VN Ren'Py Abandoned Retired [v0.1a] [W.M. Entertainment]

[W.M. Entertainment]

Overview:
The story of this game is about Helga, and her unusual method for punishing her adopted daughters. Since they aren't gonna punish themselves, or maybe they are?​

Thread Updated: 2020-11-19
Release Date: 2020-11-19
Developer: W.M. Entertainment - F95zone
Censored: No
Version: 0.1a
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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[SoulRipper1990]

Hmm seems quite interesting. Will take a look when its have more Content. But for sure on my Watchlist

 

[Deleted member 1322027]

already?

 

[SoulRipper1990]

Hmm ok i couldnt wait and tryed it.
Here are some points.
At first i am missing a bit of Story in the Beginning. In the "Intro" The Girls say that there are adopdet and that Helga use " unusual method ". So far so good. But then a few Screens Later they got allready Punished and how i saw it there allready liked it. And that is where i miss a Part of Story. I mean i dont think that they both liked it from the beginning. There should be a bit of Frames where they Slowly get into that.
Then my next point is something like that on the Picture. Sry but that look unprofessional af.
I know you wanted to make a joke here and there with something like that but it doesnt fit in my Opinion.

 

[rKnight]

The story of this game is about Helga, and her unusual method for punishing her adopted daughters.

Mother: "No pain, No gain!"

EDIT: Excited by the title, here I was hoping that this was about a perverted retired old bastard, sexually blackmailing his daughter-in-law, and fucking his granddaughter while she sleeps, a shame.

 

[orensan]

there are issues with shadows and lighting for sure, yikes

 

[L3z1l3]

Kylie's character info says she is a sadist but she is clearly also into masochism based on the images.
Just sayin'.

 

[AshramAscendant]

Question for those of you who have played this already: The tags at the top say "Male Protagonist" while the description says it is about Helga punishing her daughters. The genre spoiler says "Multiple Protagonists". Which is accurate? I am guessing "Female Protagonist" would be in line with the description.

 

[suppeeps]

first download here!hope this goes well.havnt a clue what I'm doing??

 

[katmandomo]

Uh, dev. The word you're looking for is "chores".

 

[katmandomo]

This VN is such a trainwreck. It starts right off with balls to the wall nuttiness and doesn't let up. There's not so much a story as just a bunch of crazy things happening one after the other.

 

[Avaron1974]

The story of this game is about Helga, and her unusual method for punishing her adopted daughters.

Awesome, sounds fun.

male protagonist

Riiiiiiiight.....

Now it doesn't sound fun....

So, story is about a woman that punishes her daughters and the guy that watches them.

I repeat ... riiiiiiiight.

 

[xmilteach]

Thx

 

[AravinFlame]

Mom is always right. Punish them mom

 

[KingWeWuz]

The focus is so deep into the girls interacting with one another I don't see a reason for there to even be a guy. The male protagonist tag seems tacked on if anything.

There's a lot of hot femsub scenes though.

 

[neithernor]

looks cool and unique, lets see where it goes.

 

[DrWho8248]

Godnes... What the s*** i see here? O_O

 

[Checkmate1996]

lezdom, love it! some more content ,certainly will support u on patreon

 

[Shadowlash]

Ohh my god, this game is amazing! please continue it

 

[W.M. Entertainment]

Hmm ok i couldnt wait and tryed it.
Here are some points.
At first i am missing a bit of Story in the Beginning. In the "Intro" The Girls say that there are adopdet and that Helga use " unusual method ". So far so good. But then a few Screens Later they got allready Punished and how i saw it there allready liked it. And that is where i miss a Part of Story. I mean i dont think that they both liked it from the beginning. There should be a bit of Frames where they Slowly get into that.
Then my next point is something like that on the Picture. Sry but that look unprofessional af.
I know you wanted to make a joke here and there with something like that but it doesnt fit in my Opinion.
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Yeah, Acknowledged. Like I said, I'm an amateur and still in need of tons of advice.
Hopefully the next builds will be better, and the story intro and the building-up could still be altered significantly because the script is still very short. Thanks a lot for taking the time to write this!