VKKV

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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
nope. yeah thats a nope from me.
like its extreme, but its just extreme for extremes sake. there really isn't any rhyme or reason to anything. nor would i even call this a kinetic novel. idk what it is.
 
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qetip

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The videos are screencaps of lower resolution videos, so it doesn't make sense to have them as 1080p.
I've lowered them to 480p and got the package down to 250mb.

If anyone wants it, here it is:

Download compressed v0.1:

I'm gonna come back after a few months to see where this is, hopefully it gets better...
 
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Tyrranus

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Why ask the player to use a name and then never actually use it?
Also this isnt a Visual Novel its a KINETIC novel theres no choices. Not even Illusion of choice.
The plot is nearly as incomprehensible as the MC's mental disorders, like its all over the fucking place with no rhyme or reason nor anything apparently going to make it come together so it DOES make sense.
2.3GB on a first draft?! holy fuck shrink that shit!
And shocker of shockers the MC is just a spineless fuck on top of everything else and just merrily lets whatever the fuck happen to him.
Edgelord for no reason but to just try to be an edgelord... like I said above theres no coherent plot here just a string of gifs and some near gibberish to try to piece them together


good luck to the dev I guess. Im out
 
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Look-see

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You are very much right! In the future I may create separate paths that could make it avoidable - but at that point I think making a different game would be a better approach. :)


-Tilde <3
ima guess based on other comments alot of what happens to the MC and the main cast happens fast.

with that being said if that's true the only way to do a avoidable NTR path is to prevent it from happening at all. if you create a path where some of the stuff still happens and then stop it - the non NTR fans won't really care to play the game just to eventually stop it when they want it preventable from the get go.

in which case unless you plan to split the story in two i agree with you and eventually another game would be the solution.
 

Sorreah

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ima guess based on other comments alot of what happens to the MC and the main cast happens fast.

with that being said if that's true the only way to do a avoidable NTR path is to prevent it from happening at all. if you create a path where some of the stuff still happens and then stop it - the non NTR fans won't really care to play the game just to eventually stop it when they want it preventable from the get go.

in which case unless you plan to split the story in two i agree with you and eventually another game would be the solution.
With this game it hits the ground running hard, you're not gonna avoid anything. It tells you what you're getting into from the fact dev makes you confirm you're wanting to play it after a few shock images.

I agree there isn't a lot of rhyme or reason to anything happen here, but he also said this is a first draft to see if there is interest. I can see doing a proper story down the road, but as is, this is currently like watching a trailer that has a bunch of scenes that highlight what you're getting into. Characters flip emotions and antagonists have no driving force other than "I'm a huge dick", but that's fine at this point. Personally I like this no-holds-bared approach of like "hey, this is what's gonna happen and how things are gonna shape up" and there isn't any major surprise down the road.

As dev said, they'd make a different game to make NTR avoidable if they keep the initial background of this game the same. Like you can't avoid the NTR at all in that respect, unless you just choose not to play. Stuff like this is good in my eyes though, since this gives a firm tone of what can/will be.
 

moonhead

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This is a great start.

Certainly very extreme and no choices to avoid anything.

It's very much just a linear novel (as of version 0.1). So no real option to skip over anything, or influence anything happening.

Story is very basic right now, instead rather a series of loosely connected events. Could easily be improved over time though.

Most of the tags seem good and correct for the content, but the main ones that apply consistently would be "blackmail", "school setting", "humiliation", "rape", "incest"
 

xslutz

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So who gets pregnant in this game and what is the extent of the pregnancy content?
Currently, Nothing and no one. There's a single pregnancy gif in the beginning which seems like a teaser for things to come? But yeah, no pregnancy stuff so far.
 

jonas132

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The world is super duper desensitized
That was a surprisingly thorough reply. I wish many ideas you wrote about were better reflected in the game itself - like, the broken world.
Yes, MC does horrible things - but horrible things happen to MC.
The idea of karmic justice is a fun concept for a porn game, however, I can't see it currently. The horrible things happen to MC - period, there is little agency for him at all. Sure he does some shameful things, but it's nothing compared to what's happening to him and his family.
This concept would really shine in a kind of sandbox/choices-heavy game, where the player would actually be punished/rewarded for his choices. The player might sleep-fuck his mom, but it means his ass is better to be ready. He hits rapers of his mom with a stick, but she's drugged anyway so she rewards him with her body. Well, I digress...
I wish you would develop this project further or even rework it with proper choices and paths. Your writing and ideas a really fucked up, I like it.
 

Moviebuff3000

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It's a Shame that I will have to pass this one up not a fan of NTR unless avoidable and not a fan of kinetic novels also.
 
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Rafster

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To those looking for a gay game, pass on this :) You're welcum!
Thanx for the warning. It happens on most of these sissification games.

But anyway, I want to encourage the dev to keep developing/writing this game. We need more games with dark themes like this one. As someone who is severely limited by Patreon, is refreshing to see games written the exact way the author feels, no matter how dark or gross it gets.

And who knows? after this game he may evolve to VN or to sandbox on the next one. Only deranged people like me goes to sandbox on their first game :cry:
 

sadmate

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Should I make it clearer in the post itself? WARNING: ETC? Same with the it basically being a KN/choiceless? Advice appreciated!

As far as the warning goes, you could honestly mention that the story/writing is pretty dark and maybe a context clue about how MC is hopeless. The actual warning on v0.1 is just a few of the content that is in the game (I don't have a problem with rape, pregnancy, BBC or fetish content in porn) which does not shed light to the grim story that actually what kept me from liking it. I'm not saying the writing is bad or anything, its better than some , if not most, first version release games on here. Just that it hits you like a truck after you progress through the first few pages.

As for the game being a Kinetic Novel, I don't believe it's a bad thing though that derives it from the aspect of gameplay. There are a couple things you can do to make it more interactive, mainly being:
-Make it so progression in story and content is locked behind skill checks/quests/RNG ( <-- not recommended tho unless it's an easter egg) // Which would make this a kinetic (?) novel with game-y aspects.

OR

-Make it so that there are actual, story altering choices that end you in a different (albeit similar) path, which could also lead the MC into different endings. // This would actually make it a playable game but you might have to seperate/block content until the player goes back and chooses a different choice. I'm not sure but from what I've read in the disclaimer you seem to not like to gatekeep/filter things? If so this might not be what you like.

Overall I am a sucker for SugarCube games, they are pretty accessible if you configure it well. I can only hope once this game is developed further I could also be one of the people who enjoy your game truly. Good luck on the upcoming releases :)
 
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Tyrranus

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sad part is I was initially excited by the potential of someone going really dark for a game but this is 1)not a game and 2) just someones spank bank with a barely coherent narrative to string the gif dump together
 

StaverBoar

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I played your game, congrats on making it, yes im aware it is currently kinetic novel. Size of images need to be adjusted.
Game is Dark and Hard right at the start... This Game is not for me, It is for a selective niche andi hope they enjoy it.
Again congrats on it, I do hope that development continues on it, might be better with more choices that would make it a game instead of a novel
 
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