I'm going to review the game after I've finished playing it. Although I found more bugs and errors in this version compared to v0.9.1, this update is perfect. I think some quests should be connected to each other, but all of them should be a choice-driven process made by the player.
The quests should involve a decision-making process that will determine the character's future in Episode 2.
Pregnancy should have financial consequences for the character.
Just like in the game What's Real?, when the character becomes pregnant, she takes maternity leave from work and has to earn money in other ways (camgirl or street prostitution).
She should have the option to choose whether to raise her children or give them up for adoption (I suggest making this option available at the Church).
Scenes like breakfast, studying, sleeping, and interactions with the brother in the bath and the pizza boy should change to ones involving pregnant women.
If the character decides to raise the children, they can be trained once they turn 18.
So, try to evaluate my suggestions, as I believe you don't need to add new locations, but rather focus on completing Episode 1.