I really enjoy this game. Except that I wish you could replay some scenes. Especially with the girl that the MC claims for himself. I mean, week after week, she just stares at you in your room, and there's nothing you can do about it. What a waste of a girl.
Ren'Py Seeds of Chaos [v0.4.08] [Vénus Noire]
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There's one way to prevent it, only available if Rowan claimed her when capturing Raeve Keep. When she confronts Rowan about trying to escape, you have to choose to have him tell her he loves her.
Perhaps if heavily corrupt Rowan options are added to the early parts of the game, eventually there might be a way to keep her around by fully mindbreaking her? Though probably not, that sounds like a lot of extra work.
New update:
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Hello, folks.
Once again, I, Winter, have taken over your screens. Now I am the master. I am invincible. I am...
Off Screen whispers
Yes yes yes. Okay. Get to the point.
First, this is your reminder that we have the new poll up. We have one for Patrons (
But, the actual reason Arioch has (foolishly) given me a microphone is to tell you about our newest reward goal.
To help promote growth and give back to you folks, I am offering an opportunity. When we reach 8.5K, I will write one non-cannon scene for you guys. An official fanfiction for Seeds of Chaos.
Why care? Because if we reach it, it'll be up to you what pairing is included, and it can be anyone. Anyone.
Jacques and Shaya? Sure. Cliohna and Ulcro. Why but okay? Duke Raeve and Alexia? ...why?
This is going to be a one time thing and is totally non-cannon. The mechanics of how you guys will decide what I write can be left for when the goal is reached.
But I love you guys and I love working for this game, and I just want to give back to you guys with something weird and fun.
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Fine fine, I'm going I'm going."
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Not sure how I feel about this, maybe this will result in more Rowan fucking Liurial? That would be nice, of course more elf sluts for Rowan to fuck in general would be nice.
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Hello, folks.
Once again, I, Winter, have taken over your screens. Now I am the master. I am invincible. I am...
Off Screen whispers
Yes yes yes. Okay. Get to the point.
First, this is your reminder that we have the new poll up. We have one for Patrons (
You must be registered to see the links
) and one for the Public (
You must be registered to see the links
). They're very important so please fill them out.But, the actual reason Arioch has (foolishly) given me a microphone is to tell you about our newest reward goal.
To help promote growth and give back to you folks, I am offering an opportunity. When we reach 8.5K, I will write one non-cannon scene for you guys. An official fanfiction for Seeds of Chaos.
Why care? Because if we reach it, it'll be up to you what pairing is included, and it can be anyone. Anyone.
Jacques and Shaya? Sure. Cliohna and Ulcro. Why but okay? Duke Raeve and Alexia? ...why?
This is going to be a one time thing and is totally non-cannon. The mechanics of how you guys will decide what I write can be left for when the goal is reached.
But I love you guys and I love working for this game, and I just want to give back to you guys with something weird and fun.
Off Screen whispers
Fine fine, I'm going I'm going."
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Not sure how I feel about this, maybe this will result in more Rowan fucking Liurial? That would be nice, of course more elf sluts for Rowan to fuck in general would be nice.
One thing you could do with Shaya is for her and Rowan to have an affair, if Jezara is going to go after Alexia it's only fair after all.
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I'm not mad you posted this, but I want to explain "don't know what to do with" a bit better. Me and Rein are professional writers. You can hand anyone in the entire cast to us and we could have a pitch for a scene or a short event chain for them beated out very fast.
What I mean is a broader narrative arc. Progress is slowly being made for Shaya/Greyhide. But, we have lots of possible places to take their arcs and we've been trying to build them.
What that means is intricate beat by beat examinations of charachter direction, thematic throughlines, setting up background and reveals, and then integrating that with the broader narrative. It's even harder in multi-state where you need to construct multiple directions and resolutions and have all of them be satisfying. While also trying to limit total workload.
A big part of the issue is the production debt. Arioch is fantastic creative, but not everyone can stand the mind numbing tedium of mapping if reveal A goes in story beat 28 or 29 and debating that for hours. Dark Master had a looser more improvisational writing style that worked better for a project he was mostly solo writing. It meant when the bulk of event writing moved to me and Rein, we had to basically reconstruct a lot of the arcwork from DM's style.
I'm not shitting on Arioch or DM's choices here. What they did made sense in context. But it puts writers in a challenging situation. It's much much easier to finish charachter arcs for charachters you haven't written yet because you can plan everything in advance. But every event with a character solidifies them and adds something that needs to be accounted for in the extrapolation. A lot of the behind the scenes work on the game is just me, Rein, and DM just sitting down, arguing, and building the narrative foreward and backwards.
So yes, I could write a Shaya event right now. But, it would make us fucking misrable later when it makes the arc writing more complex and potentially worse. Every event without a plan is a debt that has to be paid later. That is what I meant by "Have No Idea What To Do With Her"
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Wait, Shaya/Greyhide is a thing that's going to happen?
Time to add that to my ship-list.
Thanks for explaining things a bit, but at the same time given Shayas' more flirtatious nature, and her status as some sort of dancer/whore,(she literally winds up running a brothel, dammit)a casual friends with benefits thing wouldn't strike me as being all that big of a deal, even if a more complicated and intricate affair would be. I mostly just want Shaya to get some more "attention"(read: Dickings) from Rowan because she immediately starts flirting with him the moment they meet.
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I'm not saying that we're not going to allow that option. I'm saying that if that was all that we did with her, it would be a huge dropped ball and we can't do that with her until we've finished working on her back end.
Shaya will fuck Rowan in time. And when she does, you'll be happy we did the work to have a plan.
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I know we're trying to be serious about the broader picture for Shaya, and I respect that, but I just want to say one thing:
Jezera/Shaya/Alexia threesome.
That is all.
Jezera/Shaya/Alexia threesome.
That is all.
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Would certainly be nice if it did, I might have actually finished a book or two by now.
Can anyone help me? I figure out for my life how to check item prices before buying them in the shop? Also why can you only right click to zoom into items that you can buy, and not right click the ones with the red square to see what they are?
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It's a thoroughly broken system. Once upon a time, it worked sort of okay. However, since those much earlier builds, the inventory/store been reworked, half-assed, and messed with so much it's gone sideways and bonkers. It's also obvious it's a low priority for the development team. I know this sounds really negative but *shrugs* it is what it is; I don't fault them for putting this on the back burner while they work on other, more important stuff. It's easy to avoid it completely in-game anyway. Plus, you can get gear and other rewards through events at times so there is that. Though, I do want that all the stores that players can access to be completely vaulted away for the time being to spare players the frustrations with it until it gets the attention it really needs.
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I for one would not like a self-writing book.
I happen to like the suffering and torture that is known as writing. It's the reason why I drink.
But, seeing as I have no money to buy said drink... I am on an extended 'writers' block...
A shame, because I have 20,000 words into this HTML game that I wrote on a all-nighter coffee binge about 2 months ago which I wrote in a single day.
I happen to like the suffering and torture that is known as writing. It's the reason why I drink.
But, seeing as I have no money to buy said drink... I am on an extended 'writers' block...
A shame, because I have 20,000 words into this HTML game that I wrote on a all-nighter coffee binge about 2 months ago which I wrote in a single day.