VN - Ren'Py - Scarlett Steele: Viral Temptation [v0.25 Demo] [VenusVision]

At present this is still a demo with maybe 15 minutes of content. The writing is ponderous with far too much description and weak control of the English language. I also had trouble understanding the voice actor's accent during the initial cutscene.

What little plot is here is nonsensical. It really doesn't make sense that a debutante secret agent would receive initial mission briefing via cell phone when she is already on-site and the mission is underway. Made me think that Steele needs a better handler just like this game may need a better developer.

That the FMC looks hot is about the only good thing I can say about this, but I really don't see much future potential.

I have played the Demo and so far i can say the job is just great! Renders are absolutly lovely, developers are careful to the suggestions of the testers and the community and the project is proceeding smoothly! I can't wait for the full release! We should have more developers like this dynamic duo here!

Grading this purely as a demo:

Devs take note: this is how you do a demo. Jump straight onto some action and save the exposition and character development for later, after you've gotten the player hooked on your images and ideas. This looks absolutely great: characters, backgrounds, aesthetics. Some awkward language (e.g "two knuckleheads from the same toolbox") but nothing that impacts on understanding in any way.

5/5 for demo grading only. Can't wait for more and will update this when there is something worth reviewing as an actual game.

Interesting introduction and story setup with a likeable MC. I like the aesthetic of the main character and look forward to what lewd things may come.

Too short to give a deeper analysis, currently there's only some light groping.
Will be keeping an eye on this one for sure.