Ren'Py question about my art style for my game

[Socrates_Drawings]

hello there,
Just going to make a Renpy game about harem, corruption and management, yadda yada yada.
I took huge inspiration from the summertime saga, Corruption, and the Headmaster,
so I want my game to include a city that has a school, jail, hospital, and so on.
I hope this game can give me some free money during my college years.

So....


I'm writing this thread to ask,
does anyone like this art style?
Here are 4 of the girls,
(the second one i took inspiration from Savannah Sixx)
I am open to any opinion.
My goal is for the art sprites to be erotic enough to jerk off at.

Um, please reply, I really like to hear your opinion.
*update 1, apparently the nose is a huge issue, i'll try to fix it!

 

[Pretentious Goblin]

I'd have no issue with that art in a game.

 

[Deleted member 5563201]

If the story is well written, you can use wooden chopsticks to make the characters and I'll masturbate.

 

[Socrates_Drawings]

If the story is well written, you can use wooden chopsticks to make the characters and I'll masturbate.

yea, I understand,
but some players are attracted by the pictures,
I hope my game can reach more horny audiences.

 

[Deleted member 5563201]

yea, I understand,
but some players are attracted by the pictures,
I hope my game can reach more horny audiences.

I masturbate 10 times a day, more horny than I am, it's hard to find.

 

[trex999999]

the only un-jerkoffable things I see in those pictures is that I find the noses look too much like the pyramids of giza. Very nice otherwise, but I find the noses hard to look past.

 

[Gwedelino]

I think the same. If there is one thing you should improve it's the noses.

That's the only thing that looks really "off".

 

[danarchist_lewd]

Yeah I think it's generally good enough but it also isn't the most exciting to me. That said, I'll play pretty much any game with 2D art.

Biggest issue I see is lack of variety. More distinct body types, more obviously distinct facial features, different hair styles.

 

[Lewd Asshole]

I hope this game can give me some free money

The noblest of reasons...

Apart from the aforementioned noses. The faces all look the same, which wouldn't be a problem if you were going for the weeb audience and the body types are very similar as well.
It is decent art if you just wanted to illustrate the scene and provide some imagination aid when describing your characters in text, but it's not good enough to fap to the pics alone.

 

[Socrates_Drawings]

Well, I've started to work on the faces!
Gotta find something to replace the pyramids of Giza.
(I suck at drawing noses)
About the varieties,
there are different colors and ages of people,
I want to make sure the world is covered with hot girls.

Variety wise,
I'll work on the sizes of boobs and asses,
but I don't want to draw fatties and old people, just not my type.
(sue me, body-positivity assholes)
I don't want to face a monitor with an unfinished drawing of an old woman,

The noblest of reasons...

Apart from the aforementioned noses. The faces all look the same, which wouldn't be a problem if you were going for the weeb audience and the body types are very similar as well.
It is decent art if you just wanted to illustrate the scene and provide some imagination aid when describing your characters in text, but it's not good enough to fap to the pics alone.

And thanks for this comment,
now I have a direction on what I should work on.
And Yes, turning my passion into a way of income, what a dream.
well, works to do, Allons-y!

 

[rk-47]

kinda reminds me of the adult newgrounds games back in the 2000-2010s like amanda