VN - Ren'Py - Rock the Rim [S1 - Ep.1 Part1] [RWA Studios]

  1. 4.00 star(s)

    unspecified1234

    The dev definitely has a story in mind that they want to tell. The renders are very high quality, and the models are all designed nicely (in my opinion anyway). And this is definitely a lengthy first installment of the game, unlike a lot of initial releases where it's maybe 20 images and then roll credits. Dev put a lot of work into this, so kudos on that.
    I could do with more sex scenes personally, the ratio of non-to-smut felt a bit barren, though there ARE some in it, and they are very nice. Still, it's an adult novel, so spank material is appreciated. Again, for a first release, it's definitely showing a lot of quality and promise. I'll be keeping my eye on it.
  2. 4.00 star(s)

    Bmagada

    Good story, amazing renders, and where there are animations they are fluid.

    Points of criticism:

    The look: Everyone in the game is a super model on level of looks. I get it, porn game....however, if you make everyone a 10, a lot of the women start looking really similar. The dev does a good job varying up hair styles and outfits, but some of them look like they're close to being the same face. This can be fixed if everyone didn't look as if this was the worlds top secret modeling school. When the thacc af women still have jawlines that can cut glass, its getting ridiculous. I know this might sound sacrilegious but there may be too many women to keep track of all of them if you want to keep the visual aesthetic.

    The writing: Its not bad, but it drifts in and out of focus. If English is not their first language I get it. However gotta try to zero in on what you want the scene to be about and less fluff. Like for instance the basketball scene...how many times is the guy going to say "its just luck". Dude, after he shown he's definitely not bad at basketball a simple jump shot isnt impossible. Not every action requires a response from everyone involved. Also you can't keep having the two same characters get inches away over and over face to face and they never do anything. You got women just letting dude grab their tits and chicks just jumping on his dick.......the best friend or sister or whatever she is supposed to be is not shy and shes flirting harder than anyone else. If shes supposed to be a slow burn I get it, but the other half of a slow burn isnt usually handing you matches and pouring gasoline on everything.

    In total though however I like this and where its going. I think there's a lot of work that went into this first chapter and it shows. Its probably gonna be one of my favorites if the quality keeps pace throughout.