VN - Ren'Py - Radiant [v0.6.3] [RK Studios]

I break the visual appeal apart from the story/character appeal

Visually - art and animations - Alorth does as good a job as any dev out there and better than the overwhelming majority, by far. So this is maximum 50/50%

Story/Character - There is a an amazing opening with Grace. It is a bit express because you are catching up to the present. I wonder if a framing where the intro is noted to be flashbacks, would allow for more time and unimportant events to pass but I do not think that is a problem overall as stories often need to set up where you are and who you are in an expedited manner. Then they set up your current life, work, coworkers, friends, etc all still fine. The antagonist comes a bit soon, IMO. The intro to LIs from work and then the waitress also feel pretty fast. But then, the girls come into the picture. They are the locked in characters and you can reject the others so again the rush is not bad overall. I do wish some of the first days after we meet the girls was spent with them. Basically it does happen but I feel like it should have happened prior to some of the interrupting events. Overall the story suffers from some of this disjointed flow of events and timing but I do not have a clear opinion on how to rearrange it.

TLDR - Girls are great but flow and timing meh
30/50%

Combined I score 80/100% and therefore 4 stars

If you're a fan of immersive gameplay and captivating storylines, then "Fater Daughters" is a must-play game for you. The characters are well-developed and the plot is intriguing, making for an engaging and unforgettable experience. I highly recommend giving this game a try!

"I agree, and I understand the success of this game. It deserves all the stars given to it. I can't find any specific flaws; I love the progressive aspect, the teasing, and all the girls (ALL) are stunning and have distinct personalities. It's very well written; there's a good author behind it. It's challenging to argue because everything is excellent in all aspects, like a top-notch student. If we look into the details (although the gameplay concept is excellent!), it's just that in some choices, we can't really know where they will lead. What the author considers 'darkness' may be 'lust' for us, or what he sees as 'lust' might be 'romance' or 'darkness.' But not knowing is also good; it's not a significant weakness. No, I think the worst part is that the updates take too long to come, as there are so many possible paths in the story's outcome that we are left on edge at the moment when it becomes what we were eagerly waiting for. It's a shame to wait for years for progress, as by then, we may have moved on to other games. Discovering it fully completed would have been delightful, and it would have easily made it into my top 5. In the meantime, you can see that providing feedback on such a polished game is not easy. You really have to be picky not to like it because it has everything we want; it lacks nothing. Full of passion. Thank you for the game!

You are a guy that fell asleep at the wheel and ended up killing someone and then coma time for 18 years or something. Then you wake up and boom this chick you banged before coma was pregnant with kids and now they move in with you. Wacky stuff right. And yeah it is kind of except for the involuntary manslaughter part. "Ruh roh raggy invoruntary mansraughter, that is bad". Also your gf died of cancer. Dayum. Then the mom of the guy you killed comes to you and wants to... suck your cock? Wait what? Who does that? Yuck lady get some self respect

Yeah the story elements are not that good, so what is good? The 3 girls are good especially madison and the whole correction story line with elements of gaslighting and torture. That is good. In fact it is by far the best part. If you arent interested in that, I couldnt even recommend this to begin with. Manipulating madison into an abusive relationship is just fantastic. Then there are the other 2 girls. They are not as good as madison.

Also, the other two girls are a combination of too stupid and innocent to be best girl material. Especially the blonde girl, she spots you naked and she doesnt have basic understanding of biology or something. Is this girl mentally challenged? I cant be having sex with this woman, something has happened to her brain i believe this is not right, completely unethical and just plain disgustingly wrong no way not for me. Then there is the redhead girl and she is just basic woman, kind of gets attracted to you she is shy and all that but the dynamic just ends up being rather basic she is into you but ashamed of it. MADISON MOGGS ALL OVER THESE TWO. In personality and in the things you get to do to her. It just isn't fair. Madison supremacy reigns supreme.

Story, the things that happen in the story(oh no your neighbor hates you etc blah blah) are quite garbage. But Madison saves it. Needs far more Madison. Madison in a pillory, Madison in bondage gear, Madison naked in public Madison abuse 24/7 is my dream.

