Let me start by saying that three stars aren't a bad game for me.
It's an average game or a promising game with some flaws.
The latter is the case here.
The game tries to tell an actual story, so it's not just sex, the woman for the most part look good and have relatively diverse looks.
Except that their mouths sometimes look a bit strange for some reason and the really big breasts do look like someone just moved a switch as far as possible. Quite unnatural at times.
Now, the girls mostly are a bit on the more voluptous side, which is fine if you like it, like I do, but that also means the small breast problem is rather obvious with some.
If the dev puts a bit of work into it, I'm sure this can improve, if not there are tons of other games where the tits look just the same.
The writing for the most part is alright, though there are quite a few spelling and grammar errors, so the proofreading should really improve.
It's not too bad, but at times it can take you a bit out of there.
Another thing I noticed is that there is a lot of redundancy so far. Plot points get repeated far too often, I think at one point a phone call actually happens twice, but again that is something that can be worked on and improved with a bit of effort.
Now for the obvious elephants in the room.
If you look into the thread there is a number of players who have a real problem with two story points.
The first one is that the MC seems to want to help a guy get with a woman he is also interested in. It's important to realize that we don't know if that will actually happen as there have only been a few conversations so far and the dev has said that sharing will be optional.
The other is that the MC gets involved into the relationship between two other women in the game. A relationship that does ALREADY exists when the MC comes into play, so that it makes perfect sense for me, that if the MC wants to get both women into his harem, he would try to slowly insert himself into their already existing pairing.
If anything I hope that the harem building doesn't come too easy and not every woman instantly wants to fuck the MC and that there will fe. be conflicts once the women find out about all the others.
All in all this is a promising game for a new dev and I hope we will see this continue and see the dev improve while working on it.
It's an average game or a promising game with some flaws.
The latter is the case here.
The game tries to tell an actual story, so it's not just sex, the woman for the most part look good and have relatively diverse looks.
Except that their mouths sometimes look a bit strange for some reason and the really big breasts do look like someone just moved a switch as far as possible. Quite unnatural at times.
Now, the girls mostly are a bit on the more voluptous side, which is fine if you like it, like I do, but that also means the small breast problem is rather obvious with some.
If the dev puts a bit of work into it, I'm sure this can improve, if not there are tons of other games where the tits look just the same.
The writing for the most part is alright, though there are quite a few spelling and grammar errors, so the proofreading should really improve.
It's not too bad, but at times it can take you a bit out of there.
Another thing I noticed is that there is a lot of redundancy so far. Plot points get repeated far too often, I think at one point a phone call actually happens twice, but again that is something that can be worked on and improved with a bit of effort.
Now for the obvious elephants in the room.
If you look into the thread there is a number of players who have a real problem with two story points.
The first one is that the MC seems to want to help a guy get with a woman he is also interested in. It's important to realize that we don't know if that will actually happen as there have only been a few conversations so far and the dev has said that sharing will be optional.
The other is that the MC gets involved into the relationship between two other women in the game. A relationship that does ALREADY exists when the MC comes into play, so that it makes perfect sense for me, that if the MC wants to get both women into his harem, he would try to slowly insert himself into their already existing pairing.
If anything I hope that the harem building doesn't come too easy and not every woman instantly wants to fuck the MC and that there will fe. be conflicts once the women find out about all the others.
All in all this is a promising game for a new dev and I hope we will see this continue and see the dev improve while working on it.