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Thank you everyone for the comments and suggestions they are all being taken on board.
Well done to those who noticed my mention that I am new to this and looking to give back having played others.
@Black Xoul (Ma mannn)
Currently I am working on redoing the story somewhat to make it flow better and better in line with the Isekai approach.
I am also rehashing loads the basic content. The current hurdle I am looking to overcome is a "quest" type log and how I will incorporate that as well as the save/load between versions.
With me new to all this it will take me some time but I want to bring you all something you can enjoy for one reason or another
Well done to those who noticed my mention that I am new to this and looking to give back having played others.
@Black Xoul (Ma mannn)
Currently I am working on redoing the story somewhat to make it flow better and better in line with the Isekai approach.
I am also rehashing loads the basic content. The current hurdle I am looking to overcome is a "quest" type log and how I will incorporate that as well as the save/load between versions.
With me new to all this it will take me some time but I want to bring you all something you can enjoy for one reason or another
- Jan 9, 2023
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New update has come in terms of version 0.0.2 still lots to do here everyone but hopefully more groundwork to make things easier later on in terms of functions and content!
Introduction to class and homeroom teacher (msjane).
Complete re-write of story to better capture what is going on/happened
Expansion of powers content
Energy and use of powers
Incorporated beginning of Question log see: Tips
Introduction to class and homeroom teacher (msjane).
Complete re-write of story to better capture what is going on/happened
Expansion of powers content
Energy and use of powers
Incorporated beginning of Question log see: Tips
Hello.
Not that much added but it was enjoyable nonetheless. The presentation of the school and our first use of power were interesting.
The modifications made are a good improvement for the worldbuilding.
And thanks for adding a default name.
Some remarks :
Eating and watching porn don't move time forward. Also, watching porn is just a sentence for now (include at least one sexy image; like this it feels almost mechanical). The same, talking to mother takes +1 hour, like the girlfriend but for the sister it stays at 8:00. Peeking on mom too, so we can do it infinitely.
The first day at school should end at 15:00 like any other day and not at 12:00 (and allow us to "Head to class" a second time and kind of give us a little cheat of +2 intelligence). Which leads to another observation : why intelligence increases by 2 while stamina only by 1 (I know school time is 7 hours for +2 and exercising is 1 hour repeatable for +1 but that would mean stamina is more easy to evolve than intelligence)?
Sleeping doesn't restore energy. I woke up the second day with 0 energy.
Why is MC's first name between "" when talking to people. It's really strange.
There are problems with the location :
The entrance doesn't exist : it always display the previous one.
When we speak, we are in "Chat to ..." as location (though we are still in the kitchen with mom or sister).
Mom and sister are in the bathroom at the same time.
Here, it should be 100$ or Money : 100. Like this, it could be anything.
I found 2 errors : one while opening the taptop and one just before finishing the use of absorb on sister (cf files).
Good continuation.
Edit : forgot elements
Not that much added but it was enjoyable nonetheless. The presentation of the school and our first use of power were interesting.
The modifications made are a good improvement for the worldbuilding.
And thanks for adding a default name.
Some remarks :
Eating and watching porn don't move time forward. Also, watching porn is just a sentence for now (include at least one sexy image; like this it feels almost mechanical). The same, talking to mother takes +1 hour, like the girlfriend but for the sister it stays at 8:00. Peeking on mom too, so we can do it infinitely.
The first day at school should end at 15:00 like any other day and not at 12:00 (and allow us to "Head to class" a second time and kind of give us a little cheat of +2 intelligence). Which leads to another observation : why intelligence increases by 2 while stamina only by 1 (I know school time is 7 hours for +2 and exercising is 1 hour repeatable for +1 but that would mean stamina is more easy to evolve than intelligence)?
Sleeping doesn't restore energy. I woke up the second day with 0 energy.
Why is MC's first name between "" when talking to people. It's really strange.
There are problems with the location :
The entrance doesn't exist : it always display the previous one.
When we speak, we are in "Chat to ..." as location (though we are still in the kitchen with mom or sister).
Mom and sister are in the bathroom at the same time.
