Script on the way

[Basilicata]

Hello everyone. I am currently writing a script for an adult game. I think it is coming out good.
It is called

i-Tel GossIP: A HACK3R'S VENDETTA

The story is about PR. an 19 yo male student, who had his reputation ruined by a misunderstanding and now he has a hard time at school and home. He uses his incredible computer hacking skills to get even with classmates, professors and anyone who gets in his way. His allies in this adventure are his best friend, Joe Rivers (JR) and some other characters he meets on the way.

This is just a part of the 1st chapter of the script.

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My question is, am I on the right track?
When it is finished how do I find developers and artists etc. ?
Thanks for reading.
PS. I already have enough material and ideas to put a demo together (Almost one hour of gameplay).

 

[wurg]

I wouldn't know personally, but I think @gamersglory would have a better idea on how to find people to help, he works with a team on a couple of different games.

The main question is: are you willing to pay those that help you on the game?, or are you doing this for a hobby? If it's a hobby thing, you could always post a thread saying you are looking for certain people like this one. It might be hard to find those that would volunteer their time to help but it is possible.

If the script is good enough you might be able to join a team and make a capital venture out of it, you never know.

 

[Basilicata]

Thank you. I have to say it is a hobby thing. I ll finish the script and see where it gets me from there.

 

[Aeilion]

I seem very hard but ... after two minutes on this game, I stop without hesitation.
Too many choices that are not, that bring nothing and that are finally completely out of context.

We are the main character and we tell a story of the past but with a little (bad) luck we would be able to be wrong more than 10 times in our story. With only result a guy who tells us (basically) it's your story but I know better than you what happened. And obviously he would be right.

Otherwise ... Well, I did not read everything. I did not find that interesting, sorry.

Oh yes ! If you want to go on 3D, I advise you to avoid stuff like your story with the expandable jacket. There are not many people who would be able to produce that.

 

[Basilicata]

I seem very hard but ... after two minutes on this game, I stop without hesitation.
Too many choices that are not, that bring nothing and that are finally completely out of context.

We are the main character and we tell a story of the past but with a little (bad) luck we would be able to be wrong more than 10 times in our story. With only result a guy who tells us (basically) it's your story but I know better than you what happened. And obviously he would be right.

Otherwise ... Well, I did not read everything. I did not find that interesting, sorry.

Oh yes ! If you want to go on 3D, I advise you to avoid stuff like your story with the expandable jacket. There are not many people who would be able to produce that.

No hard at all. I kinda saw that too. Thanks for the feedback!

 

[Basilicata]

Oh yes ! If you want to go on 3D, I advise you to avoid stuff like your story with the expandable jacket. There are not many people who would be able to produce that.

Less than a year later, I finally did it. I took your advice and did it 2D. If you want to check it out check
Goss_IP v 0.4
Again thank you for that feed back. I changed the script as you suggested. I hope you like it.
PS. At that time I didn't even know what RenPy is exactly, or creating 2D art with layers etc.