VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Roommate Corruption [Final] [Love Seekers]

TL;DR = short game about seducing your childhood friend. Short and hot.

Story: 5/5
+ MC goes to live with his female childhood friend. At start she will be really cold toward him. But she will change her mind fast and be nice instead. Things will quickly escalate into debauchery.
+ There will be an explanation for her behaviour at the end. So I dont think there are any plot holes.
+ Nice touch of simple story.

Art and Sex stuff: 5/5
+ main heroine is sexy.
+ renders are hot.
+ Sex scenes are hot.

Gameplay: 4/5
- This is typical Kinetic Novel. You only follow story, there are no choices.
+ English is decent.
+ The game has a soundtrack. I liked it.
+ The game is quite short and simple. But sometimes there is power in simplicity.

To sum it up:
If you want some fast lewd content, then I will recommend it for you.
If you want something deeper, then this might not be ideal game.

Short, but that's not a bad thing. Quality goes over quantity. There should be more of these short novels. Renders are decent. Maybe a little bit more Sex talk, but thats just my opinion. I hope there is coming more from this Dev.

5 out of 5 stars
in a see of open world, sandbox and story VNs that spann over manv years of development it's so refreshing to see a VN that is just done in about an hours
I wish there were more such short adult novels out there with a good story and great renders.
The story was for me well written and the characters felt realistic (with only a sprinkle of porn logic), Realo felt happy in the end for them both.

hope more Devs feels inspired to make more short VNs like this here

Very good game, even though it was quite quick it was still a very good game. I would prefer if it was long and if you had more options (if it was a sandbox game) but in the the end it was still very good and i liked the story

Definitely a nice game, the girl is beautiful and her model is original, the guy is not too bad. The renders are great, maybe they went a bit overboard with the luminosity. But they are still very good.
The pace of the game is obviously fast, since it's a short game, a lot of people have complained about that, but it didn't bother me, I prefer a short game, with several sex scenes like this one, even if a bit rushed, to one that takes years and years in meaningless bullshit and also deliver the same amount of sex scenes as this one. (under the argument that it is a slow burner).
There's not as much narrative, but they explain the situation well in short conversations, so I have no complaints with that either.
As I said before the girl is beautiful, but maybe the only complaint I have, is that in almost all the sex scenes, she sticks out her tongue, to many it may seem sexy, but the truth to me it seems stupid, in real life you don't stick out your tongue during the whole sex act, you would end up with a totally dry mouth. I think we owe that fashion to the japanese, but it's really stupid in my opinion, crossing your eyes a little is fine.
Anyway, it's just personal taste... The game is short but very good. Congratulations to the developer studio.

>- The Great [+2]
- The graphics and character model for the LI are very pretty.

>- The Decent [+1]
- Text roll back was automatically activated.
- The game has music and it seems picked out for each scene specifically.

>- The Middling [=0]
- The spelling is mostly okay, as is the grammar.
- I like when a game is released completed, but read on, you will see why.

>- The Mediocre [-1]
- There is no animation to be had, just flipbook style between 2 stills.
- This "game" is tagged as a VN when the only choice is MCs name.

>- The Terrible [-2]
- The pacing is god awful, it goes from 'do not come into my room!' to 'so glad he came into my room and tried to finger me while I was doing schoolwork' without ANY steps in between.
- The story is bad, after he tried to finger her, next 'stage' he goes to is bullying her in her own apartment by taking the remote and kicking it under the TV. Then he takes his dick out and when she's on her knees picking up the remote he skewers her head on his dick. THEN he says 'you don't like it, say the word' when her mouth is obviously full. Again, no progression between trying to finger and forcefully putting his dick in her mouth.
- The time scale is 10-ish minutes long and somehow you go from not being welcome in her room > groping and trying to finger > forced blowjob > deflowering > her initiating sexual activity > her bribing you with sex to stay because she can't live without you after a week. No I didn't skip a step for the sake of brevity, that's the whole "game".
- Different stories take different quantities of time to tell, if the design is a 10 minute kinetic novel, this was too big of a story to fit and so all build up was removed, which kind of kills the feel. If the seduction, domination and eventual voluntary subjugation of your roommate was the story you had to tell, it shouldn't have been kinetic nor 10 minutes. I don't know in which direction this mistake was made, but either way it leads to a very unsatisfying product.


>- Final rating: -6, which is subtracted from the expected baseline 6/10 game. Thus, I feel generous giving it 1 star, in my mind it deserves none.

>- Conclusion: Great graphics, everything else is a differing level of bad, but I can hardly call it a waste of time since it takes so little of it. If you just want pretty pictures of a pretty girl taking a dick, then yeah, you may rate this different. Please remember reviews are subjective and what matters to me in a game may not matter to you.

I'm not really sure what the appeal is for games like this. You go from her acting like a bitch to letting you grope her in like 2 minutes of game time? I get that this is just meant to be "short and sweet", as other reviewers have said, but then why make it a game?

