VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Pure Love [v0.9.5 Public] [Mr.Axxx]

Aside from the face of the female models. The game is alright. Being kinetic, it felt like reading a shota harem manga. Just the lead not being a shota, but acting like one. Clara and Max were good models too.

This game is basically a harem with some fancy justifications on how the girls get around the incest and why every other guy suck except MC.

If you are fine with big boobs girls with botox injections this is the game for you. The good point is that you don't need to think about missing scenes: all choices are inconsequential, just follow the story and the scenes.

feels like written by a child.

the review is only first sentence. others are filler.

Embark on an unforgettable journey with Erik and Lyna, two young twins entangled in a passionate web of desires. Set against the breathtaking backdrop of a private tropical island villa, their reunion after a year abroad sparks a fiery exploration of emotions that defy traditional boundaries.

As they tread the line between repressed feelings and mutual attraction, their bond deepens and the craving for the forbidden becomes impossible to ignore. With the arrival of their mother Helga on the horizon, will they succumb to temptation or resist the call of their primal urges? Discover the twists and turns of this compelling narrative through a kinetic visual novel where love, family, and desire intertwine in very interesting ways...

This game has a heavy focus on the incest taboo itself and making the family relationships actually matter and mean something more than just a label. A lot of attention is paid to sound effects, music, descriptive narration and unique angles to enhance both the story and the sex scenes.

(0.9.5)

The story in the beginning was fairly amusing, enough to overlook the occasional mistake or weird cracks in images or weird looking sex scenes. But the lack of quality becomes worse and worse further you get.

The MC has ridiculous amount of plot armor, always gets his way, is practically a doormat except during some sub/dom scenes, then he is all of a sudden dom?

Story itself; I haven't the foggiest idea what the f**** the story was about xD
something with ruling a country but indirect? The BS about a spy, introducing herself as a spy... Yeah, it didn't make sense anymore after that. Around that point I stopped.

My guess is the dev didn't plan out his story from start to finish and improvised a lot. The weird sentences and phrasings didn't help either with comprehending the story. Last but not least the deus exploratorum (ex machina) was the last straw that broke the camels back.

I give it 2 stars simply because I kinda liked the intro, the cute jealousy between ava and lily (in the beginning). But minus 3 for everything I wrote above. I can't go higher than poor, because this is a poorly crafted story.

I don't know if its lack of effort, experience, expertise or a mix, but this could have been better.

Technically, I give this game a 3/5. For general gameplay, I give this game a 2/5.

Against my better judgement, I'm going to round up to the three stars instead of rounding down to two. Honestly felt the developer was starting to get lazy towards the end of the game. Graphical issues started becoming more noticeable about halfway through the game, but that's not the end of the world (and it's accounted for in my score).

My primary gripe is with writing quality in the late game, or rather the lack of writing quality. I try not to complain about grammar too often because I know a lot of writers are either ESL or might be fluent but it still isn't their native language so they miss minor things, and the writers who are native usually don't have a team of editors to make sure they aren't simply being lazy. However for two or three consecutive scenes, the writer gets exceedingly lax in their writing and starts dropping initialisms (OMG, WTF, BTW), making regular grammatical mistakes, commits spelling errors and character transpositions with surprising frequency. Again, if it's the norm for a developer I try to overlook it, but this developer spent the first half of the game keeping that to a minimum (those errors still occur, but not frequently) so I know it's laziness.

Only reason I'm giving the developer the star back is because of how entertaining the final set of scenes (dream sequence) were. Honestly with the MC's levels of Gary Stu and how everything kept going his way no matter what circumstance he found himself in (even a bad situation like being lost far from civilization with only his Aunt for months), I had a certain expectation that those events were going to be canonical. Normally, I hate dream sequences, but defying expectations made it my favorite swerve in the game (and you know after the events of the game, MC is still going to get what he wants anyway). This is a guy who could go a craps table and roll sevens ad infinitum.

So... kudos, I guess. 3 Stars.