There is a very disturbing lack of Madison breeding currently in this. And taking into account this game is quite old, updates are slow and Madison has yet to get dicked. Not even once. It does pain my soul, but one can pray that in the future I will get the chance to do so. The process of turning the brat into the perfect wife is in progress but it has to be completed nothing else will suffice

The game is beautiful but it seems to suffer from a problem of not being able to decide on what tone it wants.

At times it's bubbly, chocolate wouldn't melt in its mouth then it goes kind of dark before jumping back and it's hard to find a rhythm because you don't know if the scenes going to end on a good note or not.

So the plot's like;

You start the game getting stood up. That's bad
You meet a cute lassie. That's good
You get in a fight defending her honour. That's bad
You run away and end up sleeping with her. That's good
Her dad finds you. That's bad
You escape. That's good
You're drunk though and end up crashing. That's bad
You end up in a coma. That's worse
You wake up. That's good
You can't remember anything. That's bad
Three girls turn up on your doorstep they're your kids. That's good
The lassie from before you can't remember died. That's bad
The girls are living with you now. That's good
They're your usual tropes of one being innocent, one being angry and one in the middle. That's bad.
You start to get to know them. That's good
Someone turns up at your door and says she's the mother of some guy you killed when you crashed all those years ago. That's bad
She doesn't kill you. That's good
Apparently your neighbour is a cop and hates you. That's bad

Like.... pick a lane... the issue with the neighbour isn't great either cause the MC makes a big deal of saying "who's this clown, he's not even on duty" then despite knowing this still hands over his registration and the like and answers all his questions like he's a little bitch. Like he's one step away from giving him a reach around. And then when he leaves the MC's all "this means war, I'm gonna mess him up" etc. Like sounds good maybe try to be that assertive when he's standing there.

It's a well developed game. The effort's been put in there but the tone is weird and it's going to really hold the game back the more it goes on. I'm not saying the game shouldn't have obstacles for the characters to overcome. It is a game after all, but it's hard to settle into and enjoy when there's a part of you wondering if in the next scene someone's going to get stabbed or get run over by a truck

Sometimes I want it to go faster, but that would cheapen the experience. This is top-notch writing and the pacing is perfect. Only thing is Allison starts out naked sleep walking but tapers off. The other girls stay in character. Perfect.

The game has a very nice story, although at a certain moment you don't like the behavior that...(SPOILER ALERT)... the protagonist has with his daughters, being a depraved. I don't like that this can be a fetish for some, what I don't like is that you can't decide not to be perverted with girls.

This game is beyond good. The girls (Olivia best girl), the story, the music, the images, the animations... everything is top notch. I look forward to continue playing this masterpiece. The incest makes it perfect.

Game started well. Writing was good, graphics were impressive, opening scene was fun. But the plot has stalled, and there haven't been any more scenes worth while. Last update had a filler arc just to pretend there was still sex in the game, with a character that was just introduced and made no sense whatsoever. I don't mind a slow burn, but the lack of updates and filler content just make it hard to even let the burn build up.

IMO there is little to debate about the quality of the writing & graphics. It's just that 3 years in, the MC has barely gotten to 2nd base with the main 3 LI. Becuase of the pace, its "play it once & forget it."

EDIT: Not changing the review content, but just discovered the game is 3 years old, so I took a star away and maybe should be a 2/5... I don't think there should be any goodwill left on that timeline.

I'm a bit torn on this game... It has all the hallmarks of an all-timer: good writing, very high quality renders, an emotional connection, solid initial pacing, well-thought-out decision/influence system that is not cumbersome... It feels like the devs aspired to greatness and were well on their way to hitting that lofty goal but, BUT...

As it currently stands the game is 90% shiny veneer, amazing, amazing veneer, but once you get past the blinding gloss, you start to see other hallmarks; hallmarks of a game trying its hardest to stretch content. Payoff pacing noticeably slows, writing (while still mostly solid) begins to meander a bit with an over-reliance on internal dialogue to pad/fill, but maybe the most critical, the seemingly elegant decision system actually has next-to-zero impact.

