dear dev, if youa are reading, consider the following.
ok i need to say this, and i know that this is a erotic game so some sexist things are not a big deal... BUT.
1. in the game ( version 0.043) you only have 2 powers, see through clothes and body transformation (x-ray and have a big dick to be short) in not a single moment you got something like be ultra charming or magic corruption of the mind to break some taboos, NO there is nothing like that.
2. two of the 3 girls that falls ONLY for your dick, are lesbian and 2 are your same blood (i think)...thats is not how it works! the scenes and characters int this game are hot as hell, but the story and how it developes tottally kick me out, wich sucks.
trust me when i say, showing my dig bick doesnt work like that, womens don start to jerk you off in place and lesbian dont turn straights with the mere sigh neiter.
again im sorry if this what i say rings the wrong bell. but with so many good games about magic and mind control i belive the story deserve a better work in the writing.
good luck with your proyect.
Hey, Thanks for your feedback, that's really important for us and you are right, this is the 0.043 version, but did you know how it has progressed until now? I mean, did you try the 0.02 or 0.03? If don't, I will explain to you.
-0.01The first version was private, cause we did it for fun and share it with some friends to verify the viability of the project... (Has a lot of bugs cause it was our first time doing a visual novel)
- 0.02 Was the first public release that we made, fixing all the bug and improving from the last version with the feedback of our friends, fun fact: this one was made in Unity and didn't have a lot of basic options like, save and load, control the music volume, resize the window screen, a little compatibility with android, etc. (we did it in unity cause it was the closest engine to us)
- 0.03 having a lot of this basic issues and a lot of feedback of the public, we decide to move to renpy, so this version was focused specifically to make everything again to renpy (And when I say everything I mean everything, we made a full redesign of the all characters and code everything again now in Renpy) it was a big progress cause fixed a lot of bugs with unity and bringing the important basics features... but... There was no UI or map and the story or scenes were few.
- 0.04 I have to say it was a big update, we added new features like Map navigation, Affection system, UI navigation system, Hints system with the sex note icon, cheat system, etc. you can check the full changelog.
So, if you see the progress it has been well, but the game keep being in a very early version and what I see is that you are expecting a lot of content in the story that needs backup in art, code and new features, like illustrate more scenes to deepen in the story with each character making it more "Logic?" at your point of view (We can't make just 50 lines of dialogs without any image that just the characters talking cause it would be really slow and boring) and adding more powers with the Sexnote magic which means a lot of code and art scenes again.
The story, for now, is made to give you more hot scenes without having to read a 100 pages book about the progress of your relationship with the characters, for now, there is just the beginning of the game, in next versions we will focus on specifics characters to improve the story and game flow, in fact next update (0.05) will be focused on expanding the world of Sexnote, adding new characters (6 New characters), new locations (5 New locations), New scenarios (10 new scenarios), new side stories and of course new sex content and animations. 0.06 will focus on Brixxida and the Sexnote, that's right, what you are asking for, we are going to make more powers or spells, improve the story and the features related to the Sexnote, and then we will make polls to know what the public wants us to focus on next updates, improving the story and the flow with each character step by step.
So, thanks for the advice, we are really focused on making good content, and improving every time. When a future update is focused on one of the mothers, for sure we will do the respective changes and improvements to the story adding the necessary content to make it the best we can.
PD: By the way, you can check the status update and road map on patreon and every month we make polls to decide the future updates.