Here, it should be 100$ or Money : 100. Like this, it could be anything.
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I found 2 errors : one while opening the taptop and one just before finishing the use of absorb on sister (cf files).
Good continuation.
Edit : forgot elements
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- Oct 25, 2018
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"Everyone has powers to"... To what? Guessing this one's going to need a proofreader
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For a Porn game that got its first update there seems to be nothing in this game what so ever other than errors.
Has one blowjob scene from a girl in school and that's about it.
Use the 'Absorb" power on the sister and we get an error and an option to Teleport to Bed even if the teleport power isn't unlocked.
Opening the Laptop we can see an error followed by a large image of nothing. Clicking on 'Watch Porn' has nothing.
Has one blowjob scene from a girl in school and that's about it.
Use the 'Absorb" power on the sister and we get an error and an option to Teleport to Bed even if the teleport power isn't unlocked.
Opening the Laptop we can see an error followed by a large image of nothing. Clicking on 'Watch Porn' has nothing.
I'd rather have no nutsack with hermaphrodites as well. And that only makes sense. The two bits of protoplasm that go on to be either our testicles or ovaries can only be one of the other. (Which I figure is why herms are universally infertile, those bits trying to be both end up being neither) So it makes no sense for herms to have a massive nutsack. Especially when our nuts start out in our abdomen and only drop down later on in life. A herm's 'bits' trying to be both, it would make sense for whatever they become to never drop, since they don't successfully become anything.
Yeah, hermaphrodites are a real thing. All of you going on about there's only two genders are wrong, there's three. They're just vanishingly rare, usually (in the past, dunno bout now) assigned the female gender at birth and have the extra bits surgically removed, cause that's easier than yanking out the female bits. And, as far as I've ever read or heard, are universally infertile, as mentioned above. As a mutation, so far, it's a failed one. I wonder if eventually the mutation will mutate and have those two bits of protoplasm make one ovary and one testicle each. That could solve the infertility problem.
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I mean, if we're talking about human 'hermaphroditism', it is real... Sort of... Just incredibly rare and not exactly a 'sex', per se, but rather a severe mutation; typically referred to as 'intersex'. In most cases the genitalia are dysfunctional to some degree, incapable of reproduction due to internal issues with the anatomy and formation itself or due malformed organs themselves.
It'd be akin to claiming someone with 5 micro penises is a new 'sex/gender'.
It's simply not accurate, as the term is more used to refer to more regularly-occuring, stable sexual phenotypes.
As for newhalfs/shemales tho'... Whilst about as uncommon as true hermaphroditic traits in humans, it does at least tend to carry less complications due to anatomical viability; specifically the internal space requirements and hormonal stability.
It's also relatively easy and common by comparison to surgically/hormonally alter an individual to have a woman's shape and a man's genital set, whereas there aren't really any reasonably safe or even theoretical methods to introduce an entire set genitalia and the required internals to an individual.
Still. In the context of a fictional setting, I think it's totally fine to provide a mix of options.
Cock'n'balls, cunt, booba/flat, etc.
...Tho' I can't help but feel the concept of a cock without balls is incredibly flawed from even the most basic understanding of the anatomy itself. Like... There's simply not enough space within the loins for 'internal testicles' as so many refer to if the same space is already occupied by the internals required for a functional twat, let alone the ovaries and uterus.
At best such a pecker would be little more than an oversized, funny-lookin' clit with no ability to bust a nut...
What with the lack of said nuts.
Could probably still drool precum since the prostate can handle Cowper's fluid tho'.
i have some broken image links.
with linux the path and filename is case sensitive. i could fix this with renaming of-the files. but its tedious. and i have to do it every version.
please change anything to lower case (folders, files and links) or anything consistent
with linux the path and filename is case sensitive. i could fix this with renaming of-the files. but its tedious. and i have to do it every version.
please change anything to lower case (folders, files and links) or anything consistent
- Jan 9, 2023
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Sorry to say everyone have had some family developments so this will be abandoned. For anyone who wants to take the project on feel free to let me know or just crack on
- Apr 29, 2017
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dont be so cruel, suggest any idea to make the game better.
- Oct 25, 2018
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