I love the idea for the first story, but the execution isn't great.
So what's currently here?
Like the title says there will be multiple short stories, but right now there is only one. More specifically, there is only the beginning of the first story, with a playtime of around 5 minutes. And sadly not all the preview images are actually in the game yet.
The good:
The idea for the story is nice. A young, innocent and naive couple are going on their first vacation together, where they are corrupted by an older more experienced couple. I also like the models for the young boy and girl.
The bad:
The dev doesn't seem very proficient in storywriting and as a result both the story and the dialogue are very incoherent. Writing a short story doesn't mean you should just skip the introduction and not give the characters any personality. The conversation with the older couple is very strange, but even though the young couple is supposed to be shy and insecure they don't seem bothered by it at all.
The artwork is decent but it also has some inconsistencies. The older couple seems to have a different art style than the young couple, and the young boy has a different appearance during some of the bed scenes. It often feels like the story was written based on the images instead of the other way around.
So what's currently here?
Like the title says there will be multiple short stories, but right now there is only one. More specifically, there is only the beginning of the first story, with a playtime of around 5 minutes. And sadly not all the preview images are actually in the game yet.
The good:
The idea for the story is nice. A young, innocent and naive couple are going on their first vacation together, where they are corrupted by an older more experienced couple. I also like the models for the young boy and girl.
The bad:
The dev doesn't seem very proficient in storywriting and as a result both the story and the dialogue are very incoherent. Writing a short story doesn't mean you should just skip the introduction and not give the characters any personality. The conversation with the older couple is very strange, but even though the young couple is supposed to be shy and insecure they don't seem bothered by it at all.
The artwork is decent but it also has some inconsistencies. The older couple seems to have a different art style than the young couple, and the young boy has a different appearance during some of the bed scenes. It often feels like the story was written based on the images instead of the other way around.