- Aug 22, 2018
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The fuck is wrong with the pacing here?
I get off a train, have tea, fuck a lass, go to sleep, wake up, have class, go to get some school books and get told by a librarian that if I hurt her assistant she'll break every one of my bones all because I wanted to read a book.
Serious question .... the fuck is going on?
It's like loads of random scenes all thrown together. Does it form a coherent story at any point?
I get off a train, have tea, fuck a lass, go to sleep, wake up, have class, go to get some school books and get told by a librarian that if I hurt her assistant she'll break every one of my bones all because I wanted to read a book.
Serious question .... the fuck is going on?
It's like loads of random scenes all thrown together. Does it form a coherent story at any point?