I played through the game twice in both the loving path and the dark path, arguably the most different possible modes, and I'd say the content was 95-98% identical. Not only did the context of scene rarely change, there were no fundamentally different scenes and no cascading context into future scenes.

The upshot here is that a high-quality game with the appearance of multiple themes/routes and deep emotional context is actually a very shallow game that is increasingly trying to pad an extremely linear single-path whose emotional depth is constantly undercut by its own long-winded internal exposition and lack of any real decision impact.

All that being said, as long as these devs stay with it, and perhaps find a way to produce more content on a better timeline, I believe this game will still find it's way to being an all-timer. The only problem is content or the lack thereof; the ambition is there, the vision is there, the foundation is there, and the talent is most certainly there... I just hope they don't spend all their goodwill before the game finally gets there.

Radiant Review (Version: 0.5 alpha Taboo Edition).

This game has a very solid foundation thus far. The story is great and sad, the main character (MC) is a good one, and the wards and other women are well made and hot!

What stands out the most is the system for the wards, you can choose whether to keep them pure, lust over you, or outright corrupt them with choices you make. This is called pure, lust, and dark points and they affect the outcome of future content (and to a degree, current). This is a great system and allows you to more play how you want to play, instead of having to stick to what the writer feels should happen. This will also be great for multiple playthroughs!

What people may not like, in the present form the game is short, there is not much content with the wards (none with Maddie really). That is why I think this is getting downvoted a lot is because people are frustrated, they played through the present content and got basically nothing with the three wards, just a little with two of them and nothing with Maddie.

I personally feel the game is far from complete, but should be commended for the merits it does have. I really like this and I am excited to see where it goes! I will return and update the review once more of the game is completed.

PROS:

• Great MC
• The wards
• All women so far
• The story is good and has sad elements
• The choice system is incredible! I was hoping for something like this.
• What is there is very well done
• The renders are great and girls are hot
• Hot scenes
• Actively being worked on with recent updates

CONS:

• Not much content yet
• Not much content for two of the wards
• Nothing much for Maddie yet at all
• Very short and far from complete as of 0.5A

Solid 4.3 so far, likely to go up as it progresses!

What is here is very pretty but not worth your time or support.

This game is 3 years old already and you are barely kissing your 'wards'...
This is a harem focused game, so instead of focusing what little priority the developers give this game over their other projects gets put into adding new and differing characters then the 3 girls in the banner. These new characters also suffer from having a bunch of exposition dumped on you as an excuse to quickly drop panties, trying to keep your interest as the player.
At this tempo it will be another 5 years before you get to see any penetration with your 'wards'. I'll give it credit for trying to give its characters more depth then becoming shallow, static fuckdolls like other harem-games often end up being, but it doesn't succeed outside of the 'wards'

Eagerly awaiting more. Strong renders, good story, interesting options. The hidden variables hint at future relatively complex paths, and the number of characters introduced as of .4 seems to indicate at least a 6+ harem which is dope. The only thing that'll make it better on completion is pregnancies. 10/10

This game seems really nice. There is also a lot of content and the characters look super attractive. The graphics is also awesome and beautiful renders. Unfortunately when the game starts to have great flow, there is end. It would deserve much more.

great game! good writing, story is interesting. some heartfelt moments (even if we are all here for the same reason). wish i had the ability to do a dark/evil run haha.
The models are divine. cant wait for the next update

Have you seen one of those Xmas movies that has the most predicable plot ever but you still watch it because you know it´ll make you feel good?
Radiant is the porn version of it.
This game goes really out of its way not to hurt your porn feelings.
Exibit A: A woman has a biological daughter and she´s a virgin. Yes you read that right.
Exibit B: All girls are virgins. The mother also. Obviously. The women that aren´t are nice ok? It´s not their fault they lost their V cards before meeting you.
Exibit C: You are absolutely gorgeous since 2 weeks ago. Before you just worked too much and because of that were ugly.
It feels so niiiiiceeee
Look. Somehow this works.
Don´t forget. Triplet daughters. Yeah. My ´cest bros are hard now.
But here lies it´s downfall. They are jeolous of each other. Where is my harem? You´re hurting my porn feelings!
Again just play it. It just works.

