Really liked this. Would want much more. Unfortunately, i can not support this on Subscribestar, because it rejects my Card for some reason. If only Dingus had a Boosty Account to support on.
Just some thoughts i would like to give:
The Controls are pretty hard, and the game feels a bit too sweaty. I really can not do that Trap Dungeon part unless i want to get KO'd once or barely any HP left, i am naturally bad at Platformers, so take my words as a bitch bias. Give us perhaps a choice between an Easier Difficulty option or playing Normally as intended. Meaning that the Movement has slightly less Gravity, Jumping range is doubled, Damage output is increased, Enemy HP slightly lower, Gale's HP doubled and regens slowly. This might sound OP, but meh. I am here to fap mostly.
Gale's attack regenerates 1 Ammo every 3 seconds. Every enemy gives you 3 Ammo at least, if you manage to swiftly and effective defeat an enemy like a pro using Athena, you get 6 Ammo instead. Reward the player for being good and clever.
Dungeons do not have a lot of Light. Making it so Gale hardly see much, but the Player is able to see more than Gale in the dark and what is happening to Athena, for example. Dungeons have small light sources from natural light like biolumiscent plants and some of them have artificial light sources like wall torches and etc, and Trap Rooms have plenty of light from braziers and etc. Outdoor dungeons are not dark, but some parts have shadows and such. Perhaps have scenes happen kinda hidden in the background that Gale do not see or hear very much, just know something is happening to Athena and throw Daggers to help her. Making it a bit more of a Hidden Voyerism approach.
That is all. Thank you very much for this! I have played Lotty's Adventure too, and kind of like it. Take care!