VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Pure Love [v0.9.5 Public] [Mr.Axxx]

Good Points
+Girls looks hot.

Bad Points
-MC have loser wibe... Little bit? Or maybe lot... He just bear and dont act like man while his bitchy sister mock him, swear him, yell him etc... And worst part is not this, worst part is when someone call his sister ''Why she is behaving like bitch?'' he yells that people and tell ''Even if she is mean to me I love my sister very much.'' wow... She slap you in the face, yell at you, mock you, take your car whenever she want, basicly act like your owner and you are still loving her?And even we are going her room to telling her ''I'm sorry.'' come on man realy... Amazing MC character development... Long story short he is not enjoyable as a playing MC at all.
-We cant choice some of important things in game, like giving what Ava deserve! Why DEV why? If you are making bitchy sister like her you should give us choice to tease her, make her angry, tell her bad words like she mock us, but no we dont have any choice change... We just need bear all that mocking and MC's loser wibe... Even after that much mocking he still begs for kissing her, tells he is sorry even he doesnt do any bad thing and we are playing as a this guy and we cant choice not doing theese things... Thats just not immersive at all...
-Story is not orriginal or interesting even feels to cringy.
-Animations looks pretty bad... They need improve in quality, physics and FPS.
-Render quality needs improve.

For The End
Its not good game. Have potencial but its looks like wasted by poor writing, characters and bad maked animations.

Great game with one major problem Ava, One of the most despicable unlikable characters in the game, This Chucky looking b!tch is permanently on the rag about anything & everything & she bites the protags head off any chance she gets, The other characters have their own quirks but she insufferable & given the choice I would love the protagonist to tell her to hit the bricks but he is a spineless wimp by my calculations, jsut smiles like a window licker while she berates him & everyone around them.

Don't get me wrong its not a deal breaker the skip button is a God send everytime she appears

As soon as i read the first lines of dialogue i had a dejavu. The bitchy sister thing is appealing to me cause, despite being predictable, it works pretty well for an arc.

But i cant take the game serious when its trying to convince me to care about something that is simply given to me. There is no character development, there are choices that arent actually choices, and you know from the beggining, that at least 2 of the 3 girls that for some reason happen to be living in your house , already love you. The other girl you know that she will be trying to fuck you, at least.

Theres a message before the game starts that tells you that relationships take time. That message is right but he doesnt follow his own statement.

Visually is nothing spectacular, quite the opposite i would say.

I'm not trying to be salty here, but that thing called "Pure Love" is kind of an overstatement.
It's more like you're driven to love someone.
"I love you. Can you love me back?"
"Do you love me? Because I love you, you know."
"I love you because ... blah ... blah ... blah"
My advice is to dim the conversation about love and just do it.
Talk less, do more.

Apart from that, this game certainly did a pretty good job producing it. Regarding the model, maybe it is unique enough that not everyone likes it, especially me.

*Review based on 0.5 version*

Harem + Incest is usually a combination I find really appealing, so obviously I decided to give this game a try. Sadly, I don't feel my time was well spent.

The visuals are pretty grainy throughout most of the game and could certainly do with some improvements. Most of the females (if not all) has the weird oversized lips & creepy eyes. They are how I would imagine a Realdoll to look like, if they came alive.
Worst visual thing however, might be the effect the dev made to simulate "wetness" on a girl's pussy, which looks more like broken glass than anything else. I sure as hell wouldn't stick MY dick anywhere near that stuff.

As for the story, it is... well, let's be nice and call it unoriginal. Let's start with the characters, I guess:
The player lives with his bitchy sister, who is just being bitchy to hide her hopeless love for him. 2 more girls arrive: The insecure girl, who doesn't know ANYTHING (literally) about sex, but is hopelessly in love with the player already, and her (very) slutty best friend, who instantly tries to establish her superiority over her best friend, by seducing/threatening the love of her life into sleeping with her, because they made a bet about which of them could make him fall in love with her first.
There is also a 4'th girl being thrown into the mix later, but I must be honest and admit that I no longer recall who she is, as at this point in the game, it was becomming very hard to pay attention to the story or characters. She had glasses though and was clearly the stereotypical "nerdy girl" whom (surprise) is also hopelessly in love with the player.

None of the girls in the game really has much - if any - character development. They are madly in love with the player from the instant they are introduced. Like, if this was a dating simulator, their "love" and "lust" stats would be 200/100 already.
Each girl is jealous as hell of the others, constantly challenging each other in what is best described as the female version of a "dick measuring contest," despite constantly saying that they are fine with being in a harem. This must be the biggest load of BS I have heard in a long time, considering how they act. This entire thing is a powder keg, just waiting to explode.

