another adjective This game is great, there are many choices that can be made, which means that the player's hand is practically open for the whole path, and this is great
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  8. 5.00 star(s)

    Kog Astarta

    this is just awesome. one of the hottest female protagonists ever.
    yes, this is "good girl gone bad" as it is. she is very attractive, doing the right way of life, a lot of sport. and the poses she takes, while being near men, mmm..
    the remake is much more teasing, tnx god I played this one first. but action should take place too, too shame the game is abandoned.
  9. 5.00 star(s)

    Tentacle_Monster

    ProjectSAGE gets a 5 Star rating. This is both a review and words of encouragement.

    Dear "PaperWork"... Every friend - Male and Female who I know that tried your game LOVED it. Which locally is about 100 of us without exaggeration. (big busy city)

    The art for the character is cute (with illusion company's character rendering tools). The situations feel dynamic and offer more CHOICES than most games from the genre.

    Your real fans read your posts about being a lil down now and then. It happens. Everyone would be super enthusiastic to see this game make a return. There are people who would gladly volunteer to help you code or edit dialogue. or think up new poses or situations.

    Please indulge everyone with small steps. A single event or just one event path option for an existing day would be awesome and is all anyone wants.

    You don't have to work yourself to the bone and live your entire life around building the game. When you feel good - crank out 1 short section of a scene. New scenes will add up over time, and you will make everyones' day.

    We wish you all the best - We want you to be happy and healthy and to do the things you love most. To anyone reading this review - it's worth it. Try the game.

    You won't regret it. Please consider leaving a positive comment after you try the game to show your support for this talent. :D
  10. 5.00 star(s)

    tiran3000

    An interesting project, I hope the author will return to the continuation. Technically beautiful sex scenes, a lot of people. Variability. The atmosphere of the game is a cocktail of mixed Japanese and American culture.
  11. 4.00 star(s)

    tmathis

    Would have liked to see a few more girls involved over the course of the entry. That said, I enjoyed a lot of the scenes. They did a particularly good job on the solo scenes here - many were quite hot and well done. Pretty solid entry overall, only the lack of models and abandoned tag keep this at a 4.
  12. 5.00 star(s)

    don9ban9

    The content of this drama is amazing. It excites me. I have finished about 20 times so far, but the scenes that change depending on the choice keep me immersed. However, it is too difficult to open all the scenes. I'm doing it while looking at the guide, but sometimes it doesn't fit with the guide. There may be differences depending on the version. I want to make a new version of the attack if a new version can play with me. Please give me a new version as soon as possible. plz!!!!!!!!!!!
  13. 4.00 star(s)

    Devilsraging

    Amazing Game! One of the best games i've ever played. It's a corruption game done right. Has one of the better story about a coming of age of a young girl learning about sex. The choices are very diverse, very nice build up towards every scenario and branching paths. The H scenes are very rewarding mostly due to great dialogue and good animation, you get the feeling of wanting more as each scene unfolds. The only things bad about this game is it's character models and not being able to skip some similar dialogue after picking different choices, which made replaying a bit tedious. I highly recommend this game for people who likes corruption game or those who just enjoy a good story. Sadly it's abandoned, but hopefully we get more updates in the future.

    Art: 3/5
    Characters: 3/5
    Story: 5/5
    Progression: 5/5
    Content: 5/5
    Enjoyment: 5/5
    Total: 4.3/5 (it's worth the 5 star rating if not for the generic models/art)
  14. 5.00 star(s)

    Habawa

    This is on of the best games I've played here. I absolutely love the model that is used for the MC, although the models of the others characters and the environment look a bit bleh. The story is reasonably well written, with character choices that actually have impact. You can play her as a stupid bimbo or lusty slut or just a decent lady who gets put into situations where shes forced to be lewd, or a decent lady who actually gets corrupted into being lewd.

    Even with multiple playthroughs the game keeps surprising with scenes that are played out just a little differently depending on the choices you have made. A breath of fresh air from the myriad of games where the "choices" are "U WAN GIRL WIT BIG OR SMALL TIT?" or "PLAY SCENE OR NAH?" The only minus point I'd say is the last day where there is a scene where it seems the game jumps the shark and goes into a totally different setting with the MC doing things that are not in line with how you played the game before that. And a TON of text in that last day. Its like that day was made in a complete vacuum from the other days. All the rest is absolute golden though.

