VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Pure Love [v0.9.5 Public] [Mr.Axxx]

Review of the Incest Version (0.3.0): (Contains some spoilers)
So far, it's good. The characters are somewhat interesting, although there are a lot of loopholes in the story. There are just a few that stood out to me.
For example, Lilly doesn't know what a penis is. I mean, c'mon? She doesn't know anything about sexual reproduction or watch porn. (and her supporting claim that it's because she didn't do biology) . I feel like that's a bit absurd.
I feel like Lilly and the MC fall in love too quickly. They barely know each other and when they get lost in the forest for a day, they're suddenly in love? That development needs to be worked on a little.

What this game needs is choices. So far, it's pretty much a linear story but adding choices will greatly improve the game.
But keeping in mind that this is still in it's early stages, I'd say this is a solid game. Renders are great and models are super nice.

id say this is a solid 3.5/5 but ill round it up instead of down.

overall id say it needs polishing but the prospects of this one is good if the dev keeps it up.

the english in this one is not terrible but could use a proofreader or something as there are some wierd sentences.

The mc looks good in this one which is rare especially with the younger looking ones. so thats a big plus

the girls also look good but the expression and posing sometimes make them seem like botched surgery victims. for example with the lilly scene, her boobs look good in half the pictures the other half they look like a very bad boobjob. overall the tiddies in the lilly scene looked way too stiff and feel unnatural like they are implants. same thing with ava, the funbags look great in the kitchen scene but in her animated scene they look like implants

as i stated above theres also some simple animation which is nice but could also use some work and a bit of double checking next time as while the movements are actually pretty smooth(Nice!) ava has her hand goes through her kneecap(OUTCH!) and her boobs move unnaturally.

the characters are interesting enough.

the story feels a little rushed other than that i like it so far, as its still very early we will have to wait and see how it turns out.

the dev seems to be improving as it goes along though as the further in you get the less glaring the faults become so im hopeful about this one.

version at the time of writing this: 0.3.0

Renders are unique and beautiful . I really liked it, despite being in an initial development stage the developer is doing an amazing work. I am sure with more time and experience he will take this game on a whole another level. I am looking forward to play the future updates. I just hope that it will be on time and will not be a 2 min. update.

So I gave this game a try here are my thoughts

Pros:
+None that I can think of other then the fact there was no bugs

Cons
-No choices
-Smooth/Shiny alien renders
-nonsensical plot
-No sex

So the dev is pretty upfront that there is no x content in the game but since there is none the story takes front stage and it's boring, bland, and completely unoriginal. The characters are pretty much cutouts from any other porn game but are written worse like the sister for instance which is supposed to be tsundre but seems bipolar instead. The renders are so bad they are distracting and the eyes man the eyes are humongous on every character.

Wanted to like the game the render in the intros game image looks interesting but it's not worth the play.