VN - Ren'Py - Single Again [v1.23] [Clever name games]

A strange one. First off, as far as I am aware, there's no incest in it. MC's "daughters" are one adopted daughter and two step-daughters.

Visuals are mediocre and there's a change of DAZ versions during the game. The models themselves are fine with some welcome variety between thicc and slim.

The prose starts out all right, but with time there's a decrease in quality and an increase in quantity. My mind started wandering during reading because there's basically nothing in the text to hold my interest anymore. They're stating the same things over and over, without any development.

The story develops slowly, which is fine, but then kind of comes to a stop and just keeps reiterating the same, which is not. The lack in sexual content with the "daughters" is remedied by side characters or dream/fantasy versions of characters. That's a method many VNs use, but I personally don't care for those scenes, unless there has been some meaningful exposure to the included characters.

My biggest gripe is with MC and the basic setting of the story, which should have been a red flag to me. MC is a complete and total pushover with apparently no desires other than to fulfill the wishes of some woman around him. He never takes the initiative, romantically or sexually, he never confronts his thoughts and emotions or those of the people around him, he's just there. Even his proclamied fatherly love is shallow, because he is too spineless to enable himself to take care of his "daughters". He expected to get into serious financial trouble and did fuck all to find a solution or make sure that doesn't happen. Some VNs have a weak protagonist, who conquers his weaknesses to be able to care for his loved ones. This one just has a weak protagonist.

Well this is my first rewiew but this just has became one of my favorit games the setting of a father that got out of a marriage and in the aftermath of it told his adopted daughter of his first marriag that he wasn´t her biological father opend them both little by little for the possebilety of "something" between them to than letting his step daughters of the second marriag to fullfill there kind of love with him is a lot more realistic than what most incest themed games offer

here are also some points liked:

+ more sex patners than the daughters but not too many to make them two-dimensional fuck toys
+ the story is interseting there are a lot of games I skip thru till the sex because they just don´t feel like more than some flavor between the sex but not for this game
+ they are all over 18 and have lifes that show that they are adults

and hier is the only negative point I have agenst the game :

- the girl Lilith seems to hate her body but it seems to not only be her but also her sister and her boyfriend think of her as not femenin or that she looks boyish but of all the body typs in the game I think she looks the best so seeing my ideal body typ getting shamed is a bit sad even if this is one of the games with more normal body typs

play 1.16 with a french trad 1.15 (which explains my poor written English, sorry)

story: 3/5 A good story very well written, but not revolutionary, with unfortunately far too many lengths and speeches that are repeated again and again or that are lengthened for nothing.
In addition, unfortunately the translation I had was not great (but that's not the game's fault).

characters: 5/5 All the characters are very "stereotypical" but are very well written each in their own way, for me this is THE strong point of the game

sex scene: 4/5 They are really good, of a very good length and very erotic! But I really can't give them 5 for the reason mentioned above, we really expect them too much, several hours of play between each.

renders: 3.5/5 I really had a hard time with the "childish" aspect that it gives to the characters, and I really didn't think I could get used to it, but the writing helped, I was surprised, because finally, it happened, I got used to it. The expressions are very well done.

animation: 4/5 They are really good, maybe a bit too "fast" fps at times, but it's better than the other way around

sound: Unfortunately no sounds, no music.

gameplay: 3/5 We are bored, not much to do except read again and again, there are many choices, but melted into so much reading that their importance is not really felt

I´m liking it.
Single dad with one adopted daughter and 2 stepdaughters. You know how it goes. It´s a bit annoying that the developer writes thoughts about the guilt but then blurs it with action. What makes a real incestual relashionship (and a shrink worthy one) is family not blood. I like these type of games but the relashionships need to be damaged.

The real annoying part is that the MC is a big dick beta loser (minus 1 star)

The hotties are nice so try it.

Edit: 23/11/2022 - Newest update and the MC is so infuriating. If this guy existed no way he´d get pussy. Minus another star.

