VN - Unity - Sexy Apocalypse Girls [Part 1] [Strawberry Playhouse]

The Apocalypse story line is promising. The "Sexy" part of the Apocalypse is more to do with the nice graphics rather than the plot. The dialogue could do with more depth, but overall a good effort for the graphics. The mini-games were ok - although I didn't see any point in having them except to break monotony. Will be looking forward to the next update.

The game's artwork is absolutely stunning, with beautifully rendered characters and backgrounds that create a visually captivating experience. Each scene is crafted with care, and the character designs are both attractive and expressive, enhancing the emotional and sensual aspects of the story.

The narrative is one of its strongest points. It weaves a mature and thoughtful story that goes beyond mere eroticism, exploring themes of romance, desire, and personal growth. The dialogue is well-written and the characters are developed with depth and nuance, making it easy to become invested in their journeys.

Interactivity is key in this visual novel, and excels in providing meaningful choices that affect the story's outcome. This branching narrative structure ensures that each playthrough can offer a unique experience, encouraging multiple replays to discover all the possible paths and endings.

The erotic scenes are tastefully integrated into the storyline, enhancing rather than overshadowing the plot. These moments are crafted with attention to detail and sensitivity, ensuring they are both arousing and emotionally resonant. The game strikes a fine balance between explicit content and storytelling, making it a standout in its genre.

VERSION: Part 1
SUMMARY: Solid start, needs more work though with some spit and polish

PROS:

1. Nice looking models
2. Basic story, survival, end of the world stuff. This does provide some scope as long as it doesn't become total bullshit. Potential is there.
3. Written alright, dialogue is pretty basic, some minor grammatical errors and such, needs a little more work, but overall acceptable.

CONS:

1. Not much here right now, there are only simple images of lewd , a BJ scene would have maybe 5 images in the whole scene (guessing but its few) it just kills the lewd scene off and there is no build up or appreciation for the result (if you get my meaning)
2. No animations, which IMO is a sad affair simply because the models are nice and it would make this game much better to have some decent animations.
3. Naming the MC is not an option, at least not as is now, maybe a mod or something can change it later?
4. As mentioned, writing is OK, but there is room for significant improvement, the characters are not developed and they all pretty stupid and shallow.
5. Mini games are OK, but need some more work, only serve for some extra "game play"
6. Some choices are frustrating and useless because choosing the wrong ones causes the game to end and need to reload...waste of time IMO, rather provide other options or other path but maybe end on same result, just some extra scenes?

TLDR: Good start, but there is no anticipation, character relationship development, nothing that bonds characters in any significant way. Anyone who says there is a deep profound story and choices are meaningful is talking bollocks.