It would be nice if it gave you a hint as to names/relations at the start rather than just blindly expecting you to know. Landlady/tenant is easy, but mentor/student?
Starts off saying your father is a woman. ....
You get on a train which suddenly transforms into to a bus that looks like a train? (that's what the text says anyway.)
Next the MC proceeds to rape a girl on the subway.
Then your landlord throws a fit since she came into your room and you were sleeping naked. After which the mc acts like he's going to rape her as well....but stops.
Pretty bad/silly writing. Probably a good one for the old skip pile....
Grainy annoying graphics considering it's over 2Gb.
Not the best lighting.
Hasn't been proofread.
It's spastic...jumping from one thing to another.
Doesn't make any sense.
Many other things....His clothes get lost on the trip but there are clothes in his closet that magically fit.... etc.....
Didn't seem to improve as it went on so I just deleted it pretty quickly.
Starts off saying your father is a woman. ....
You get on a train which suddenly transforms into to a bus that looks like a train? (that's what the text says anyway.)
Next the MC proceeds to rape a girl on the subway.
Then your landlord throws a fit since she came into your room and you were sleeping naked. After which the mc acts like he's going to rape her as well....but stops.
Pretty bad/silly writing. Probably a good one for the old skip pile....
Grainy annoying graphics considering it's over 2Gb.
Not the best lighting.
Hasn't been proofread.
It's spastic...jumping from one thing to another.
Doesn't make any sense.
Many other things....His clothes get lost on the trip but there are clothes in his closet that magically fit.... etc.....
Didn't seem to improve as it went on so I just deleted it pretty quickly.