Beginning of the story is fine. Fairly predictable, but leaves it open for a lot to happen.
I found the 3 main girls to be very attractive. Looking forward to what his sister looks like. The renders are the only thing really good in my opinion.
The Google translation is horrible. I teach English as a second language. I am pretty good at understanding broken English, but this made me stop reading too many times just to understand the context.
Needs to be fixed ASAP.
I found the 3 main girls to be very attractive. Looking forward to what his sister looks like. The renders are the only thing really good in my opinion.
The Google translation is horrible. I teach English as a second language. I am pretty good at understanding broken English, but this made me stop reading too many times just to understand the context.
Needs to be fixed ASAP.