2D Rate the art for my future game pls.

[Suishy]

Hey guys! I'm Suishy.

I decided to join your ranks of game developers and start creating the hentai game. Now I am preparing art for the training part. This is my first attempt so I would be grateful for any criticism, support and advice. Thank you!

 

[lexx228]

it looks cool

 

[Saki_Sliz]

Woah, neat!

You definitely have a refined style, I'd be interested just to know the lore behind a bit of the character design.

 

[polywog]

Welcome to the forum.

 

[Suishy]

Wow! Thanks for you ratings and reviews. This is really cool.

Saki_Sliz Today I will sign the lore of the game in the first post, if it is really interesting to you. In short - it can be called classic fantasy (elves, dwarves, giants, centaurs, lepricons, etc.) in the setting of the Detroit: Become Human. + I create unique species, for example, in the drawings you can see a Donkeygirl, very stubborn, cocky, but pretty sweet at the same time. I try to write down in detail the characters, habits and life of all the active heroes of the game, so that the player can learn and understand this world by interacting with them.

 

[Basilicata]

Beautiful

 

[BackHole]

It's good man, keep it up

 

[BloomGuy]

Fanfare for the eyes and the fappening of course

 

[lexx228]

Hey! Thanks for feedbacks!

New character is done: Milf-orc Togarra, seller at the newsstand.

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What do you think of her?

nice, but strange choice of color, green-pink orcs ladies more familiar

 

[Saki_Sliz]

Hopefully it is not too stressful

 

[AmazonessKing]

Looks nice.

 

[toolkitxx]

I seriously dig your artwork. Just the artwork alone will make your project unique so dont worry that much

 

[Suishy]

Hey guys, Thank you!
I think you can see the web tech demo if you want see it at this moment.

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Here I test performance and animations. There are still some glitches and not all animations are inserted, half of the text is in Russian (my native language is Russian, I translate the game into English after writing the dialogs) and final of story is not scripted now... But you can appreciate my ideas and what I'm doing in this moment.

You might want to point out errors to me.

 

[Saki_Sliz]

Very impressive! I thought the intro was pretty good. Your use of your art skills and animation really brings this project to stand out. I couldn't go too far due to only parts of it being English, but I was able to get a nice view of that ass
Exaggeration is an art form I am currently trying to explore (and have been for 3 years) and I think your art and style is doing an amazing job of making good use of exaggeration. I also really like how you have gone ahead and refined the User Interface and transition animations. Great work! I didn't really find any issues yet.

 

[Suishy]

Very impressive! I thought the intro was pretty good. Your use of your art skills and animation really brings this project to stand out. I couldn't go too far due to only parts of it being English, but I was able to get a nice view of that ass
Exaggeration is an art form I am currently trying to explore (and have been for 3 years) and I think your art and style is doing an amazing job of making good use of exaggeration. I also really like how you have gone ahead and refined the User Interface and transition animations. Great work! I didn't really find any issues yet.

Great thanks ! It is really nice to read!