Thank you so much for the work and the well wishes! I swear to pack, squish, wrap, fold, and stomp on the next update!
You are very much right! In the future I may create separate paths that could make it avoidable - but at that point I think making a different game would be a better approach.
I am, genuinely, so sorry. D;;;;
Thank you so much for the thorough review! I really appreciate it and agree with every single one of your points! (Esp the gif thing, ughh, I left that in 50/50 because lazy/to see what people would prefer in the future). The pregnancy tag was there only for the gif/video in the very beginning which is meant to sorta herald what is to come - I'm really sorry if it ends up "baiting" anyone, I just did not know how literal the tags did or did not have to be.
As for the not being a pathetic pussy, well, maybe. I am open to it with the aforementioned creating paths. However, there was a reply I saw about this game advocating rape that I think got deleted? Either way I'm gonna reply to it here because it sort of connects. The world is super duper desensitized to the point where a giant part of the population has delved into extreme taboos, for example; incest. Considering that though there are a surprisingly few amount of people out there actually fucking their mothers, daughters, brothers, etcetera.
Incest is also -extremely- popular in porn games, but in such games there is usually "corruption" and not rape. Corruption in this sense is essentially sexual harassment/blackmail/drugging/whatever chiseling down a person's standards/morals to the point where they, for example, agree fuck their own son or whathaveyou. This is rape. Just a very slow and roundabout path. And that's okay, in fantasy. BUT! (back to you here dear Jonas!) Even with all that in mind, I feel strange about not having any sense of karmic justice - if that makes sense? Yes, MC does horrible things - but horrible things happen to MC. Now there is an argument to be made about the outside forces at play, my rationale there is that that is not in any sense the player/reader. That is happening to them, to the people they love. Which is super fucked up, I grant you, but I refer you back to the desensitization of society. If I can figure it out in a way that feels right to me, I would love to unpussify you.
Thank you so much for the early review! I hope you'll come to enjoy the rest. I felt, with the "themes" tackled and my not wanting to slowly build(maybe in the future I would rewind and slow it all down for a deeper story and connection), it was for the best to bring a sledgehammer. As for femdom, I LOVE femdom. It will 100% be a part of the game(but is very light at the moment). Perhaps not an equally large part as some other aspects, but a large part nonetheless. I do think I would prefer to keep that aspect "within the family" which would take longer to reach as it is currently a strange tug-of-war in that arena, but I've also considered an outside influence for it. A girlfriend? A twisted teacher? A former crush turned bully's plaything seeking her own twisted dominance? We'll see! Maybe all three?
Thankyouthankyouthankyou! Hope you enjoy!
Thank you for the well wishes, and all that you bring up is totally understandable! ABOUT THE WINDOWS THING THOUGH I AM NOT TECHNICALLY APT AND GOT A NEW PC AND THE DIGITAL WINDOWS KEY WON'T TRANSFER AND THE GUY ON THE PHONE TRIED THE SAME THING I DID AFTER GOOGLING FIVE TIMES AND THEN SAID TRY AGAIN LATER AND ITS BEEN WEEKS AND IT MAKES ME WANT TO PULL MY HAIR OUT I'M SORRY D: As for the gay content, I get that. I will 100% keep it in mind and see what I could do about that, if only to provide a clearer warning/(skip button for said content with a story tldr, I guess?) -if I don't end up doing paths.
Final overall thing: THANK YOU SO MUCH EVERYONE FOR TAKING THE TIME AND I HOPE YOU ENJOY! <3<3<3
I am compiling all the technical stuff you've brought up and saving it in a doc. I am sorry that it has ended up feeling "edgelord" - not quite what I was going for but one thing that has been really freeing about all this is that the suspension of disbelief is so unbelievable when it comes to horny brain that I went just, as mentioned, extreme in every direction. And so long as people can enjoy it even with the edge, I'm very happy! I appreciate that it is not to everyone's taste and my only hope is that the early warning will help you not get dragged into something you don't want to see or experience. (Should I make it clearer in the post itself? WARNING: ETC? Same with the it basically being a KN/choiceless? Advice appreciated!)
PS: Sorry if this is way too much text in one thing, I am new to the decorum of this all. :')
-Tilde <3
