cool magic effects, good visuals, characters well defined, lore well (implicitly) introduced*.
The story looks good from this little prologue, it certainly leaves the reader longing for more.
It is said a good hero is the product of a good villain; here we have apparently one (or two) uber-villain(s) of old, and special circumstances...
* I wouldn't mind a less implicit lore! maybe a pure text lore option in the main menu (say, "MC's dad war digest/dairy") or something to keep development light as it would be essentially a copy of the lore distilled in game, but i do want to know more about that war etc.
The story looks good from this little prologue, it certainly leaves the reader longing for more.
It is said a good hero is the product of a good villain; here we have apparently one (or two) uber-villain(s) of old, and special circumstances...
* I wouldn't mind a less implicit lore! maybe a pure text lore option in the main menu (say, "MC's dad war digest/dairy") or something to keep development light as it would be essentially a copy of the lore distilled in game, but i do want to know more about that war etc.