VN - Others - Abandoned - Slut Trainer [v9.02] [TinWoodman]

I dropped this game for a few releases hoping it'd get better but it does not.
It is a boring grind for scenes that aren't that good. No good story either to at least create some excitement. It's boring and uninspired.

Nah, sorry this game simply doesn't deserve an overall 2,5 star rating. I'm giving it five. The reasons why:

-The female MC is a doll-faced cutie. Too few of that. I'm sick and fucking tired of "realistic faces". 3D today still only allows barbie doll faces to be a sure winner.

-Nice original facial expressions. Lively, detailed. Mouth and eyes especially. Not the usual blank, daz preset facial poses. I love particularly the ones when she gets bukkake'd during that introduction monster scene.

-Dumb, basic porn fantasy. Yep, I'm here to fap. If I want to improve my intellect, I look elsewhere than in a fucking porn game.

-Replay mode, all scenes replayable, though can't be paused, which is a shame.

-The renders are decent to excellent, even if not all perfect.

-Male characters are often original and funny looking enough to not be a limp factor throughout the game.

Thank god there are still devs out there who do porn games to provide actual porn. Reminder...you can actually turn the music off guys...

Like most of the reviewers here I found the broken English detracted from the game and writing to be average. There is a lot of clicking when you get to the Emerald City but to advance in the training you only have to do it 3 times so it's not overly grindy.
The one thing that I did enjoy was the diverse fetishes throughout the game, the renders were pretty good so that did help with the other problems.
I hope that the dev sticks with it and maybe gets someone to proofread and offer improvements to the English.

The game starts out so awful that it is actually kind of fun. The player never knows what wacky and improbable crap the designers will throw in next. The images are pretty good, but the dialogue and plot are so full of WTF moments that you will play on just to see how silly it can get. And the first part (the quest to get to the Emerald City) is so full of whack that I wasn't even aware that the minigames were actually minigames until I had finished them - I thought that they were just more examples of discontinuous story telling.

All that changes when the MC gets to Emerald City. All the delightful nuttiness and characters disappear and the game turns into the grindiest grind you will ever grind in your grinding career. Work, sleep, work, sleep, work, sleep, train, work, sleep, work, sleep, work, sleep, train, etc for four cycles, then work in the next-higher job and repeat the process. All of the working, sleeping, and training scenes are identical each cycle. Boooooooorrrrrriiiiinnnnngggg.

3/5 for the wacky start, 1/5 for the Emerald City portion.

Good game you never know what will happen next and I love the art. Though something needs to be done about dialogs. There are a lot of them but they are not that interesting. Also, the game shouldn't be called Trainer since there is no training

"Works hard every day"... and yet the app/engine has less features than a flash game ( no options/settings ) AND NO SKIP / ctrl. Very disappointed, had a lot of potential but I'm not hitting space bar 10000 times for a (wanting) story.

This game is starting to be one of my guilty pleasures. It is so bad that it is kind of fun. And that is a big improvement, because when it started it was just bad, really bad.

The main attraction is of course this redhead that looks and talks like a Russian porn star. The title of the game may make you think that you will have to train her to be a slut. There is no need for that. She is a pro, she may as well give the course.

The renders are quite nice, though in my opinion there should be more of them. There is a lot of text with the images not changing at all. And this text is.... not the best part of the game. Like I said, the kind of dialogue a Russian porn star, who hardly speaks any English, would use in a very cheap porn production. So you need to click away a lot of these awkward lines to get to the next image.

Three stars for arguably one of the hottest bodies around and for being a redhead. And for some hardcore porn action. Perhaps more stars in the future if she shuts up.

Great renders, fetishes, etc. Currently, the plot is hurried at best, and doesn't always make sense. Protagonist isn't that well written either, and jumps between "total slut" and "total prude" in a bipolar fashion. May get significantly better in the future.

The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v1.01 Alpha...

One of the dumbest VN/Games I've ever witnessed or read...

The visuals of the characters were a mixed bag of alright to wrong... The backdrops where primarily doctored real life photos and blurred backgrounds...

The script was poorly made, with lots of broken English, some spelling errors, and grammar mistakes... The plot is basically a parody of The Wizard of Oz, with Dorothy being a modern day female protagonist... She was made as a over the top lame brained woman with a terrible sense of awareness, low intelligence, and a foul mouth... I can see the developers were trying to make a funny and raunchy VN/Game, but I didn't really find it funny at all, or sexy... It uses childish attempts at humor, that bordered on the obscene, far more then laughable moments, while trying to throw tiny amounts of nudity and erotica here and there, willy nilly…

The inclusion of some naughty women bits, can not save this one...

Overall, this is one of the dumbest VN/Games I've ever tried... At no time did I find it humorous... And because of how badly it was written, I had to just say "no" about 8 minutes in... I just couldn't continue wasting my time with it... Don't go into the VN/Game thinking it's a decent parody, because it's more a porn nightmare, then erotic or funny... It's obviously an Alpha release, but it could have been handled so completely different then it was...

Good renders, A build so still needs a lot of polish. The story is jumpy and the english is broken. No back story on the MC as to why she does what she does. It starts off a little fast for a trainer game.

v1.01 review

A game has to be particularly awful or terribly broken for me to give it one star. I don't know if it fits the latter, but it certainly fits the former. I really couldn't make it more than a few minutes into this game before closing it in disgust. I'd like to say it's something easily fixable, like the grainy and not very good looking graphics, the unchangeable MAXIMUM VOLUME sound that I couldn't change, or the atrociously broken English, both in spelling and grammar. But it might have also been the terrible writing too, I just couldn't say. In truth it was probably a combination of all of them.

All I can say is that sometimes a game shows some promise through it's flaws and I'll try to check it out at a later date. I don't think that's the case with this one unless it gets some major revisions and proof reading.