So a couple of things, the story is not bad in this game. I actually enjoy it and love harem games as well so that's also a plus. The renders are shaped very nicely, not too hugely out of proportion like some other games.

Now on to the bad stuff, have you ever tried reading something that the grammar is so bad it just kind of hurts your brain? That's how bad it is in this game, it get's really really bad to the point it just kind of ruins it for me. Now I'm sure the guy's first language isn't english, but he could've asked for help from someone who's first language is, would've made the game 10x better right off the bat.

Some of the renders have cracks in them, and not like small not noticeable ones either. Like fairly large cracks in like the girls foreheads in some scenes, kind of offputting to be honest. Maybe he didn't notice them as they were done and threw them in to the game, I don't know but it's not cool.

I unfortunately am not able to finish the game with the grammar as bad as it is, I'm sorry I know some might not think it's not that big of a deal but I can't stand it.

Review for: 0.9.5 Public

I really don't know where to start with this title as I really wanted to enjoy it but found myself getting pulled out of the experience due to bad/strange writing.

You are a twenty year old male who lives alone with his sister Ava. Their parents passed away years before and they were raised by their Aunt Clara. She is due to arrive at the airport with two other girls (her boss' daughter Lilly and her best friend Eve). However, Clara misses her flight so the girls arrive without her. Apparently, Clara has talked about the MC non-stop to the point that the girls are infatuated with him from the get-go. Oh, and Lilly is so "innocent", she doesn't even know what a penis is. WTF, really? Even the most sheltered prude knows what a penis and vagina are.

This is when the writing starts to fall apart. Without too many spoilers, all I can say is the MC is either high as hell or doesn't get rattled by anything. Eve and Lilly are important people and if he marries one of them, he inherits some pretty major responsibilities. This revelation doesn't seem to faze him. He then learns about some terrible things his parents did prior to their death and, again, he takes it in stride without missing a beat. He's like a frigging Vulcan that shows no emotion.

Outside of that, this title is a harem game. You can't choose to be with or not be with someone. Eve would never have gotten past first base after the crap she does but since MC is so loving and altruistic (sarcasm), she's forgiven and is added to the harem roster. These types of forced relationships aren't my cup of tea. Add to that, she and the MC have this Master/Slave dynamic which is totally not my thing.

The renders are... okay. All of the women look like they have odd shaped ass implants and fake tits. Meanwhile, the MC has something like a 14" penis and that is it for me. I tried to look past it and succeeded, for the most part, until the writing just reached a point where I could no longer justify pushing through it.

terrible pacing . story less than average . and somehow the dev thought it was a good idea to forgive the gigantic cunt that drugged one of the characters and raped the mc even tho he basicly hated her . THE WORD LOVE MEANS NOTHING WHAT SO EVER IN THIS GAME

As of V0.8.2

PROS

• Model's looks good, including MC (which is a change)

CONS

• NO CHOICES
• Scenes aren't great.
• Characters are unlikable.
• Forced into LI routes

CONCLUSION

You can always skip through for the scenes but don't expect anything other than that.

The preview images made me wonder how come this game had such a low score, so I decided to check it out (v.0.8.2).

The reviews are actually quite right. The art is not that good, with animations being extremely inconsistent throughout the game. You have low resolution renders, badly designed renders, animations that are high res but have almost no details whatsoever... Story and writing are not good either.

Do yourself a favor and skip this one for now.

Very good VN if you like vanilla stuff and eventually get a harem, yeah it's very unrealistic but what VN is realistic?, The characters are all fine to me maybe a little way into the mc from the get go but that's something I liked, no beating around the bush and the mc isn't just some ass that just thinks about getting into their pants he actually has moral conflicts about the things that impact others, I've been a patreon sub for a while now and the Dev is really nice whenever I've talked to him/her

Character models are completely unrealistic and unattractive. Why 14" cocks and size ZZZ breasts on everyone? Storyline and dialogue are weak. Much better games out there no matter what genre you're interested in (unless you're solely interested in ridiculous anatomy).