Edit: 08/03/2023 - 1.19 - At least cuckholds are losers and embrace it. This MC i dont know. This story should end in suicide. Just saying. - 1 star.
Jaye and Mallory! + 1 star! oh no! Multiverse Jaye and Mallory - these make no sense! - 1 star!

I was not sold at first, not for a while. I didn't like any of the characters, except for Abigail, which hooked me from the start. Later, I grew to love the other involved characters. I'm used to slow burn stories, I enjoy them, and this one seemed to rush one character pair initially, but then slowed down, and other pairs were brought into the fold. The writing shines towards the middle of the story, in which the protagonist and his plight is made very believable. I actually teared up several times, and that hasn't happened to me in any other story (any recommendations would be nice haha).

Characters: A-
Character Models: B+
Environments: B+
Story: A-
Writing: A
Sex: A+ (animations included)

Superb. Will fap again.

I don't need to discuss the positives, that is clearly repeated over and over with the posts below. The reason people new to this game should re-consider is the way the MC is portrayed.
This is a ground hog day of the moral compas of the MC, where he crosses a boundry one day, only to repeat the same objections, and fight tooth and nail to prevent anything sexual happening with three young girls (who all want the MC sexually no matter what) the very next day.
MC's literally the only one besides the ex-wife who even knows the previous relation he had with the girls...via marriage, not blood, but acts like if he's caught doing anything other than talking to them in public, he'll get drawn and quartered by public outrage.
It is an interesting aspect TBH at the start, but it's a hang-up that the MC can't get over, no matter what happens, or logic presented. It gets really old and a bit like nails on a chalkboard to a story that otherwise would be really good without it.

God damn this MC is so infuriating. I mean everything bad about him has already been described in detail below and I agree with every word. It really is bad. The other parts of the game though are good enough to keep me playing.

The story, the other characters, and the renders are all pretty good but the MC is incredibly unlikeable. Take a shot everytime MC says "it can't happen", I dare you.

The author warns that the story is slow, but honestly the pacing of the narrative is perfect. Maybe I have been playing too many porn games but the only part of the story that stuck me as absolute unbelievable fantasy was the divorce. Honestly Fuck that bitch..
Having an Either/Or vs Points system works well for the VN style here and doesn't distract by tempting Pro-Gamer Stats.
The lewd scenes are spaced well in the plot but a gallery would still be appreciated...
Also; a "The Road So Far" summary in the pause menu would be super rad. just spit ballin' but if it were set up on the bio cards with paragraphs added after milestones it would be easier to dive back into a save and keep track of who's feeling what after a break from the game.
Neither of those niggles are worth detracting points though.
Writing solid characters is hard, dynamic characters that don't lurch from one point to the next but have observable development more so.
Character models are unique, or at least I didn't immediately recognize anyone. Sometimes with assets it's like watching Law and Order and being able to tell the vic/perp by who you recognize and that immediately pulls you out. That's just not the case here just a rant, sorry.. Tough I wouldn't be surprised to see these women in future games because they do look damn nice.
TLR "ME LIKA THE PRETTY PICTURS AND NO HATE"

Overall a 9.5/10 game IMO. The visuals are great, the story is great and the personalities of the 3 main girls is great. Only main issue I have is that the MC seems to take 2 steps forward and 1 step back. I can understand the reasoning for him being conflicted but it seems like he will make progress with them all to just revert back to the beginning. Other than that, I love this game and can't wait for more updates, really looking forwards to where the story is heading.

This game has a great premise and the story is sort of wholesome which is great. It's fairly simple but still manages to make you care for the people in it. So why the 3/5? Well mostly because the execution is very lacking. The renders are fine, I'm not as opposed to the looks as some people and I think it's sort of a fun little story. Biggest complaint however is that MC is such a weak twerp.

