VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Second Chance [v1.0] [Maks]

From a writing point of view, this is meant as constructive criticism.

The story itself is good but it really doesn't flow. The constant 'sometime later' are really jarring.

No depth to the the conversations. A simple few lines to move the story don't really add anything.

Instead of having multiple threads going on at once concentrate on one. The Jessica blackmail story could of been so much better.

Said my piece.

I went into the game thinking it’s your generic mom son games with sisters on side. But to my surprise it was different. The MC is not a horny guy from the get go. The fact that you don’t actually have to forget the back story and just go with the mom route is refreshing. You can decide to not pursue her but at the same time she seems to be interested in you tries to get close to you/make amends maybe(I liked this aspect the most, other games I have played is mostly mc chasing ). The models are well done. The story is also good. I love that it already has two paths and give it replaybility that’s a definite plus. The one thing that didn’t kinda made sense is what the previous reviewer had said like how mc smoking weed and spending time with friends affect mom score(I just decided to use my imagination in it that the fact that he is not spending time with his mother after so many years is what affecting the point..who know). The pace at which relations are developing do seems to be bit on hasty side but it could be plus, that way rather than waiting for updates and hoping that the game might complete,devs could just implement a small game (comparison to other lengthy ones)but definitely complete it. I would suggest do give it a try, I personally liked it and hoping that we get timely update with content. Also those of you who can please consider about supporting. Thanks Happy Fapping.

The game is a mix of good and bad. Clearly some of the other reviewers have choosen to overlook the bad and give it a high score

Pro
+ Models are very well done
+ Story is easy to follow
+Multiple paths and replay ability

Cons
+Story is very overdone and contrived to the point of boredom
+Game mechanics make little sense
+Things move way too fast ingame with characters

At the end of the day I like the models. The story is vanilla but alright. The real problem with the game is way the game is coded and content gets triggered.

It makes no sense. As an example why should my step-mothers point score affect a threesome with two other characters? Or why does smoking weed ten miles away affect her point score? Does she have esp?

Good Game must say the renders are awesome and story is fast paced with enough details to fill up the gaps in the mind without cutting out Erotic Contents..its rare to see stories where father or step-father alive in this types of games its great to see a change for a bit the thrill of Secret hidden M/S makes the game much more arousing. Highly recommend for I Fans as the stories from start goes into depth of relationship without so much drama for like ep 1-10 then we get to good part sometimes thats better but Fapping was my main purpose to play Adult Games if that takes me to search full Gd damn map and fullfill a quest to 100 hidden keys then its better just to visit porn sites and stroke my dundy doodly . 10/10 for me.

My Rating of this Game (v0.1)s:

Pros:
+ Fantastic Renders
+ Nice Story
+ lots of different scenes
+ Long Game Play
+ Easy Playing
+Sexy MILF
Cons:
- Father looks a little too young

Conclusion:
Game is starting off pretty good,Son moved in with his mother,and lives there also with the husband and 2 Sexy daughters,looks like a dream come true for the Boy.
Great Game.
Worth the Download

Not the best game there is, but it is still in the beginning phase so wasn't expecting very much to begin with. The story is good(even though it was used more than once, but honestly don't mind that one bit, cause the thing that matters is how it will unfold), the character's models and personalities are nice and interesting(especially the mom), renders are pretty nice(later on could be upgraded and made to look gorgeous). All in all have to say 7.5/8 out of 10 for this one.
Even though it being a 0.1 release.

Not that great, story has been told and retold, and re retold, you can tell a similar themed story and be original, this fails at that .
Very short even for a 0.1, about 5 -10 minutes play time tops, taking your time reading all of the dialogue .
Cannot recommend this at the moment, maybe if the next version offers something more substantial and original, a bit late for that last part though as dev already fell into all the stereo typical tropes .

For a demo it isn't awful. I played both paths already, and I enjoy the not forgiving side for now. It doesn't have a whole lot of choices so far, so I'll wait and see how the next update goes. The renders are good, and the few characters you meet are pretty decent so far. Keep up the good work and hopefully this turns into a great one.

Honestly this isnt what i hoped it would be. You can choose 2 sides, forgive or to not forgive. Well since you got abandoned for 10 years straight and she appears out of thin air like david copperfield. What kind of person would instantly forgive such a woman. Like storywise it is a pretty bad game. Anyway as i went that way with not forgiven, nicole seems to have everything; a whole new family, married with another man and having 2 daughters. then ashley seems to be a bitch aswell and you get to choose to go with her or nicole; both who you despise. Like sorry but playing this a got rather annoyed. Probably stop playing any new updates.

Ok, i've played both good/bad kid paths and must admit the game is good. There are already some h scenes but i won't spoil things. Renders are great, characters are interesting and good. It's wery good for demo version. Can't wait for updates and more from this dev.