You might have noticed that I haven't said anything about the MC yet. That's because there is nothing to say. After playing him, I know nothing about him, other than that he is forgetable.

All in all, I can't say that I am very impressed here. There are many other games, which does the entire "MC builds a harem of young girls who are madly in love with him" a lot better. Just go to those games instead.

This game has become pretty mediocre, I still like the renders and the way the characters look, but with each new update this game becomes more dull, the story doesn't get more interesting, and the characters don't get smarter unfortunately, 2.5 max

The game is way too cringy and corny, the game progress was very fast, the graphics shown in the screenshots and game is miles apart. I downloaded the game specially because of the renders I saw in the previews, however, the renders of the game is nowhere near it. It was a waste of my time.

I have rated this higher than I might because it's not to my taste, but I don't want that to discourage anyone whose tastes are different than mine. The models are cartoonishly exaggerated -- I am more a fan of characters who resemble people I might actually meet. That said, the models are well done. The writing is superficial and the character motivations are simplistic, and the writing could use somewhat better proofreading. Not a game I'll be following, but enjoy it if it's to your taste.

The models look weird, but I can see this as some kind of personal preference thing. So this didn't go into my rating.
Let me tell you right now: The english is bad. Really, really bad. I couldn't help but read half the lines with a russian accent. Made the whole experience better.

The "wet effects" really put me off. Whenever one of the girls got wet, it looks like they just put a hand full of transparent jello between their legs. Watching MC go down and lap up those inch-thick layers of hardened gelatine was nausea-inducing!

And I'm fairly sure dev used the same model for Lilly and Alice, just switched out some Accessories.

The story is as flat and uninteresting as it possibly can be.
Girl 1: "He stood up to a bully for me, so I secretly loved him for, like, 4 years."
Girl 2: "He saved me from a car accident, so I secretly loved him for, like, 5 years."
Girl 3: "He played with me when the others bullied me, so I secretly loved him for, like, 3 years."
Girl 4: ...you get the idea.

And that's basically it. Granted, I only played version 0.4 spanning 4 days v0.7, but still... it's like watching Sims behave. Everything is unnatural, flat, offputting and weird.

I had a very detailed review but lost it because of a stupid key stroke, so (trying not to be too cruel) here is the short of it:

Art: Terrible (Fish eyes, Fish Lips).

Story/Dialogue: Flat as a pancake.

Bimbo Models: For those who would say that you just don't appreciate Bimbo models, I 'd like to point you towards "Doll City" (Best Bimbo models I've seen. And the name tells you everything), or even "Bimbo High"(Still far better than this).

The game has a linear game play and no choices to make. I'm not a fan of the unrealistic beach ball style breasts and there is no visual variety to the characters you meet. I tried to get into the game, but I just couldn't. Looks like a town filled with women who all got sub-par plastic surgery. I spent 2 minutes holding down the Control key and clicking the only option. Finally, someone got naked and I just couldn't go on. I'll be giving this one a pass.

I tried it and gave it a chance. Story is choppy. Graphics are OK, though a bit weird, I guess it is the artist's style. Unfortunately, the progression of the story sometimes does not match the pics. I rate this game 1 star, +1 for trying.

I don't want to discourage the dev but I have some problems with game as design wise.

Graphic Cons:
Characters looks like bimbo, they are mix of dolls,anime characters and too much botox, don't get me on those titties and EYES. So far only character I find somewhat realistic is that "Bar girl" who is background character.

Story:
Characters have childish thoughts, especially for inner monologue part. Story moves so fast. There is no character development.

Those are my opinions of course. Feel free to check out game.

I can't take this one seriously.

So... if I imagined all the characters were androids that have been given human emotion recently... their dialogue and physics make much more sense.

The art is mediocre. It looks like DAZ but with little to no understanding on how to make things look natural.

The dialogue is... engrish? Kind of? It's unnatural feeling that is for sure.

Good attempt I guess.

Bland and stale, feels more like this was written by a teen. The girls basically fall in love with the MC straight off the bat. The models also while not the worst aren´t the best, the constant posing makes it feel rather fake. The MC is your standard horny teenage dude, not a fan of the MC model either, but thats a common thing in many visual novels, just hide the face all together like DMD or reluctant archon does. Works better that way.

This game felt very generic and lifeless to me. The story is non-existent and there is very little sensible dialogue. Without spoiling anything too much it just feels like relationships develop far too quickly which makes the game feel very fake and impersonal.

