I've left quite a harsh review on the author's first game (so one can't accuse me of being a sweet, encouraging fanboy), but this game looks nothing like that one! I'm honestly unironically blown away! I'm afraid, v0.13 is fleetingly short (merely 1 day), but it comes out incredibly strong!
1. The visuals? Utter perfection. The pornographic scenes are animated, the positions diverse, and the two girls so far seem to my untrained eye to be from HoneySelect2, but they're East Asians in white thighhighs, and I'm biased.
2. Player agency? You get choices with both immediate and far-reaching consequences every minute (i.e., as a punishment, you can choose cunnilingus, a butt-plug, or the [female] headmaster's office; relationship-wise, you can choose a shy girl to protect you, or the alpha girl with whom again you have some choices to shape up your character. (I can only hope they will matter in the future updates.)
3. The dialogue/monologue? Quite lively. Not overfilling with funny jokes, not much convoluted world-building, but the exposition does exist (unlike the author's first game which forced you to care about characters in the 1st minute).
Some constructive negative feedback:
1. There is one sentence in the inner monologue during [optional] pegging that ponders whether the main character likes femdom because he was neglected as a child. It's silly and perpetuates the stereotype. I was neither abused or neglected myself.
2. A fear that I have is that the seemingly-gentle femdom route with Mei will be too gentle, or degenerate into maledom. I hope, the habit of giving the player choices won't dry up.
3. Another fear would be forced monogamy - the hero is actively looking for a girl to defend him against other girls, but it would still be nice to have variety. (Brainstorming: avoidable capture by other girls that only strengthens the relationship, i.e., reverse NTR.)
4. I wonder how the author would deal with the issue if the girl proved out too weak to protect the hero. (Brainstorming: the hero might intentionally and covertly betray her.) I'm saying this because the issue was raised in v.0.13.
5. And lastly, don't forget about femdom magic bondage, it would be a dream come true for me to have it with these renders!
Easily five (5) stars.