monk_56
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For me at least the best fem-dom arcs also have a component of romance and stay in the bedroom without extending to other facets of life- which is why X'zaratls tops the list.In my defense (and Shaya's). I'm not really a F/m Femdom writer. It doesn't do anything to me. I can write Lesdom and just domination generally. But, I probably wouldn't vibe with the material the way Rein would.
Ignoring the fact that I vastly prefer male-dom and egalitarian arcs to fem-dom baseline, Shaya's femdom arc was set up to fail for me from the start. Since she is A) Doming Rowan for the purpose of bending him to Jezera's will and not just to have sexy times and B) It didn't have romance vibes. Its a good pathing if you like your character to be a broken bitch and it is well written- it might not be in your wheelhouse since you are the lord of maledom content- but it is still good.
You haven't even gotten to really write much of the Shaya fem-dom type content yet since the first time it came up was one path of the finale.
But yeah, the other side of the pathing for Shaya is a masterpiece. You have dom / romance vibes. The player got to live out some Noir by going through all their conclusions. There was hand-holding. Feels like the player might be able to Netori Jezera, which will be incredibly satisfying.