Men can be shy, indecisive and lack self confidence. Then there's this MC he isn't shy but he has a stupid moral compass that prevents him from acting like a real person. Without spoiling anything (the story isn't really that spoilworthy) MC can be reluctant to sleep with young women who he's known since they were children. That's fine, that's realistic! But when he's finally done it he keeps going back to acting like they haven't and he's all shy about it. Pretty much every girl in the game literally tells MC that they want him sexually over and over and over again but he's like "Are you sure?". At one point one of them is straddling him, kissing him and he still goes "You don't have to do this!"

Then there's the CONSTANT ( I do mean constant) internal monologue of the MC that explains every thought he has about a given situation. He looks at someones ass and we get serveda giant plate of monologue about how her ass is nice and how wrong it is for him to look. I get that the MC should be apprehensive and somewhat reluctant to do this kind of stuff but when you've creampied a woman and then decide that you're going to take it slow after the fact... it just gets absurd.

Final verdict: It's a decent game that I've abandoned a few times because I get tired of the weak MC and his internal monologue and as such I can't advice anyone to play it in one go. I get bored if I play it too long and find myself only skimming the text. If the dev removed at least 75% of all the internal monologue the game would be a 4/5 and it would probably not affect the story at all. Infact it could improve the pacing.

What a waste of good renders... In this "kinetic novel" you are the most mentally weak, whiny, submissive and pathetic beta MC ever seen before. Yes, kinetic novel, because the choices are absolutely irrelevant to the events. You will have to go through whatever the step-daughters decide. You will be continuously manipulated, without the possibility of reacting. You will suffer every imposition of the step-daughters. They are the ones who educate and teach the step-father, not the other way around. It is all predetermined and immutable, you have no say in the matter. The only differences brought about by the player's choices are access to a smaller or larger number of scenes, some escapade with side characters placed there as fillers, or to the Game Over. No paths. You can only be Becca's puppet... God, I really hate her and her cruel manipulative behaviour. This is not romance, this is sick

Edited for 1.19
Renders :Really good renders
Story : Mc having boring inner monologues Seeing fairies that look like the girls and his daughter that saying just don't deny the urge to make love with his daughter who already runs around naked in the house But still mc is having dumb inner monologues that he wont do it Heeven has dreams about it He has sex with everyone he meets or atleast somtimes thinks about wanne do it with everyone he meets
Again story is starting to look more about other girls then about his adopted daughter

Sex scenes : Sex scenes are good
No bugs
Don't play with sound
Game is not bad it's average
But just feels like game spend to much time on the inner monologues of mc I feel like dev is stretching the story updates with dumb inner monologues

So this is one of those games where you play as a beta MC. The game is about you raising a daughter that's not even your own. The MC keeps having nightmares over and over again about his ex wife who cheated on him; this is because he's too much of a pussy to just man up and move on with his life. Even during the scene where she tries to screw you over when going through the divorce process, the MC is still timid and shy. Additionally, the MC gets his ass kicked by one of his step daughters; that's how weak he is. Also, another one of the step daughters has to explain to him about all the other girls because the MC is too dumb to figure this out on his own. Additionally, the writer has to put in random dream fairy sequences that explain how girls work to the MC because the MC is so dumb that the writer had to figure out a way to teach him how women work and used imaginary fairies to do so. As the story progresses, you also find out that he got friend zoned hard by a love interest in his past and he is now raising her daughter like the cuck he is. Even when one of the step daughters wants to have sex with the MC, he spends about 5 minutes of text saying that he doesn't want sex because he's too scared.

The good things is that the renders are nice and the women look fairly hot. But avoid if you don't like cuck and beta MC's.

Infuriating. I really like the story (even if it is preachy at times), I like the characters (even if they all have a bit of a soap opera quality to them), I like the slow pace. It's nice.

BUT the MC is just unbearable. He is whiny, little man that constantly preaches about moral high grounds, while going along with whatever his "daughters" tell him to do. His doubts are obviously used to drag out the inevitable (which is a super cheap plot device), but it also damages the whole story set up that way.

