Grading this purely as a demo:
Devs take note: this is how you do a demo. Jump straight onto some action and save the exposition and character development for later, after you've gotten the player hooked on your images and ideas. This looks absolutely great: characters, backgrounds, aesthetics. Some awkward language (e.g "two knuckleheads from the same toolbox") but nothing that impacts on understanding in any way.
5/5 for demo grading only. Can't wait for more and will update this when there is something worth reviewing as an actual game.
Devs take note: this is how you do a demo. Jump straight onto some action and save the exposition and character development for later, after you've gotten the player hooked on your images and ideas. This looks absolutely great: characters, backgrounds, aesthetics. Some awkward language (e.g "two knuckleheads from the same toolbox") but nothing that impacts on understanding in any way.
5/5 for demo grading only. Can't wait for more and will update this when there is something worth reviewing as an actual game.