HTML - Abandoned - Shame [v0.1] [TildeWero]

this is just a stupid game ever play.
first when you start the game, this go form to nowhere, why need tell your name and the game forced you the name is Jane?
forced you wear panties, where you can get the panties from who?

The story is allegedly there but I couldn't figure out what was going on from the start. The grammar could use a lot of work. It shows a lot of text messages with bad texting shorthand. At no point does the way this story is being told tell you anything about why things are happening the way they are. Very odd would not revisit even after completion of the project. Characters and world need to be further flushed out. As it stands there is no real substance in this apart from a lot of rape, mind-break and humiliation themes just hanging out with lots of bullying and blackmail.

Makes no sense, characters are boring, there is no gameplay, feels like someone is just rambling. Some of the themes of the game made me want to try it out, but it was such a mess of just everything that the few things I did like was quickly replaced with something I didn't like, which makes it useless as a porn game. And it also forces you into a role of some character you have no control over, which I guess can work for some games, but in his particular game I hated the "player" character more than usual. Typical limp dick with the voice of his ex or something stuck in his head, but he's not even really a character as he has zero personality traits beyond being a generic limp dick. The main character is really the voice in your head which is a horny psycho slut and the best thing about the game, but unfortunately you're not "playing" her. I say "playing" because you're not really playing anything, you're just clicking trough something that's supposed to be a story but is so incoherent you won't be able to understand what is going on most of the time. And a lot of the pics and gifs doesn't match anything going on in the so called story so, yeah, who knows what this is supposed to be.

This game isnt even a game its just a boring sexual fantasy of the developer when I play a porn game i actually wanna do something more than just scrolling down and reading and this is just super boring literally no interactivity, I hope this project gets abandoned due to how unsalavagable this all is

Taboo, vulgar, disgusting and edgy - exactly what I love. Excellent porn choice imo, models are consistent, writing is passable; enough to keep things consistent and hot.

This is a kinetic story so if that ain't for you then ah well, however, if you like dark fantasies then you should give this a shot regardless.

Not a game, only a kinetic novel.

Several mis-sized images and videos taken from various sites and dumped in an almost completely senseless fashion.

Since none of it makes much sense, it's extremely boring and certainly non involving.

I know they are just going for a shock factor but since it's so bad it doesn't work.

So, while not every kink involved is my kink, this is super-hot for those who have a craving for the more vulgar and extreme situations.

Plot: Straightforward and unrealistic, but does not pretend to be anything other then exactly what it is - a fap game with extreme non-con, vulgarity, and humiliation

Characters: Consistent enough, can tell the ones that matter apart.. there are only two women so far and what is happening to them (seemingly daily) is quite hot. Three if you count the imaginary one, who is actually even hotter (and I wish there was more variety to the stuff written on her) - but she provides some very hot narration

Art: real-porn stuff. Fairly consistent characters, fairly sexy scenes. The guy-on-guy models chosen are... 'meh', and wish there was more of the sister.. but overall good enough to do the job

Choices: None as of v0.1. Which is a shame (tee hee) because making the evil choices can create some wonderful immersion.

Overall.. is it the most complex and deep game on this site? No. But it is absolutely wonderful for those who like vulgarity and unapologetic darkness in fiction

Where to even start. This "game" is a mess. As stated before the name choice is there but disregarded, I assume that is part of the entire problem with this game. The Dev put 30 seconds of work into learning Twine / Sugarcube.

The whole game screams lazy;
- Pictures don't have a set size or better yet, limits so you get massive horrible quality pictures you need to scroll left and right to see.
- Absolute UNITS of text walls that weren't broken up with a new passage.
- The passage / choices that are there don't lead to anything meaningful to warrant the word "game" being used here.
- Sure the story is trying to be edgy and work in some hardcore content, it also has no idea what its talking about, reads like you told chat GPT to rime off edgy r*pe conversations, mixed the 30 results up and stitched it together. I feel i need to substantiate this so here is a cut from the game of 3 sentences said in succession:
young girl character: "GOD, MRH, OH GOD!! YOU WANT IT TO BE REAL, DON'T YOU, MHJANEY?"
MC: " Sorry, mom. I didn't mean to..."
young girl character: " Meh... We're here already? "

I have no idea what I am reading here and the rest of the panel doesn't help at all.

Give this a massive pass.

Ver 0.1.

Great start, not really a game as of this version, just a linear story, so keep that in mind.

Probably about 15-30 mins of content at this stage, main focus being on incest, rape, blackmail. All the other tags are there, but not in large quantities, mainly just a scene or 2, but hopefully will be fleshed out and expanded in future versions.

no choices, just go from point A to B.
no character, I have on idea who I am even play as the name I put never worked?

I still need to write more... to fulfill the 200 word limit.....
I would suggest fixing character name and telling the players they are male or female.
If you want this to be a "real game" add choices, at least 3, and use stats to track progress. Like
Shame {for the thing you do to yourself.}
Shame {for the thing you do to others.}
Shame {for the thing you don't stop others do to others.}