Even with a lot of suspension of disbelief, there is no reason for any of the love interests to actually want to be with that guy. He has zero redeeming qualities other than being "nice". He is not assertive at all, he takes advantage of his daughters and then cries about it. There is literally no redeeming quality in him and yet all the girls magically fall in love with him.

As this behaviour drags on (and on and on...), it really starts to unravel the story, despite the daughters being fairly well written.

At this point, it's painful to watch.

My first review.

This was my favorite game on the site for some time because of the romantic build-up, however, each new update is less significant than the last.

The characters talk and talk. Rebecca is nosy and manipulative. Lily needs to be put into an institution.
The MC is the most indecisive and whiny MC ever.

I'm just playing this to see it through the final step, Abby (she seems to be the most normal character as well). But considering it's been 2 years since the game was first released idk when to expect what we're all waiting for.

Damn, where do i begin with this one

First of all, there are spoilers ahead. I cant review this without talking about specifics and without refencing some things that happen in the game

Second of all, I really like incest games ... if you throw a harem in there its even better, so keep that in mind.


Now ... I wanted to finish chapter 1 first before reviewing this but i just cant take it anymore. I have to do this.

I find the game to be quite good overall. I intend to keep playing it.
Its a slow burn but i like it, thats my thing. Romance, build-up etc.

The writing i found to be ok most of the time but not always. There are times where its .. just ... not good.

There's some drama in here, some plot twists, all good. I like this.
I hate when games are just perfect .. in the sense that nothing bad really happens, everyone is happy from day one.
The story is good enough, its interesting enogh to keep me playing.

In fact this is one of the few reasons why im not stopping. I want to see how it ends.

The characters are mostly fine. The daughters are written decently enough (for my standards anyway) and i love them for who they are so thats a big plus. It always sucks when your love interest(s) suck. More on them later.

Now ... the bad stuff.

First of all, i dont like the artstyle.
From the main love interests, Abigail is the weakest among them. She looks ... wrong. Something about her is not right. There are a few renders where she just looks outright awful. Proportions are messed up.

Lilith is better. Still weird but better than Abby.

Becca is by far the more normal in terms of looks, the more better looking i should say. Still weird but from all other models in the game, she is the least weird.
She looks aweomse in some renders, especially with her glasses

... but then there's Beth. A good example of ... hideousness. When i first saw her, i minimized the game and went on the forum here to see if there are tags such as supernatural or something because the first thing that came to mind when i saw her was ... is she a zombie?
Im telling you, something is definitely wrong with her skin color. Not just that, her face is weird. There are some renders where she is literally scary to look at.
Dunno what happened to her.
She is the more extreme example of the artstyle being ... weird

That being said, i dont hate them. Especially not your step daughters. They look weird but their personalities are fine.
Abby is loving and sweet
Lilith is the devil but sweet at the same time
Becca is fucking crazy, i legit think she is insane ... probably has a screw loose in her head but GOD i love her!
Also she seems to be some kind of genius when it comes to manipulating people and such. Where did that come from?


Anyway. THE MAIN REASON for the 1 star rating is the MC.

Dear god man. It all starts fine but then it all decends into hell.

I get it. WE get it. Its wrong to have romantic relationships with your daughters (be them step daughters or blood related) and the MC struggles with this as well. I get it. Its fine, its the normal way to react to this kind of thing.

But for the love of god, tone it down a bit !!! He goes on and on and on like a broken record saying how wrong this is, how bad this is, how he is fucked etc THE WHOLE GAME. There are these never ending monologues of him complaining, whining every 3 fkn minutes!

It was fine at first but damn, it becomes so fucking annoying.
Especially when he finally fucks Lilith. JUST STOP IT!!! STOP WHINING for one god damn minute

He has no balls or his name to stand up to people, he is unable to say no to his daughters and then when something happens, he complains and whines and he never stops!

