Where do I start? Besides my strong distaste for RPG Maker, as being one of the most hated game engines for me.
First, I'll tell you how many times I "died"
IN THE BEGINNING; 5 times at that math/puzzle thing, then at least 5 more times at the maze.
Now for "constructive criticism" and to help other devs if they want to make something like this (you should avoid RPGM. I have played two games, and they both have been terrible. The first had issues with crashing and bugging out, and this one has a combat difficulty that should not have been there):
- Do not put any form of math problems in a porn game. This is what I'd expect from flash porn games. The boulder puzzle is the level of difficulty a puzzle should be in a porn game.
- The maze itself had far too many problems. Mainly trying to avoid the roaming enemies, which led to all of my game overs during that "dual". Which leads to...
- ...the combat difficulty is too steep. You get into a fight, might as well just wait until the timer runs out, because it doesn't stop when you are in combat. I counted the damage needed to defeat one, and it was 100+. You need to buff your damage to get those numbers, or waste time using the def buff and use your base damage, which is below 10, while they deal twice your damage (and there are always three people, so if you are really unlucky, then you die before your next turn). Mind you, this at the very start, right after entering the school. There is two fights at before entering, one I avoided due to the second being impossible to beat at the start (games that have this piss me off. Put something to block people from doing it by mistake. Witcher 3 has the same problem. Exploration is a no-no in that game until you are lv 30 which you can't reach because you can't explore). At the start, you should have one enemy, one or two shots to kill, then slowly build up the difficulty, making sure they can at least handle the next level. Slight farming could be added, but not too heavy on the farming.
- The rape of the virgin reminds me of a CHYOA story, minus the murder. Note; the rape isn't what got me during that scene, but the fact it is right off the bat. Should've waited for it.
- What I did enjoy about it was the fact that there is not a lot of enslavement games where you actually do the enslaving.
There might've been something to help that I missed, or return home after the first "fight" in the "main quest", but after rage quitting because of the unneeded difficulty in the maze, I am not trying again (maybe for a while, maybe never)