I played it for most of the day yesterday, and my overall thought is that it is a fun game if you love sex and most of the possibilities that are included with that.
1. The Scarlett and the Mitski school are duds and they need to be developed into the storyline.
2. I am a fan of lesbianism as a valid sexual alternative, I think that incest with the mother and the school girlfriends should be developed further as well.
3. Maybe consider the inclusion of transsexual MTF characters and Femboy characters and weave them into the story as well.
4. Keep the MC single and mainly lesbian.
5. The Cam Girl path is good and it should be expanded.
6. Bimbos typically want to be "taken care of" only, not married.
7. The Bimbo path is a little confusing to me; how does the MC end up getting married and having a 'son' all of a sudden?¿
And how do you get out of the Mansion, I think it has too much 'Orgasm' grind attached to it.
I enjoyed your game, keep at it.
The Brain