1. Graphics are meh
2. Characters are pretty much all awful humans
3. Nonsensical plot and behavior
4. Dogshit writing (bad English, all over the place, just makes no sense really)

This may seem very harsh but I have to offset the 5 star liars in here. I don't care if you like the story this game is NOT 5 stars by any metric.

Great romance/love game, as the name suggests it is just pure love between MC and the girls.
Characters are good looking and got little upgraded to the great category.
MC's personality is nobel, good, kind, nice, brave all that related good stuff.
Story is great for a romance game, and it's picking up with newer updates.
Renders and animations are great too.
Reading other reviews it seems like that the low rating is related more to earlier updates than newer updates.

10/10 recommends others to play, good luck to Mr.Axxx for future development of the game.

This is one of the most hideous games i played to date.

The face proportions look like a facelifting job done by a side street doctor.

The english is unreadable and hurts my soul.

At least it has no sandbox. That is at least a good point.

I cant tell anything about the plot because it seems nonexistent or hidden like the dark souls lore. The conversations seem to be pretty disconnected, as if the people cant hear what the other says and interpret what they think they heard and answer to it.

The MC is a loner retard.

Edit: Lilly has the mental capacity of an infant and doesnt know what sex and porn is. sheesh my brotha.
Edit2: I dont know if my eyes got cancer but the faces seem to get better later in the game, after the ship scenes
Edit3: The plot thickens. After the revamp of the female faces later in the game, the game transformed into something with sci-fi elements, weird choice of story developement but okay. THE END for now.
Oh and you only get the chance to fuck your "sister" a few times and none of the other 3 (maybe 4?) woman

Reads like it was written by Tarzan. "Me (name), you Lilly, ooga-booga!" And the girls are all hideous. It's like the dev has never seen a woman not named Kardashian before. I don't know how these girls can hold their heads up considering their lips weight at least 10 lbs. Couldn't even make it to the first sex scene before quitting this game.

I don't like the MC not having any real choices in situations that he should've have, and the story is all over the place. the renders are good , the translation is poor , but the female characters look scary and creepy ; they have some facial gestures that are nightmarish and horrible.

I am literally at a loss of words of how to describe how bad the script of this game is.. If the pace of the game was anything more faster, I would literally change its name to " 299 792 458 m / s ". Blink for a moment and you might miss someone falling in love, Hit Spacebar twice accidentally and you'd miss an entire sex scene ( Well, a bit over exaggerated, but you get what my point is ). The MC could race & beat you to a Harem before your dick's even half errect.

Love at first sight , Suck dick on first night & next morning, holy molly a jealous bitch fight - That kinda sums up all the girls ( Sike, Bimbo's ) in this game.

Great game for a quick fap though.. literally saved me enough time to write this review and still go to bed hours before my usual bedtime.

Followed this game from the inception. The sister was too hot for me to ignore.

The game follows a young guy who is miraculously the dream guy for every girl in the game. So far so far fetched. The base game is non incest, but a patch easily remedies that.

The girls are all big boobed and big assed. I love them. Not everyone's taste, but doesn't have to be. I find the sister particularly irresistable.

Story wise, it's pretty simple. Sex scenes permiate the gameplay. Although the narrative isn't totally empty. Tensions between the characters breaks out regularly and the story while simple is pretty fluid.

As the dev began this project the renders were a little primitive. And the text full of grammatical errors. He was just learning the ropes.

Fast forward to the present update. The dialogue is now fluid and error free. The scenes more complex and kinky. The main change has been with the renders and especially the animations which have been hugely improved! No comparison to the start.

In all a kinky incest game with beautiful girls if you're into busty big assed babes. The dev could use more support. I think he deserves it. Just subbed myself.

one of the best games on the site.

the charecters and renders are amazing 10/10

the sex scenes and the animations are also 10/10

the story is intresting.

yeah there is some sharing scenes but not annoying like other games.

i recommend you try it