Hello.
The summary and samples made me come but it's almost empty.
The worldbuilding is fine for a first release but there's nothing to do most of the time. Some locations don't even exist yet.
The characters are few, different and could be described better.
The plot seems interesting but not completely integrated.
The photos/gifs are well chosen.
As of now, the game is short. Encounter with each girls and exploration of the new world. Only 2 things to do (exercising and watching porn).
Some remarks :
A default name for the MC and any other characters that would need it (being called "" is strange).
Something to do in each location and don't add a location just to say "Not available yet".
The encounter with each girls is awkward : they all "seems to be...". The first thing we should be doing would be searching in our room about ourselves, our family and the world itself (well, that's how somebody going to another world, or even in the past or the future, is supposed react to have a minimal control over his life).
Finding useful elements all around the locations like the laptop is a good idea (I like hidden object games so things like that are welcomed though they aren't that much appreciated).
Also it's good to have the locations of the girls (but not the girlfriend?), it should be interesting to at least have a mention of their presence and what they are doing if we can't interact with them.
Watching porn doesn't advance time. The same with the first encounter with the girlfriend (having sex takes some time...).
Don't include image/videos for future content in the folders. It makes the game heavy and could discourage potential players to try it.
Also, what is the use of "Absorb." on the right bar?
And why adding "/more information here/" in the stats? Only put useful information there.
It's definitely promising and needs to be fleshed out to become a good game.
Thanks everyone for the feedback its all very early stages yet but I am looking to implement lots of different things and tidy items up. Lots of good suggestions in here and will be looking to implement a lot of them. If you have some ideas and suggestions of characters or storylines you would like there is a chance to introduce them
Be careful with that kind of thinking. Every player is rather subjective and not always objective. You should take suggestions that fit the game and that you are fine with. For example, if I were to ask you to include gay, I don't think that would be fitting the game, neither you would like doing it (though as a bi man, I would definitely be interested in it but you shouldn't have to do it just to please me or other people asking).
Good continuation.