I was reading the other reviews and people mention this thing but i assumed they were exagerating ... well, they werent.

I really hope this stops at some point. If he keeps going like this throughout the entire chapter 1 ... or 2 ... im gonna go crazy.

Beyond that he is a fucking pussy. He is supposedly an adult, been through 2 marriages, raised 3 daughters (step) and yet he behaves like a fkn kid. He is being pushed around left and right by some teenagers essentially.
Every couple of sentences he has to go with "OH SORRY, I ... IM SORRY", sorry this, sorry that ... he never stands up for himself.
You're supposed to be their dad, act like one! At least a bit. I know he fears to lose them but cmon!!!

The rare cases where he stands up to them are nice but are rare.
Also horse dick. Its an obsession it seems. So many games with horse size dicks.

He's also fucking dense. Im bad with girls but DAYUM man, the MC is on a whole other level. How the fuck he ended up married twice idk.

An absolutely amazing and very touching slow burn game. It is beyond well written and features a cast of interesting, distinct, consistent and loveable characters. The art style might take a bit of getting used to, but the game honestly looks pretty good once you do get used to it. The animations are quite impressive too! Seriously though, the writing is top notch and you get genuinely invested and care about the characters. It's a story focused game and it does that well, but when the sex scenes do happen they are honestly hot as fuck! If I had one little complaint or gripe it's that there were a few too many long dream sequences, but that's entirely down to personal preference.

Great game. Love the story and 99% of the characters. Only one i have any problem with is Meiko just because i find her bland. Her entire personality is the shy girl, not much else as of yet to her. The other character i feel a connection too and whenever the villain is mentioned i get a since of dread. I cant wait to get more. GLHF

4.5 out of 5 stars.

I was nervous about playing this one; the girls' looks are wonky at first, especially when compared to the standard Daz character models also in the game, but you quickly grow used to them and find them endearing.

I was also nervous about all the reviews describing the MC as a cuck or loser, but it didn't take long for me to realize these reviews are written by douchebags. The MC is a good man- one of the best I've seen in a porn VN. He's kind, honest, and principled; his initial hesitance to pursue the three main girls is entirely justified and respectable, especially considering the bullshit he's been through. I found myself agreeing with him roughly 80% of the time.

The sex scenes are above average; there's plenty of dirty talk and dialogue to make them feel real, even if there's a whole lot of "UNNGH" and "FWAAAGH" jargon.

The overall narrative feels great. Character development is slow but visible from one day to the next. I'm not entirely sure where the story is going (besides the harem endgoal), but I'm eager to see it.

I only noticed 2 cons to the game so far. The first is the writing; while the intent behind the dialogue is great, there are a LOT of grammar issues in chapter 1. Punctuation mixups, capitalization issues and the omnipresent misuse of the words "to" and "too". It really fucks with the flow of the dialogue at first. It nearly killed the game for me, but I powered through it and got engrossed by the characters and the story enough that I was able to ignore the writing issues. Chapter 2 seems to have almost no such problems in comparison.

The second problem is with the MC in the last third of chapter 1. I know, I said I like him, and I do- but that last 20% of the time I didn't agree with him, it was because he just won't shut up about how wrong all this is. As things are ramping up with some of the girls, he refuses to acknowledge simple, obvious facts that he and everyone around him can see; he's not wrong, this whole situation is absolutely fucked up, but that apprehension doesn't apply anymore. He does start to get over it, but it takes a LOT of grinding down to accept the score.

Overall, one of my favorites. Do want more, now now now.

The girls are hot, the animations are excellent, and some of the story beats are nice, but man oh man is the MC such a spineless cuck. He raised three kids that aren't his and he's a total wimp that has to be manhandled into every sexual situation. He's such a wimp that's afraid of women holy shit. That's not what people want in a porn game, actually the opposite.

I give it four stars cause I clicked through most of the story. If you actually read the story you will get secondhand embarrassment for this dude and then maybe it's three stars or even two.