VN - Ren'Py - Rock the Rim [S1 Ep.1 P1] [RWA Studios]

A really great game, one that motivates me to write a review.

You immediately feel part of the story thanks to the animations and images.
The MC is really great, perfect body, beautiful young face which fits the university and he gains experience with sex there.

The female characters are also very well done.

I really want more of this awesome game, so dear devs stay with the project, don't let yourselves be put off and continue to deliver such great quality.

Regards

This release has a lot of potential. The visuals, with their impressive renders and animations, are a highlight. The main concern right now is the English, which suggests that the developer isn't a native speaker. Although it's not a significant problem, addressing it in future updates would be helpful. All in all, it’s a promising start

This is just a first chapter release, but although the graphics are solid and the animations flow nicely (minus the ridiculous ass impact shiver) it does not save this game.

Language errors (many times doing things that Grammarly would not fix, because it works grammatically but goes against what the render shows - like calling a shower a bath, using the wrong pronoun or name or misspelling simple names, calling an ankle wrist etc.) and The Room quality dialogue (so bad it is funny) and a story that seems poorly paced in that it feels extremely rushed. Unless significant improvement is made to the quality of the writing, I cannot see myself returning to this train wreck.

Side note - there already seems to be some attempt at rating bolstering as the 5* review posted discusses Wi-Fi in the Philippines.

TLDR - Graphics are good, but if you read an AVN for the pictures you might as well go look at porn

I think the other reviews sum it up well, it's a visually solid game with attractive girls and a unique-looking MC that I believe has potential. The English definitely could use some work. Brian being spelled Brain the whole time, Caleb being spelled Calep, and the extremely formal way some of the characters speak even in casual situations throws you off. However, as English is not the native language of the developer, it's still pretty solid.

I would suggest running the dialogue through Grammarly or something similar for English, it can help with the easy misses.

Reviewing this as of Ch.1 (first release).

It's a really promising game with both good renders and animations. I will say the previews are misleading, as far as I'm aware there is only one lewd scene in this release. The only thing holding it back for me is the writing, it just feels stale and unnatural at times, also it moves way faster than it needs to. I couldn't help but play the game and think about how I would change what's being said, but also add more dialogue just to flesh the game out more. Also just a side note, some the characters names are "Brain" and "Calep" ???, maybe this is just my normie American brain but those are some weird names.

Anyways, I hope this game doesn't get too much hate because I would really like to see where it goes in the future

I usually don't review first releases but this one has a lot of potential. Visually, the renders and animations are really good but the main issue with the game right now is the english. You can clearly tell that the dev is not a native english speaker. It's not too bad, but it's something that should be fixed in the next releases. Other than that, it's a solid first release.