Plus the models are a little off to me. The sis looked like some kind of demon at times.. The game states it's not for a quick fap and the story actually matters but I totally disagree. I think the only purpose this serves is in fact a quick fap.

I would steer clear of this one in my opinion. Nothing special and no reason to play this over other games.

It is a simple visual novel without choices. So the only thing you have to do is to press the mouse button to read the text and see the images. In such games I would expect a good interesting story and nice renders/models.

The renders are not bad although the models especially the face expressions often look weird and unnatural. There are also some animations which need some improvements but it is a plus. As for version 0.3 there are 2 sexual scenes with the 2 of the girls. Although the models aren't actual my style I could give 3 stars to this game (or even 4 stats if it had good interesting story)

Unfortunately the story (if there is any) and dialogues are very disappointing. You are supposed to be at summer vacation to an unknown place, in a house with your sister. The first thing to do is to go to the airport to pick up the daughter of some aunt's boss and a friend of her ( both girls are unknown to you and to your sister!) Finally you are in a house with 3 girls which for some unknown reason all of them are full in love with you and try to seduce you. There is no story background for the characters, the dialogues and the behavior of the characters are weird and without make much sense. It is like you teleported to a place with 3 'unknown' girls which fell in love with you at the first sight. For incest lovers the dev name one girl as 'sis' but you don't actually have the feeling that she is your sister. Personally I suggest to skip dialogues and text until you reach to the sexual scenes.

Sorry but I can't give more than 2 stars for this VN

Review of version 0.3

The character models are not my my style but passable.
Story is very generic but oh well.

If it was only this I'd give the game 4 stars but the script and the dialogues are ridiculously absurd.

The sister's behavior was too over the top sometimes but I was still ok with it.
But the beach part on day 2, with the "Let's enjoy the beach with our clothes on!" part looks ridiculous.
Then comes that thing with the pearl. WTF?
Then the supposedly kind and shy girl emotionally blackmails MC with the infamous "Do(n't) you love me?" line just because she wan't to go inside the forest.
Then the thing about the thorny bush. WTF is that reaction? Totally unnatural.
Then it turns out she doesn't know about male anatomy nor has ever heard about porn. WTF again? It's ok for her to be naive an inexperienced but come on. She is not a hermit who has no contact with normal people!
After they come back Sis has a change of heart which is a bit sudden but expected, however how she explains everything to MC is unnatural again. Dear Dev: Less detailed explanation would be more in this case. Show, don't tell as they say.

I think this game could be quite good with some minor tweaks in the dialogues and maybe reworking or removing some minor events but as it is now these absurd situations totally destroy any immersion and therefore the current rating.

Review of the Incest Version (0.3.0): (Contains some spoilers)
So far, it's good. The characters are somewhat interesting, although there are a lot of loopholes in the story. There are just a few that stood out to me.
For example, Lilly doesn't know what a penis is. I mean, c'mon? She doesn't know anything about sexual reproduction or watch porn. (and her supporting claim that it's because she didn't do biology) . I feel like that's a bit absurd.
I feel like Lilly and the MC fall in love too quickly. They barely know each other and when they get lost in the forest for a day, they're suddenly in love? That development needs to be worked on a little.

What this game needs is choices. So far, it's pretty much a linear story but adding choices will greatly improve the game.
But keeping in mind that this is still in it's early stages, I'd say this is a solid game. Renders are great and models are super nice.

id say this is a solid 3.5/5 but ill round it up instead of down.

overall id say it needs polishing but the prospects of this one is good if the dev keeps it up.

the english in this one is not terrible but could use a proofreader or something as there are some wierd sentences.

The mc looks good in this one which is rare especially with the younger looking ones. so thats a big plus

the girls also look good but the expression and posing sometimes make them seem like botched surgery victims. for example with the lilly scene, her boobs look good in half the pictures the other half they look like a very bad boobjob. overall the tiddies in the lilly scene looked way too stiff and feel unnatural like they are implants. same thing with ava, the funbags look great in the kitchen scene but in her animated scene they look like implants

as i stated above theres also some simple animation which is nice but could also use some work and a bit of double checking next time as while the movements are actually pretty smooth(Nice!) ava has her hand goes through her kneecap(OUTCH!) and her boobs move unnaturally.

the characters are interesting enough.

the story feels a little rushed other than that i like it so far, as its still very early we will have to wait and see how it turns out.

the dev seems to be improving as it goes along though as the further in you get the less glaring the faults become so im hopeful about this one.

version at the time of writing this: 0.3.0