VN - Ren'Py - Reclaiming the Lost [v0.10] [Passion Portal]

Pretty good initial release. I like the renders, the story is okay, but nothing special. I'll go into more details below.
I will be reviewing the game in the three following sections:
1) The content
You play as a middle-aged guy who finds out he has a daughter somewhere. Your mission becomes finding her. However, you also meet a beautiful blonde who becomes your 'partner'. 2) The visuals
I really like the renders. You don't see MC pretty much anywhere, so everything is seen from your POV. The models look good, especially Chloe, the sister. I do feel like I have seen the main girl and Chloe somewhere (same models) but I don't mind that. A pleasant surprise was Grace, the MILF. who is stunning, but unlike in other games, she is clearly older and has wrinkles.
3) The playability
The story is linear, and the choices you make don't really impact the flow. I would like it if they added more decisions. The only thing I don't really like is the text. Not all the time, and not every single line of the text is bad, but there are some errors that interfered negatively with my gameplay. All in all, I think the game has potential, but could be improved. I hope they add good sound effects and music.

So far not a lot of content, but the ambiance and character personalities and appearance are there. I enjoyed the story till the end. This will definitely be the one to keep an eye on. Can't wait for more content.

This vn has beautifully rendered characters and a promising storyline. Although it is quite obvious that the mysterious girl is realted to the MC's it is still intriguing to find out how their story develops. Hope the developer does not give in to patrons demands and feedback but lets the story flow like it has started.

In its Current State i give the game an Overall: 6/10. That may seem low but i don't typically give high scores for new releases unless it blows me out of the water. Also i rate overalls based on 4 Categories: Story, Sexual Content, Renders, and Character Models. The main thing that hurts the overall rn is the no SC, now i know this is a demo so thats to be expected but i dont do exceptions. There are plenty of demos with content.

Story 7/10 : Ill be honest i have a strong dislike for Father Daughter stories like this but i think i can make a exception for this game, one hopefully there will be other LI's other than the Sister and Blonde Girl. The story is fairly well written and kept my attention from start to finish. Being bomb dropped with having a daughter that was given up for adoption , with the you have to go on a quest to find her seems like an interesting story. Though i have a feeling the blonde girl is your daughter, i really hope im wrong otherwise its painfully obvious. Also why do i have to name the blonde girl, not trying to sound rude but what the dev couldnt think of a name. Naming my character is one thing but naming her is weird. Now for all future reviews i have to call her blonde girl. It also seems like a hint that she is your daughter. Also is it just me or is the PI a dick, like bro im hiring you to find my daughter why dont you go to that town, like why do i have to but for the sake of the story we must. Also im glad we have a Mom character that isnt a milf, though im sure for some she is. I will honestly only play this game for the story and the platonic relationship of the Father/Daughter or Brother/sister. Unless there is a separate romantic interest that is not biologically related to the MC. Props to the MC though for taking things so well.

There is no SC so it gets no SC score. 0/10

Renders: The renders are actually really good, and our high quality with little to no grain/blur to them. 9/10

Character Models: the Models themselves are all very high quality, the sister isnt really my type but still great looking, and the blond girl is amazing looking sadly my incest detector is going strong so ill stay away. 8/10

Great models and pretty good writing for a first release. The undecididness with future tags is a bit alarming but so far I very much like what I'm seeing. v0.1 was pretty short so there isn't a lot to write about. But all in all, we will be watching your career with great interest!

(Reviewed as of v0.1)

So far one of the good start. Pretty models, good writing. The story isn't rushing forward to sex, porn etc but rather making an erotic build-up, I really like this in games and it's a pity we don't get this quite often.

I think the main con is the lacking of sound design. The audio in this game is rather dead.

Relationship development at a good pace. Story has some depth. I would spend time on grammar, story continuity (e.g the "unknown" phone call should have been known), and spelling before the next release.
Great images, with attention to light. That's rare.

Keep going, please.