(0.9.5)
The story in the beginning was fairly amusing, enough to overlook the occasional mistake or weird cracks in images or weird looking sex scenes. But the lack of quality becomes worse and worse further you get.
The MC has ridiculous amount of plot armor, always gets his way, is practically a doormat except during some sub/dom scenes, then he is all of a sudden dom?
Story itself; I haven't the foggiest idea what the f**** the story was about xD
something with ruling a country but indirect? The BS about a spy, introducing herself as a spy... Yeah, it didn't make sense anymore after that. Around that point I stopped.
My guess is the dev didn't plan out his story from start to finish and improvised a lot. The weird sentences and phrasings didn't help either with comprehending the story. Last but not least the deusexploratorum (ex machina) was the last straw that broke the camels back.
I give it 2 stars simply because I kinda liked the intro, the cute jealousy between ava and lily (in the beginning). But minus 3 for everything I wrote above. I can't go higher than poor, because this is a poorly crafted story.
I don't know if its lack of effort, experience, expertise or a mix, but this could have been better.
The story in the beginning was fairly amusing, enough to overlook the occasional mistake or weird cracks in images or weird looking sex scenes. But the lack of quality becomes worse and worse further you get.
The MC has ridiculous amount of plot armor, always gets his way, is practically a doormat except during some sub/dom scenes, then he is all of a sudden dom?
Story itself; I haven't the foggiest idea what the f**** the story was about xD
something with ruling a country but indirect? The BS about a spy, introducing herself as a spy... Yeah, it didn't make sense anymore after that. Around that point I stopped.
My guess is the dev didn't plan out his story from start to finish and improvised a lot. The weird sentences and phrasings didn't help either with comprehending the story. Last but not least the deus
I give it 2 stars simply because I kinda liked the intro, the cute jealousy between ava and lily (in the beginning). But minus 3 for everything I wrote above. I can't go higher than poor, because this is a poorly crafted story.
I don't know if its lack of effort, experience, expertise or a mix, but this could have been better.