VN - Ren'Py - School Basket Buddies [S2 Ep. 3] [Rrb3d]

Not bad. The graphic novel tries to portray a slower plot line and it takes a while before content comes in. I think the problem for me is that the pacing seems a little too slow - I find a lot of speech content could have been skipped over without actually impacting the story. I'm all for good world-building, but I think there is a little bit too much of the "telling" instead of showing for mostly everything.

I have a similar issue with a lot of posters where the main character's render is just... off... Toby's eyes are way too big whereas the other characters look fairly decent. Some of the dialogue is a little bit strange to me too, but I've had to drop it from Season 1 so I'm uncertain if it gets better by Season 2. I also have an issue with the voice acting (which is a big reason why I wanted to choose the game). Quality defers from character to character, and honestly it seems quite rushed. I ended up muting it shortly after due to how much some of the voices turned me off.

Personally I find it's a game focused on storyline instead of the standard game which focuses specifically on the explicit scenes, but the problem is that it doesn't do the writing well and that there's a lot of forced conflict throughout the story. I would say this game is decent for the content, but I wouldn't recommend it.

Overall it's an average game, not terrible but not the greatest game even.

The good parts: handsome sprites, the butts are good enough to eat lol, has some funny moments here and there, you get to see more nudity around this game often, which if that's what you're looking for a VN, then you got it here.

The bad parts: no option to skip text unless you've read ALL OF IT, very few choices over the time, I feel like I've spend it a long time reading it than interacting. Toby, who seems like the "protagonist" of the story, simply lost the protagonism over 3 or 4 characters mid-game, with a long and slow pacing, making me feel like I'm just reading a graphic book.

If the dev is lurking around here and saw this, I hope that they understand that the base that they construct here is good, but with passing the time it just lost its fire. Good luck for their other active projects.

never laughed so much with a game or novel
the part where the boys tried to persuade the coach to participate in a surprise party for the new one was brilliant. seriously had to recover from laughing for 5 minutes
nice story lines and handsome guys

It's not terrible, but it's not good. The voice acting is decent, but the writing is incoherent. The VA's are reading the lines word-for-word with terrible grammar and numerous typos--presumably, the dev gave them a script without proofreading. I encountered several texture bugs with character models' clothes; the MC model in general has unnerving, bulging eyes like a goldfish. The dev might have a fart fetish, as well as a pissing fetish; there are numerous scenes with this content--not what I signed up for when I became a patron. There is a plot, which is nice. But the sloppiness of each update is disappointing. Wouldn't recommend it.