Sadly I can't help but feel as if this game started from the end. It skips al lot of femdom teasing, female manipulation, corruption (male in this case, like falling deeper into femdom enjoyment), reluctance, etc.
It goes full slavery from day one and I personally enjoy the process of the MC gradually submitting each day more. From a simple foot massage that evolves into foot licking, ass kissing, etc, all the way to pegging, toilet and pet play. All the while with humillation, teasing and demanding dialogue from the female protagonist and self doubt, reluctance, excitement and ultimately acceptance from the male protagonist
Yours is a valid approach, just too sudden for me.