There are no animations, only a couple sex scenes, there's no build up, no corruption, no drama, no tension, no nothing. So why not just make this a 3 minute slideshow on Pornhub? Why is this a game when there's no game here?

The renders are very pretty, but that's literally the only thing this "game" has going for it. It's the only reason I didn't give it 1 star. If all you're here for is a quick J.O, then just save yourself the trouble of downloading this game and skipping the filler dialogue, just go on rule34 and watch a video or two.

This was amazing; it has everything: beautiful visuals and models, corruption, "childhood friends", ahegao, and even a little bit of romance at the end.

Yeah, it's short and simple, but that's by design. It's supposed to be a straight forward experience. although yeah, the only bad thing is that there is no more of it.

I don't get about others giving it low rates. It is a short and straight forward game with a nice touch of simple story. Very well perfect for me. Sometimes we don't need complexity in a short story a simple straightforward will do.

Renders look great. Nice use of music. Writing flow is clear and easy to follow without walls of text or odd dialog. Easy gameplay flow with clear click targets. Solid effort, but will probably be forgotten.

What was lacking was some sort of indicator that the girl wanted to take that first step, or that the MC had some way to encourage, compel, or seduce her. It could have been as simple as the MC has a prophetic dream, or that he finds the childhood ring in the bathroom and realizes she kept it all these years. The sudden start of groping broke the story immersion for me. I realize it is a short game with quick escalation, but that first step needed something more.

its a good experience for people who wants to taste how it really feels to have someone really loves you. renders are awesome and girls body is so realistick and just looks like my ex. its short but its better than most otheer 10+ hour games.

Roommate Corruption [Final]

Pros:
Great Renders
Hot Female Model

Cons:
No Corruption
No Animations
Story sucks
Pointless point & click
No options bar
Short Game
Few Sex Scenes that are pretty boring

Conclusion:
The Story is pretty silly with it´s porn logic. There´s no corruption and just sexual harassment that leads to her instantly liking it. There´s no build and nothing interesting about it.
The Renders and the female character is the only good thing in this game, but the game is missing animations really badly and the “sex scene” is short and boring because of it.
I don´t understand why Devs remove the option bar on the bottom, but then again, it´s such a short game, that you probably don´t need it.
I also don´t understand why you need point & click in this game, just to pretend like this game has any gameplay.
Not only that, but I don´t see how the game is anywhere near 4-5*, just because it has good visuals, and anything else just feels half-assed and has a story that is how a 15 yo imagines corruption to be, when it´s just not anywhere close to that genre.

Aesthetic game; shaky corruption.

Sound and Visuals

• nice music with some variety
  • erotic music for bathroom scene did not work because of what Hana was going through
• no sfx
• beautiful rendering
  • quality attention to lighting
• dynamic visuals - the best kind of CG art where each frame composes the characters within the background
• background (apartment interior) looks custom made, never saw it before
• gorgeous female model

• i hate the mc lol, looks like a tool

Writing

• plot driven not story driven
  • what's there works until:

• some lines don't flow with/match the visuals

Gameplay
the fact that it had a gameplay element is silly because:

Sexual content

• there not having animation wasn't the issue for me; instead it's having to click every frame during pseudo animation - would be better if these auto-looped
• a few ogle shots of her behind
• lacked foreplay

• a lot of full-on penetration for the sex wunners with different positions
  • based on how insta-fuck MC was, it felt like he was going in dry so i didn't like the sex much - there wasn't prior indication Hana was wet either but I digress here
• pacing of sex is okay, scenes get better as the plot progresses
• Hana's expressions are enjoyable and play towards the corruption visually

Overall VN started to get good after episode 4 with Hana taking some initiative and finally a singular ass grope. The game feels original in design but could have a better job in the corrupting.

Pros:
-Fantastic renders.
-Hana is beautiful, one of the hottest female models I've seen in a while.
-The whole scenario was just so hot.

Cons:
-Was expecting a decent corruption game.
-MC is just a rapey bastard.

A good short story could have been better but good nonetheless.
The execution for the beginning of the corruption could have been done better.
Would Recommend.

One of the best graphics out there. Yes, it's short, but really intense + it's their first game, and that's an impressive first try. I'd better have a finished short game than an abandoned patreon neverending project

It's a simple VN, there are no choices to be made.
The visuals are amazing, definitely one of the best out there. The game is very well made overall (no bugs, good UI ect.)

However, the story is basically nonexistent. For a "corruption" game, there just isn't any corruption going on. MC just walks up to her, basically rapes her and she decides to like it and falls in love with him. All of that in 10 minutes of gameplay.

If you just want some renders to look at, this is the game for you, but don't expect any writing or pacing whatsoever.

It's more or less typical VN, where you have no real choices on the outcome.
But it's damn sexy.
Pros:
- Graphics are fantastic
- Female model is very hot
- It's semi-animated (the motion often continues by clicking the mouse/action key)
Cons:
- Very short
- No animation loops
- No sounds, some music only

Overall, it's very fappable, with proper animations I would probably give it 5 starts