    5/5
  15. 5.00 star(s)

    Deleted member 1157790

    This is one of my favorite h-games of all time. While there are flaws (i.e., the face renders aren't the best) the characters are exceptionally fleshed out and believable. Great scenarios too. And a plethora of options that give you almost complete control over the MCs development. The only real problem is that the sexual content is a bit lacking at the point it was abandoned - although, the Wilson and boyfriend paths are really good.
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  16. 5.00 star(s)

    Big To

    v0.19d Review

    Don't judge a book by its cover

    That's something I have to remind myself of when searching for a new game to play. I bring this up because I am one of those dudes that like his women THICC, just like many on this wonderful website. So imagine my surprise when I see a game like this, sporting a heroine that is very slim having such a consistently high rating between reviews. I almost passed this gem up because of that, don't make that mistake, I'll tell you why I fell in love with it.

    The art, the writing, the characters' personalities, the writing and the animations are fantastic. If you're a THICC girl connoisseur like me don't let these screens deter you, once the action gets going you will come to appreciate why this has so many good reviews.

    Give it a shot.
  17. 5.00 star(s)

    GogolBordello

    Might be the best game i've played. I've just finished the first naughty play. Its different than other games for sure. its original and fun. Like others said, it has lots of choices. The girl is super super hot, slim body, big beautiful boobs. She ain't stupid, not a cum dumpster. It's a wise game with great dialogs. Highly worthy of your time. I've played for hours, read all the texts, didn't skip one bit. Im going to support the game. Dev deserves it.

    Fuck, its the first time in my life i masturbated to a game protagonist.
  18. 5.00 star(s)

    TheFapperOfEarth

    It about forth times I play from the start. Try to Role play her in different personality. I first go for every naughty choice as possible since I think that usually most content wise, And I enjoy a lot. Second times Role play her like air-head that don't mind show some skin, I feel like there are some decent different between first play. Since is more like how I want MC to be so is still fun. The game is very long even skip already read text still took some times to finished.

    Third and forth times I really reluctant at first because I'm play with try to avoid any naughty thing that obviously, At first is feel like any other game that just cut naughty part give a bit of refusal dialogue and pass, but the as story keep going the more different than the first two play I have done.Chose some choice that I used to think is just skipped some good stuff. To finally realize that some of them just go completely different event in later time I didn't encounter in first 2 playthrough. And because this playthrough since I'm avoid naughty thing a lot, I can't select some choice that should lead to interesting stuff. May be it time for my fifth playthrough lol. And I can assure you that despite you try to avoid every naughty choice as possible you can't completely avoid it anyway, And still fun to play.

    And we don't rarely seen MC with this shape in the game. It actually shape that I prefer, solute to dev who stick to this shape even seem like most people don't like it.
  19. 5.00 star(s)

    Argeddon

    By far, one of, if not the best, female protagonist games on the site. The number of choices is immensely broad. Thus it gives you a large amount of freedom on when a player wants the protagonist to go. The cgs are awesome. there are also a large number of arcs, which can cater to a lot of different types of scenarios and/or fetishes (for example, the role-playing scenario for those who want a taste of fantasy and potental monster tags whilst maintaining the slice-of-life genre). Perhaps one issue might be that it can be difficult to determine what a choice does, and there are some background systems which the player may not see (for example, how to befriend/have power over the principal rather being submissive to them). But I hardly feel that this should take away even half a star. Very good game!
  20. 5.00 star(s)

    TessSadist

    So I always want to play female protagonist games as a female, but I always worry about the corruption tag because I usually find it's just a male cum dumpster fantasy game where the woman is basically an object for specific scenes without much else.

    Thankfully, this female protagonist has some agency and choice in the game. Of course I understand that she will end up doing some things I would likely find unrealistic or stupid, but there are so many choices out there that I think women can actually try and role play a little as what they would do in that situation, and that's fun.

    The most impressive thing to me is the sheer amount of content! I know just as much as most game devs how hard it is to make content (and how long it takes) and there is a lot here! I understand that this type of art can be a little faster than say some Daz rendering at times, but how many games with this art style do I see "released" with 8-10 minutes of content?

    I just want to give a huge shout out to the dev for the sheer amount of effort and work alone!