The game is just beautiful, and the characters have the nicest eyes. The only complaints I have are the speed of the updates, and how realistic the story line is at points. Definitely worth a try, and worth the wait for the updates!

I would have given the game a 2/5 score if not for the fact that the dev suddenly came out of hibernation and actually updated his game.

Story: 3/5 - Even though the incest theme is played out pretty nicely, and MC's relationship with his daughters is still steadily developed, the fact that the overall slow-burn progression, let alone the extremely long development pace (three updates in 30 months), really makes you become less interested for the storyline. Also, the choice of pouring dramas one by one (how to tackle with the relationship with your daughters, the mother of someone that you accidentally kill, the creepy ex-fed that is somehow committed to destroy you...) just from the start of the game is already a bad move in my opinion, and adding (or rather being throwned by) other LIs seems only to fulfill the horny hearts with some additional sex scenes, which is inevitable since the dev specifies that it is a harem-themed game that focuses on the topic of incest, but it still makes them unfulfilling to say the least.

Writing: 4/5 - The writing is really captivating and I haven't seen any noticeable typos or grammatical errors. Even though the extent of dialogues between choices is relatively long, I don't mind it as long as it's conveyed well.

Visual/animation: 3/5 - the overall visual looks amazing and the character model of the daughters are certainly astonishing, but the animation, especially lewd ones, is very meh. For a game with such compelling writing and visuals, the terrible animation fell out of place.

Character relationship: 3.5/5 - The only issue for me is the relation with Maddie. I don't have complaints about "dark paths" as I know some of them are into this kind of stuff, but the fact that you can get to see more contents with Maddie only when you choose to go for the dark path (aka domestic abuse) and actually hurt her till she gets scared by you is really disgusting for me. As I've said I don't have any issue with bad paths but at least the dev should learn to balance and offer some counterparts with each update.

Overall, the game itself is really promising, but the fact that the dev could spend a great amount of time developing every single update leads me to believe that the game would eventually get abandoned or, if we are lucky, get done after perhaps 10 years of development.

My review of Radiant [v0.4]

A very nice and wholesome daughter-raising game with an optional domestic abuse path
I really enjoyed playing it, but unfortunately it does have its flaws...

The biggest flaw is the small amount of content.
Even if you're reading everything really slowly there's maybe 3 hours of content per year.
This is very little considering the circumstances.

Another flaw is the AUDIO.
The game has background music and everything, but there are many sections with zero audio, and the music itself is pretty generic.
Some short ambient sounds also aren't looping properly.
It's clear that not much effort was put into this.

Then there's the GRAPHICS...
They're good overall, but some backgrounds have blurry Honey Select textures, and dark scenes have very visible compression artifacts.
The animations seems to be hand-made and below average quality and there's very few of them.
At least all the girls look cute though!

Lastly the WRITING:
It's good and entertaining, but nothing amazing.
There are some spelling mistakes and some screens are 4 or 5 lines of text... this could have been done better.
The characters itself are unique and interesting enough.
I really like some of them and I'm sad I have to wait forever for new content with them.

And in terms of "important" CHOICES... they don't really matter much apart from short flavor text and skipping unwanted scenes.
But if you don't want to miss out on lots of extra scenes you have to domestically abuse the third daughter!
This appears to be her canon route and she is always cautious and distrustful towards the MC - whether you treat her nicely or not.
You just lose lots of content if you treat her nicely!
That's pretty lazy by the dev and I don't like it.

...Wait you also want to know about the SEX???
Well, you can pretty much fuck and cheat on every adult women you come across, if you chose to do so.
With the first two daughters it's currently just groping and helping them masturbate (or hardcore domestic abuse including spanking and choking with the 3rd daughter).

Overall this game feels like wasted potential, and if you don't like daughter-raising stuff it's only average.