VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Simplicity [e3] [effectual]

It's a sad VN with minor choices about a femboy . I should like this as sissy CYOA is something i always try out. In this VN, the sissy is already fleshed out. There are a ton of sex scenes, at least to the point where I finally quit. It was depressing. The femboy has no concept of what LOVE really is.

Because of the abuse, yes, it's abuse, I ranked this low. BUT the saving grace where I added 2 more stars is that the Dev supplies an inner monologue that seems to be filled with hope. I'm going to wait till the next iteration before I try this again. Here's hoping the protagonist finds someone that cares....(Call me a big softy)

More depressing than hot.

Straight off the bat the game starts with the mc being physically abused by her pimp, so if beating defenseless victims of human trafficking is your idea of fun this should be a good game/vn. Now I know I'm being hypocritical since I like "rape"/cnc and dark erotic themes but they need (for me at least) to be part of the whole fantasy where it starts out reluctant but they can't help but enjoy it etc. etc. Straight up abuse just isn't that sexy to me.

The game looks good and would get a fairly high rating if it were more subtle. It would also help if you could choose another narration than the second person voice that's being used (ie the game referring to the character as "you") as well as skip the pov shots of being fucked by a guy. This game will appeal very much to people who are into sissy hypno porn and extreme degradation.

ep 2

It is really more of a kinetic novel.

You have no ability to roleplay the protagonists, the sex scenes are pretty much the same when it comes to their tone - it's basically rape and abuse.

All the male characters interacting with the protagonist feel samey. Abusive, dismissive, aggressive...

If you treat it like a story with images, and you're very much into lolis and traps, I guess you might find it fun.

Right now, it seems like a very average piece of work.

There needs to be more content before this is worth playing. Right now there is maybe 10 minutes of content, basically all of it sex scenes. The current content is also focused heavily on abuse and rape.

In case the developer is reading, my 2-cents would be to have multiple routes for the player. A 'pet' route/end, where they remain a submissive fucktoy but find a loving master. A 'wife' route/end, where they actually do find a loving husband. A 'whore' route/end, where you keep going how it currently is, but with actual story. And a 'slut' route/end where you continue prostitution, but in a safer setting (maybe join/open a femboy brothel?).

I think the game has a lot of promise, more femboy/trap protag games are always welcome, and the art/mc design is quite good. There have also been two updates pretty soon after each other, so I think a year from now this will be in a very good place.

This VN is off to a great start, and I really hope the developer continues it with a wide variety of filthy, kinky encounters with different clients (and more with the pimp, of course). "She" looks so hot, and I love that her only real purpose is to be a cum receptacle. But then there's the matter of her wanting true love, which might make things even more interesting if a client, for instance, has a plan to rescue her from the life of prostitution to have her to himself.

Episode 1 introduces the protagonist and really sells you their state of mind and inner monologue. It's a powerfully written short story with good camera angles and animations.

From a technical standpoint it's really well done.

I hope to see more