This review contains some spoilers, so be warned. It's also pretty critical, but rest assured that I stand by my 4 star rating.
Gameplay - There's not a whole lot of it. There's a thing where you have to turn on magic-vision and click bubbles, but it's trivially easy and becomes obsolete soon enough. There's also a part where you have to click at the right time to take a picture when it's not blurry, which is mostly just annoying. I ended up just clicking really fast immediately to get it while it was clear and before it got blurry, and rolling back if that didn't work ( I enabled rollback with unren). Besides those two things, it's basically just a matter of following the linear story, which has a hint guide if you go to the second page of the sexnote so you can't get lost. I've seen some complaints about the grind. I didn't think it was that bad, though Jane's story in particular was kind of tedious, with Hinn's a close second. It felt pointless for there to be multiple segments of the day, when 90% of anything that started during the day would take the entire day, whether it needed to happen at morning or noon. Jane's also required going home to get a job from her (always the exact same job), then going to the office, going up the elevator, etc. etc. Hinn's was at least a little more streamlined. Both of them could probably do with fewer repetitions.
Story - Nothing wrong with the premise, but I have to be honest: the writing is bad. Very unnecessarily wordy at times, and at the same time full of very awkward phrasing, to the point that it's laughable and kind of takes you out of the game. The characters also seem to swing wildly back and forth. The mom character gives the MC a handjob like it's no big deal almost immediately, but then way later, after she should be a lot more open to things, he feels the need to use his magic command voice to rub his dick on her feet? There's several other instances of characters being implausibly slutty, or of the MC using magic when he doesn't seem to be meeting resistance. Implausible sluttiness is fine, but inconsistency is jarring.
Art - This is what kept me playing. The art in this game is uneven at times, but when it's good, it's fucking fantastic. Lisa's later scenes in particular were really great. Some characters did seem to look too different between their portraits and their scenes, which was disappointing (I thought Kylee looked really hot, but most of her scenes I thought she looked weird. The therapist looked weird to me in portrait, but hot in scenes), but the high points absolutely make the game worth playing, and even most of the more questionable art was A) Interesting in its own way B) Probably uneappealing to me mostly due to personal taste.
Overall - Like I say in the art section, the scenes really carry this game very effectively. Personally, I find scenes more enjoyable when I've actually gone through the game to get them in context, but I see why others would prefer to just unlock. I hope at some point the writing gets edited, and Jane and Hinn's questlines get streamlined, especially given how unrewarding Jane's feels currently.
Wishlist - Kind of suspect the devs aren't fans of anal given its total absence so far, but I'm hoping it will get added at some point. I'd also love some more explicit cum-swallowing, etc. and more cases of the girl still having cum on her post sex scene like in one of Anastasia's yoga scenes. Finally, more risky scenes like with Sue while Jane's there would be cool, ideally with at least one where the MC gets caught, there's some drama, but then it eventually results in a three-(or more)-some. Other games I've played just have characters eventually acknowledge that they kind of guessed, and brush it off, which is underwhelming and undercuts the tension.