Mediocre at best.
Pros
- Nice art
- Decent amount of scenes for such a short game
Cons
- RPG elements (battles and such) are very poorly designed.
- Next to no interaction between Kouta and Asuka
- Zero meaningful interaction between citizens and Kouta
- Asuka's motivation was poorly executed
- Corruption progression poorly executed
- Level design issues (town feels empty)
How it could have been improved
- Heroine motivation
Threatening Asuka that the photo would be exposed and immediately distributing it across the male population was an idiotic move.
Instead, it would be more reasonable to threaten a legal action that will jeopardize the mission (on the pretense of Makoto being underage) and distribute something innocuous instead of the photo itself (e.g. some business card). So the heroine cannot ask for help out of a sense of duty at first and out of guilt and shame after fulfilling some requests.
- Interaction between Asuka and Kouta and the heroine's corruption
The issue with many games of the NTR genre is that there is no tangible link between the couple that is being torn apart. It could have been a single woman and a random neighbor in all but name. There needs to be some more activities where Asuka shows that she loves Kouta but inside finds him lacking, which draws her more and more to the blackmailers. It would be easy to combine this with the depiction of the heroine's corruption - add more sex scenes between Asuka and Kouta where Asuka tries to introduce some of the things forced on her (anal, cosplay, etc) but is unsatisfied for various reasons.
- Interaction between Kouta and citizens
The main issue is of course Shizue. Seriously, knowing that a mayor is a pornstar and being unable to even talk to her? That's a wasted opportunity. It could have been easily made into another ending where Kouta is eventually invited by Shizue to the orgy to find out that Asuka is already there and actively participating.
- Battle stages
Either implement them properly or get rid of them at all, nothing to say more.
Pros
- Nice art
- Decent amount of scenes for such a short game
Cons
- RPG elements (battles and such) are very poorly designed.
- Next to no interaction between Kouta and Asuka
- Zero meaningful interaction between citizens and Kouta
- Asuka's motivation was poorly executed
- Corruption progression poorly executed
- Level design issues (town feels empty)
How it could have been improved
- Heroine motivation
Threatening Asuka that the photo would be exposed and immediately distributing it across the male population was an idiotic move.
Instead, it would be more reasonable to threaten a legal action that will jeopardize the mission (on the pretense of Makoto being underage) and distribute something innocuous instead of the photo itself (e.g. some business card). So the heroine cannot ask for help out of a sense of duty at first and out of guilt and shame after fulfilling some requests.
- Interaction between Asuka and Kouta and the heroine's corruption
The issue with many games of the NTR genre is that there is no tangible link between the couple that is being torn apart. It could have been a single woman and a random neighbor in all but name. There needs to be some more activities where Asuka shows that she loves Kouta but inside finds him lacking, which draws her more and more to the blackmailers. It would be easy to combine this with the depiction of the heroine's corruption - add more sex scenes between Asuka and Kouta where Asuka tries to introduce some of the things forced on her (anal, cosplay, etc) but is unsatisfied for various reasons.
- Interaction between Kouta and citizens
The main issue is of course Shizue. Seriously, knowing that a mayor is a pornstar and being unable to even talk to her? That's a wasted opportunity. It could have been easily made into another ending where Kouta is eventually invited by Shizue to the orgy to find out that Asuka is already there and actively participating.
- Battle stages
Either implement them properly or get rid of them at all, nothing to say more.