English: 8
User Interface: 4
User Experience: 3
Art: 5
Dialogue: 7
Story: 4
Opinion: 3
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Avg: 4.86/10
I wanna start this with a question. Does this sound familiar?
"MC suddenly has to go to the only school location in the Koikatsu catalogue, usually 90% females, for some contrived, semi-mystical reason. The game has a default Renpy UI using ugly default menus to travel from location to location for the three time periods of each day. You get one story interaction, then repeat the same canned scene of MC interacting with the love interest but no actual dialogue or personability. Just something like "We hung out and she said crazy stuff, you really shoulda been there." But you could have been, the writer didn't want to do their job. You repeat these same scenes over and over until you get a unique scene containing no more than 10 lines of ACTUAL story exposition, then have to fall back into the aforementioned boring gameplay loop. The story also lies and says it's a slow burn and focuses on the story, but between every line MC ogles or lusts after any and all women he meets in his mind. It tries to give wholesome vibes but all the love interests end up looking so young you can't help but feel like they're disgustingly underage. All the while, you never get to the actual point because this is a sandbox. A bunch of completely disconnected events that are supposed to be building to something. But since the game is a source of income, stringing the story along forever is in the best interests of the creators so the real conclusion is you'll never get to the point."
Obviously, that last little bit is my opinion based on experience. So far the sample size of VNs like this all do this so I have low expectations. But anyway, that sounds like at least 5 of the other KK VNs on this site, and frankly, none of them are captivating. At least to me. The synopsis is MC is sick (even though it's never really shown) and it's because he has magic and the government and Arcane Council will hunt down anyone who has any. So he's enrolled in an academy with a teacher that will help him control his powers. As of this moment, I haven't learned much more than that, I haven't clicked enough locations to see any more story bites yet. The council is just a looming evil that isn't more than some foreboding thought as opposed to this oppressive force exacting their will on everything. No matter how much the three characters that directly interact with them say they are. So all you get until the story expands are the boring slice of life nothings that I talked about. I'm not asking for explosive action or constant drama, but more than "Hey how're you?" "Oh, good" "That's great" then MC thinks "God she's hot" ad nauseum.
And in the description it boasts great characters, but here they are:
Azumi, adoptive mother that doesn't want to lose her son but sUdDeNlY tHeY'rE aTtRaCteD tO eAcH oThEr
Ina, a budding private investigator that's eventually uncovering the truth of the council
Hisaaki, good guy friend with a missing gf
Kimiko, sporty girl with some mild personal trauma that makes her want to excel at all things physical
Akira, rich kid caught up in family drama
Nari, innocent nice girl that actually isn't a harem facilitating cuckquean I'm shocked (but we'll see)
Sumi, standoffish teacher that doesn't trust people anymore, so much so she feels comically out of place
Midori, innocent weeb artist with middle schooler syndrome and social anxiety
Hana, smart bookworm daughter of a council member supposedly trying to change things from within
Takane, playful rocker girl that's bi and enables the "God she's so hot" type dialog
Asuka, big tiddy onee san without the ara ara
Kat(cat), A cat that was turned into a person to add a neko tag and has the intelligence of an animal so it feels gross to interact in any sexual pretense with someone so mentally challenged
The whole time this story trudges along, MC acts like it's still his second day in town. Meanwhile its been FIVE MONTHS (in my playthrough so far) and acts like he's fresh faced and I don't get it. While I understand this is some elite school with rich families (that somehow they smuggled TWO random plebs into) it isn't communicated well being portrayed by Koikatsu models that look like happy anime girls or the spanish worm aliens from men in black if they're males. All in bright teletubby technicolor. I'm sure there's a semi-decent story here somewhere deep down, but the big issue is the sandbox. It's completely unnecessary and actually hurts the story because by the time you've actually done the arbitrary requirements for the next event, it's been so long since the last even you've probably forgotten about what the hell is going on. I'm not sure if I'm keeping this line, but I don't even think I'll finish this one to current end of content before calling it quits. The other issue is that MC does nothing. He wants everyone to be "nice" and be friends. While every other character does everything all MC ever does is bridge the interpersonal gap between two people that sit a desks width apart. And he does it with the "Why don't you just talk to them?" approach.
Now on with the "romance." What's shown makes no sense, and what the writer would have you believe is slow burn is really "you haven't wasted enough of your time clicking the menu option to see this character, to romance this character yet." All the while MC is still trying to get with all the girls. Sleeping with Takane while saying he loves Nari but never telling her that he's raw dogging her. Or that he's trying to screw his own mom and touching a girl that has the brain of a cat? This isn't wholesome. This isn't sweet. MC and his horny monkey brain just walk girl to girl saying "wow, you've had it hard, vent to me, it's okay. You're so hot, wanna make out?" And you can't tell me anything different as all the conversations and meaningful moments all cut to black with a recap text saying "We had a long talk for X amount of time then parted ways." Or something comes up that means the interaction has to abruptly end. So you the reader feel no connection to the characters. And when MC actually thinks "Hey, maybe I'm a piece of shit" Sumi says "Not if you reflect on it" Then rewards him with sex.
The English is fine, but there's a bunch of spelling mistakes, even words with numbers accidentally in them or outright missing, so no editing is done retroactively. The UI is completely default with a font that is not the easiest to read. The UX is "Click this renpy menu to interact with this girl and get +1 updoot" So it's annoying. The art is base Koikatsu. The dialogue isn't bad, at least when mc doesn't chime in with thoughts like "But god that ass." And the story is spread so paper thin on top of not knowing what the hell to do to get to the next event and when that I just can't enjoy this.